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Message de lol1233 posté le 24-05-2012 à 16:29:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
(je suis nouvelle donc excusez-moi si mon sujet est mal placé); j'ai un dossier en anglais à rendre pour demain.
Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes d'orthographe s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Day 1:
I was next to Elisa and Filipa, I listen to music and chatting.
Day 2:
We left Calais to Douvre, we went to Oxford, we visited Christ church college, a guide shown we other colleges in the town of Oxford there are 38 colleges was fondated are the 18 century.
The students lives in the college, in a building near rooms and he students must to lives in a little room, This is library, we sown many colleges.
After, we picnic in a park.
Afternoon, we went to the museum of natural history. We sow many dead animals. We saw dinosaur's bones. We saw precious stones insects: a tarantula...
After, we met the english family. We took a cold and very hot shower and we slept.
Day 3:
We visited the garden and we saw the sculptures. We went to the maze, we didn't lost!
After we had walking in the forest. It was beautiful! In the bedrooms, the bed is the pride of the family. We learnt the spound was the most important object of the english people.
Afternoon:
we visited the shakes Peare's birth place, we saw the bedroom, eating-room, we saw a window where english people writed a with little thinks. We saw the Shakes Peare's clad's working room. We had leis ure time and we visited the shop of the street. Lea had says: “I had never drink milk-shakes!”
Day 4:
We visited the cadbury chocolate fabrication. They gave us some chocolate it was delicious! They had do reconstitution of the Amazon forest. We sow now make chocolate and cacao better. We rose the little train in the country of the caco bean.
Afternoon:
We went to the Wawick castle, we saw a rapacious show we saw a owl, two eagles: the daughter and the mother; and a bird who come from to Russia.
We visited a kings castle there was knight monks, valet. After we visited Daisy countess of worwick's castle. We visited the garden to the flats it was beautiful!!! We played in the children's plays. It was funny!
Day 5:
we visited the Chelsea Stadium. We rise on the tribunes. We saw the lawn, the V.I.P places and for the chelsea fans we saw the visitor's cloakroom and Chelsea team's cloakroom. There was beds for massage player's jersey and locker. Thoma's who is a Chelsea team's fan sat on the shoals. He was very happy. We saw the interview room too.
Afternoon:
We did a cruise on the Thames, we saw the London eye, Big Ben, London Bridge...
After, we went to the national Gallery, we saw lots of pictures from Vincent Van Gogh.
Day 6:
Morning:
We mounted in the boat, with Elisa, Romarine, Manon, Laura and me. We were not very strong but we were a very good team!!!
Afternoon:
I love the leisure time! I bought many clothes, accessories and we ate at...... Burger King! It's was delicious!
Désolée si mon sujet est mal formulé, je suis nouvelle il faut que je m'habitue.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2012 19:01
Message de lol1233 posté le 24-05-2012 à 16:29:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
(je suis nouvelle donc excusez-moi si mon sujet est mal placé); j'ai un dossier en anglais à rendre pour demain.
Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes d'orthographe s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Day 1:
I was next to Elisa and Filipa, I listen to music and chatting.
Day 2:
We left Calais to Douvre, we went to Oxford, we visited Christ church college, a guide shown we other colleges in the town of Oxford there are 38 colleges was fondated are the 18 century.
The students lives in the college, in a building near rooms and he students must to lives in a little room, This is library, we sown many colleges.
After, we picnic in a park.
Afternoon, we went to the museum of natural history. We sow many dead animals. We saw dinosaur's bones. We saw precious stones insects: a tarantula...
After, we met the english family. We took a cold and very hot shower and we slept.
Day 3:
We visited the garden and we saw the sculptures. We went to the maze, we didn't lost!
After we had walking in the forest. It was beautiful! In the bedrooms, the bed is the pride of the family. We learnt the spound was the most important object of the english people.
Afternoon:
we visited the shakes Peare's birth place, we saw the bedroom, eating-room, we saw a window where english people writed a with little thinks. We saw the Shakes Peare's clad's working room. We had leis ure time and we visited the shop of the street. Lea had says: “I had never drink milk-shakes!”
Day 4:
We visited the cadbury chocolate fabrication. They gave us some chocolate it was delicious! They had do reconstitution of the Amazon forest. We sow now make chocolate and cacao better. We rose the little train in the country of the caco bean.
Afternoon:
We went to the Wawick castle, we saw a rapacious show we saw a owl, two eagles: the daughter and the mother; and a bird who come from to Russia.
We visited a kings castle there was knight monks, valet. After we visited Daisy countess of worwick's castle. We visited the garden to the flats it was beautiful!!! We played in the children's plays. It was funny!
Day 5:
we visited the Chelsea Stadium. We rise on the tribunes. We saw the lawn, the V.I.P places and for the chelsea fans we saw the visitor's cloakroom and Chelsea team's cloakroom. There was beds for massage player's jersey and locker. Thoma's who is a Chelsea team's fan sat on the shoals. He was very happy. We saw the interview room too.
Afternoon:
We did a cruise on the Thames, we saw the London eye, Big Ben, London Bridge...
After, we went to the national Gallery, we saw lots of pictures from Vincent Van Gogh.
Day 6:
Morning:
We mounted in the boat, with Elisa, Romarine, Manon, Laura and me. We were not very strong but we were a very good team!!!
Afternoon:
I love the leisure time! I bought many clothes, accessories and we ate at...... Burger King! It's was delicious!
Désolée si mon sujet est mal formulé, je suis nouvelle il faut que je m'habitue.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2012 19:01
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