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Message de sema96 posté le 24-09-2012 à 21:21:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
j'aurai besoin de votre aide s'il vous plaît.
Serait-ce possible de vérifier si mon texte est correctement écrit?
Merci pour vos réponses.
From: Fiona
To: xxx
I'm sorry if I was not able to give news earlier, it is only now that I was able to connect to give you my news
However, because the donated books are limited in number and the settlements are many, the library initiates a terms: if anyone fails to return a book, the bookmobile will stop coming. Though my motives are good, I don’t understand the people I want to help.
Anyway, it is a meaningful experience that everyone should live at least once in his life. I have no regrets.
It's been six months since I'm here, and I enjoy every moment here, enjoy the traditions and the children. I try as best I can to teach children to read even if it takes a long time. It’s very difficult here with mosquitoes and all kinds of beasts but I stay positive.
I am looking forward to seeing you. I hope to hear from you soon. I hope you are well and my brothers and sisters too. See you soon my friends.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-09-2012 21:40
Message de sema96 posté le 24-09-2012 à 21:21:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
j'aurai besoin de votre aide s'il vous plaît.
Serait-ce possible de vérifier si mon texte est correctement écrit?
Merci pour vos réponses.
From: Fiona
To: xxx
I'm sorry if I was not able to give news earlier, it is only now that I was able to connect to give you my news
However, because the donated books are limited in number and the settlements are many, the library initiates a terms: if anyone fails to return a book, the bookmobile will stop coming. Though my motives are good, I don’t understand the people I want to help.
Anyway, it is a meaningful experience that everyone should live at least once in his life. I have no regrets.
It's been six months since I'm here, and I enjoy every moment here, enjoy the traditions and the children. I try as best I can to teach children to read even if it takes a long time. It’s very difficult here with mosquitoes and all kinds of beasts but I stay positive.
I am looking forward to seeing you. I hope to hear from you soon. I hope you are well and my brothers and sisters too. See you soon my friends.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-09-2012 21:40
Réponse: Send an email/correction de notrepere, postée le 25-09-2012 à 03:54:52 (S | E)
HelloI'm sorry if I was not able to give news earlier, it is only now that I was able to connect to give you my news.
However, because the donated books are limited in number and the settlements are many (there are many settlements/villages), the library initiates (temps de conséquence) the following terms: if anyone fails to return a book, the bookmobile will stop coming. Though my motives are good, I don’t understand the people I want to help. (sans plus de contexte, je ne comprends pas le sens)
Anyway, it is a meaningful experience that everyone should try at least once in his life. I have no regrets.
It's been six months since I'm here (temps), and I enjoy (temps ; il faut present +ing ou parfait) every moment here, enjoy the traditions and the children. I try as best I can to teach children to read even if it takes a long time. It’s very difficult here with mosquitoes and all kinds of beasts but I stay positive.
I am looking forward to seeing you. I hope to hear from you soon. I hope you are well and my brothers and sisters too. See you soon my friends.
Réponse: Send an email/correction de sema96, postée le 25-09-2012 à 08:45:34 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup.
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