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Message de hajaroug posté le 23-09-2012 à 13:32:25 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger mon devoir?
- répondre à une lettrepar citer en donnant de tes nouvelles à une amie.
J'ai fait la lettre mais j'ai besoin de quelqu'un pour corriger mes fautes.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Voici la lettre :
Dear Paula,
I got your lovely letter. It was kind of you to write to me. And your family souds great too.
I have so much to tell you. This summer, I was working out to lose some weight with a professional trainer. Because i've been over-weight since 8 years, so i decided to take risks and change my physic.That's why, i hadn't written you before. I will send you a photo of the new me.
My parents are very proud of me, so they bought me a bring new car, and they rent me an apartment. Because i'm moving out, to study biology in Rabat. What about you ?
I will wait your letter with impatience, to tell me about your summer.
Julie.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-09-2012 13:44
Message de hajaroug posté le 23-09-2012 à 13:32:25 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît à corriger mon devoir?
- répondre à une lettre
J'ai fait la lettre mais j'ai besoin de quelqu'un pour corriger mes fautes.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Voici la lettre :
Dear Paula,
I got your lovely letter. It was kind of you to write to me. And your family souds great too.
I have so much to tell you. This summer, I was working out to lose some weight with a professional trainer. Because i've been over-weight since 8 years, so i decided to take risks and change my physic.That's why, i hadn't written you before. I will send you a photo of the new me.
My parents are very proud of me, so they bought me a bring new car, and they rent me an apartment. Because i'm moving out, to study biology in Rabat. What about you ?
I will wait your letter with impatience, to tell me about your summer.
Julie.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-09-2012 13:44
Réponse: Lettre /correction de notrepere, postée le 23-09-2012 à 17:08:29 (S | E)
HelloDear Paula,
I got your lovely letter. It was kind of you to write to me. And your family souds
(orthographe) great too.I have so much to tell you. This summer, I was working out to lose some weight (placer après with a professional trainer) with a professional trainer. Because i've been over-weight since
8 years, so (inutile) i decided to take risks and change my physic(orthographe).That's why, i haven't written you before. I will send you a photo of the new me.My parents are very proud of me, so they bought me a bring
(brand?) new car, and they rent(forme +ing) me an apartment because i'm moving out, to study biology in Rabat. What about you?Julie
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Modifié par notrepere le 23-09-2012 17:09
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