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Message de mel2401 posté le 10-10-2012 à 23:26:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici la suite de mon précédent post
Video mixing black and white and color. We can discern several parts: the band that plays music, children playing war and armed soldiers, black and white, all in a city that seems devastated by war, and a scene with the singer covered paint before a large golden cross with children, also gilded, armed with bows and arrows. All these scenes perfectly illustrate the themes that are developed in the lyrics: family, religion, war, violence and death.
Close-ups of their faces also show their pain and cries, and the fact that they are armed with bow and arrow may mean that the pain of the people is primarily caused by children, by their suffering and their disappearances but also their indoctrination.
Conclusion :
This work is so clearly and unambiguously committed against violence in Northern Ireland which were still raging at the time of the song, highlighting the tear families, denouncing the "brainwashing" which have been the When British soldiers but children growing up in a climate of violence.So we can obviously say that this song is mainly a call for peace.
Merci à tous ceux qui m'aideront à trouver mes erreurs. Bonne soirée
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-10-2012 09:02
Message de mel2401 posté le 10-10-2012 à 23:26:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici la suite de mon précédent post
Video mixing black and white and color. We can discern several parts: the band that plays music, children playing war and armed soldiers, black and white, all in a city that seems devastated by war, and a scene with the singer covered paint before a large golden cross with children, also gilded, armed with bows and arrows. All these scenes perfectly illustrate the themes that are developed in the lyrics: family, religion, war, violence and death.
Close-ups of their faces also show their pain and cries, and the fact that they are armed with bow and arrow may mean that the pain of the people is primarily caused by children, by their suffering and their disappearances but also their indoctrination.
Conclusion :
This work is so clearly and unambiguously committed against violence in Northern Ireland which were still raging at the time of the song, highlighting the tear families, denouncing the "brainwashing" which have been the When British soldiers but children growing up in a climate of violence.So we can obviously say that this song is mainly a call for peace.
Merci à tous ceux qui m'aideront à trouver mes erreurs. Bonne soirée
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-10-2012 09:02
Réponse: Correction/suite de notrepere, postée le 10-10-2012 à 23:32:59 (S | E)
BonjourVideo mixing black and white and color. We can discern several parts: the band that plays music (a band playing music), children playing war and armed soldiers, black and white, all in a city that seems devastated by war, and a scene with the singer covered
(preposition) paint before a large golden cross with children, also gilded, armed with bows and arrows. All these scenes perfectly illustrate the themes that are developed in the lyrics: family, religion, war, violence and death.Close-ups of their faces also show their pain and cries, and the fact that they are armed with bows and arrows may mean that the pain of the people is primarily caused by children, by their suffering and their disappearances but also their indoctrination.
Conclusion :
This work is so clearly and unambiguously committed
(un autre verbe) against violence in Northern Ireland which were(accorde: violence) still raging at the time of the song, highlighting the tear families
, denouncing the "brainwashing" which have been the When British soldiers(cet extrait n'a aucun sens) but children growing up in a climate of violence.So we can obviously say that this song is mainly a call for peace.Réponse: Correction/suite de mel2401, postée le 10-10-2012 à 23:52:36 (S | E)
Bonsoir, merci beaucoup pour ta réponse mais il y a certaines chose dont je ne suis encore pas sure. Voici ce que j'ai tenté de corriger :
Video mixing black and white and color. We can discern several parts: the band playing music, children playing war and armed soldiers, black and white, all in a city that seems devastated by war, and a scene with the singer covered of paint before a large golden cross with children, also gilded, armed with bows and arrows. All these scenes perfectly illustrate the themes that are developed in the lyrics: family, religion, war, violence and death.
Close-ups of their faces also show their pain and cries, and the fact that they are armed with bows and arrow may mean that the pain of the people is primarily caused by children, by their suffering and their disappearances but also their indoctrination.
Conclusion :
This work is so clearly and unambiguously engaged against violence in Northern Ireland which was still raging at the time of the song, highlighting the sadness of families , denouncing the "brainwashing" of children growing up in a climate of violence.So we can obviously say that this song is mainly a call for peace.
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Modifié par mel2401 le 11-10-2012 00:30
Réponse: Correction/suite de notrepere, postée le 11-10-2012 à 00:38:11 (S | E)
HelloHere's your answer regarding: covered... Lien internet
This work is so clearly and unambiguously positioned against violence
or you can simply say: This song is so clearly and unambiguously against violence...
Réponse: Correction/suite de mel2401, postée le 11-10-2012 à 01:10:19 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
J'ai compris ^^Bonne soirée
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