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Lettre motivation/épreuve
Message de pekzy posté le 07-05-2012 à 20:49:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je m'appelle Hugo et je suis actuellement en 3ème.Je participe au concour "Anglais TOP" de mon futur lycée. J'ai une épreuve écrite et orale en plus d'une lettre de motivation. En ce qui concèrne cette dernière, je n'ai pas eu beaucoup d'information quant à son contenu. Pouvez-vous me faire part de vos idées d'améliorations et ou de vos corrections.
Dear Mrs. Davies,
First of all let me introduce myself : my name is Hugo XXXXXXXXXX, i'm from XXXXXXXX near Paris. I'm fourteen.I'm currently studying at college xxxx.
I am interested in new technologies,particularly computer. I also love music, besides I have been learning the guitar for four years.I enjoy looking movies and TV series in english without subtitles, for training my english often.
Last year, I came to Bembridge, a village in the Isle of Wight (England), three weeks during the holidays, it was fantastic!
As you can see, I want to run for "Anglais TOP", because it seems to me to be the best way to improve my english while sharing with people with a good level of english. I would be prepared to work hard although english remains above all a passion for me.
Yours sincerely.
Merci d'avance,
Hugo.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-05-2012 22:59
Message de pekzy posté le 07-05-2012 à 20:49:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je m'appelle Hugo et je suis actuellement en 3ème.Je participe au concour "Anglais TOP" de mon futur lycée. J'ai une épreuve écrite et orale en plus d'une lettre de motivation. En ce qui concèrne cette dernière, je n'ai pas eu beaucoup d'information quant à son contenu. Pouvez-vous me faire part de vos idées d'améliorations et ou de vos corrections.
Dear Mrs. Davies,
First of all let me introduce myself : my name is Hugo XXXXXXXXXX, i'm from XXXXXXXX near Paris. I'm fourteen.I'm currently studying at college xxxx.
I am interested in new technologies,particularly computer. I also love music, besides I have been learning the guitar for four years.I enjoy looking movies and TV series in english without subtitles, for training my english often.
Last year, I came to Bembridge, a village in the Isle of Wight (England), three weeks during the holidays, it was fantastic!
As you can see, I want to run for "Anglais TOP", because it seems to me to be the best way to improve my english while sharing with people with a good level of english. I would be prepared to work hard although english remains above all a passion for me.
Yours sincerely.
Merci d'avance,
Hugo.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-05-2012 22:59
Réponse: Lettre motivation/épreuve de notrepere, postée le 08-05-2012 à 05:32:08 (S | E)
HelloDear Mrs. (le point existe seulement en anglais américain) Davies,
First of all let me introduce myself : my name is Hugo XXXXXXXXXX, i'm from XXXXXXXX near Paris. I'm fourteen.I'm currently studying at xxx college.
I am interested in new technologies, particularly computers. I also love music,
(pas le bon verbe) movies and TV series in english without subtitles, for training my english often (construction à revoir).Last year, I came
to Bembridge, a village in(mauvaise préposition) the Isle of Wight (England), for three weeks during the holidays, it was fantastic!As you can see, I want to run for "Anglais TOP", because it seems to me to be the best way to improve my english while sharing with people with a good level of english. I would be prepared to work hard although english remains above all a passion for me.
Yours sincerely.
Le mot 'english' n'existe pas. Il faut 'English'.
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