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Message de sandria posté le 09-05-2012 à 18:49:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider et me dire si ma description est bonne, s'il faut modifier, ajouter, enlever des choses dans ma description et si mon anglais est bon, s'il y a des fautes dans les mots en anglais, dans la grammaire, la conjugaison ... s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses..
Sujet : Décrire et analyser l'image suivante
Lien internet
Aide : Parler des couleurs, de la lumière, du mouvement, des personnages, des formes. On peut aussi dire : "at the top left- hand corner", "at the top", "the middle", "the focus", "the bottom", " at the bottom left hand corner" , " left hand side", the right hand side" ....
Voici ma description :
This document is a photo.
The scene takes place in Times Square , a famous district in New York. There are a lot of advertisements, tourists buses and cars.
There is a great representation of different people living or visiting this center of the world.
We can see many people in the foreground. Two young individuals with a red tee-shirt are crossing the street while talking about . On their right, an older man with glasses wears a light blue shirt and a black trousers, he seems to be in a hurry. Maybe he works in a office. Behind them, a black car allows a father and his baby to cross the street. The father wears short pants therefore we can think that the weather is fine. We can see in the foreground the face of a young asian woman in profile.
A red bus runs on the roadway. It transports tourists who want visit New York. The “New York Sightseeing” buses are specialists in this field.
In the foreground we can distinguish taxis , well-known for their yellow colour and a red traffic light.
In the background we can see that there are traffic jam.
The skyscrapers are omnipresent in the background, they are everywhere in the city. We can also see the buildings.
American technology can be felt through the many advertisements : photography, music, camera, cinema... of multinational corporations as Kodak, Maxell and Planet Hollywood adorning the Time Square walls. The Planet Hollywood indicates that we observe a famous street.
In conclusion, Time Square is a modern district in New York City . That photograph perfectly illustrates the American life and the present world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-05-2012 21:08
Message de sandria posté le 09-05-2012 à 18:49:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider et me dire si ma description est bonne, s'il faut modifier, ajouter, enlever des choses dans ma description et si mon anglais est bon, s'il y a des fautes dans les mots en anglais, dans la grammaire, la conjugaison ... s'il vous plait.
Merci pour vos réponses..
Sujet : Décrire et analyser l'image suivante
Lien internet
Aide : Parler des couleurs, de la lumière, du mouvement, des personnages, des formes. On peut aussi dire : "at the top left- hand corner", "at the top", "the middle", "the focus", "the bottom", " at the bottom left hand corner" , " left hand side", the right hand side" ....
Voici ma description :
This document is a photo.
The scene takes place in Times Square , a famous district in New York. There are a lot of advertisements, tourists buses and cars.
There is a great representation of different people living or visiting this center of the world.
We can see many people in the foreground. Two young individuals with a red tee-shirt are crossing the street while talking about . On their right, an older man with glasses wears a light blue shirt and a black trousers, he seems to be in a hurry. Maybe he works in a office. Behind them, a black car allows a father and his baby to cross the street. The father wears short pants therefore we can think that the weather is fine. We can see in the foreground the face of a young asian woman in profile.
A red bus runs on the roadway. It transports tourists who want visit New York. The “New York Sightseeing” buses are specialists in this field.
In the foreground we can distinguish taxis , well-known for their yellow colour and a red traffic light.
In the background we can see that there are traffic jam.
The skyscrapers are omnipresent in the background, they are everywhere in the city. We can also see the buildings.
American technology can be felt through the many advertisements : photography, music, camera, cinema... of multinational corporations as Kodak, Maxell and Planet Hollywood adorning the Time Square walls. The Planet Hollywood indicates that we observe a famous street.
In conclusion, Time Square is a modern district in New York City . That photograph perfectly illustrates the American life and the present world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-05-2012 21:08
Réponse: Description/ image de sherry48, postée le 09-05-2012 à 20:32:52 (S | E)
Hello.
This document is a photo.
The scene takes place in Time Square (Check this name again.) , a famous district in New York. There are a lot of advertisements, tourists buses and cars.
There is a great representation of different people living or visiting this center of the world.
We can see many people in the foreground. Two young individuals with a red tee-shirt are crossing the street while talking about
. On their right, an older man with glasses wears a light blue shirt and a black trousers, he seems to be in a hurry. Maybe he works in a office. Behind them, a black car allows a father and his baby to cross the street. The father wears short pants therefore we can think that the weather is fine. We can see in the foreground the face of a young asian woman in profile.A red bus runs on the roadway. It transports tourists who want _ visit New York. The “New York Sightseeing” buses are specialists in this field.
In the foreground we can distinguish taxis , well-known for their yellow colour and a red traffic light.
In the background we can see that there are
_ traffic jam.The skyscrapers are omnipresent in the background, they are everywhere in the city. We can also see the buildings.
American technology can be felt through the many advertisements : photography, music, camera, cinema... of multinational corporations _ as Kodak, Maxell and Planet Hollywood adorning the Time Square walls. The Planet Hollywood _ indicates that we observe
a famous street.In conclusion, Time Square is a modern district in New York City . That
photograph perfectly illustrates the American life and the present world.Sherry
Réponse: Description/ image de sandria, postée le 10-05-2012 à 00:39:42 (S | E)
Merci. Donc voici ma description :
This document is a photo.
The scene takes place in Square Time, a famous district in New York. There are a lot of advertisements, tourist buses and cars.
There is a great representation of different people living or visiting this center of the world.
We can see many people in the foreground. Two young individuals with red tee-shirt are crossing the street while talking . On their right, an older man with glasses wear light blue shirt and black trousers, he is seems to be in a hurry. Maybe he works in an office. Behind them, a black car allows a father and his baby to cross the street. The father wears short pants therefore maybe that the weather is fine. We can see in the foreground the face of a young asian woman in profile.
A red bus runs on the roadway. It transports tourists who want _ visit New York. The “New York Sightseeing” buses are specialists in this field.
In the foreground we can distinguish taxis , well-known for their yellow colour and a red traffic light.
In the background we can see that there is a traffic jam.
The skyscrapers are omnipresent in the background, they are everywhere in the city. We can also see the buildings.
American technology can be felt through the many advertisements : photography, music, camera, cinema... of multinational corporations _ as Kodak, Maxell and Planet Hollywood adorning the Time Square walls. The Planet Hollywood is indicates that we observe a famous street.
In conclusion, Square Time is a modern district in New York City . The photograph perfectly illustrates the American life and the present world.
Réponse: Description/ image de sherry48, postée le 10-05-2012 à 04:23:50 (S | E)
Hello. Some parts are better. However the location is named for the newspaper, The New York Times.
Two young individuals with red tee-shirt --2 people with 1 tee-shirt?
On their right, an older man with glasses wear (use ing)(put back the a) light blue shirt and black trousers, he is (you had it right without is) seems to be in a hurry. (You can make this 2 separate sentences, with 2 different subjects or the subject for seems can be an older man...either will work).
The father wears
(be+verb+ing) short pants therefore maybe that the weather is fine/we can think that the weather is fine. I prefer the way you had it the first time, except change the word think. We can see in the foreground the face of a young asian
woman in profile. Origins by continent as well as nation start with a capital letter.It transports tourists who want _ visit (infinitive)
... of multinational corporations _ as ... (for example/including/such as)
The Planet Hollywood is
indicates (You already have a verb...go back to the original...Planet Hollywood indicates that we observebe+verb+ingSherry
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