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Message de callmedaddy posté le 05-05-2012 à 14:07:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un petit souci, je dois faire une présentation de moi en anglais et je voudrais savoir s'il vous plaît où se trouvent mes erreurs dans mon texte, merci d'avance!
Hello
My name is Nicolas, i m apprentice since four years and I’m loving it. I m 23 olds. Before have begin my BEP electrotechnic I had working in temporary employee during one year, and then I had wanted take back my studies, principally because without more knowledge we can t evolve, and have a better work.I had never regret my decision.
In my life I like kite surf, to travel, friends and family. During this last years, I m gone to London two times. This city is awesome; the people are sociable and opened by spirit. Maybe I think in any years I will go live here.
Merci pour vos réponses
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2012 15:42
Message de callmedaddy posté le 05-05-2012 à 14:07:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un petit souci, je dois faire une présentation de moi en anglais et je voudrais savoir s'il vous plaît où se trouvent mes erreurs dans mon texte, merci d'avance!
Hello
My name is Nicolas, i m apprentice since four years and I’m loving it. I m 23 olds. Before have begin my BEP electrotechnic I had working in temporary employee during one year, and then I had wanted take back my studies, principally because without more knowledge we can t evolve, and have a better work.I had never regret my decision.
In my life I like kite surf, to travel, friends and family. During this last years, I m gone to London two times. This city is awesome; the people are sociable and opened by spirit. Maybe I think in any years I will go live here.
Merci pour vos réponses
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2012 15:42
Réponse: Correction/présentation de sherry48, postée le 05-05-2012 à 15:46:32 (S | E)
Hello.
* means there is a word missing
My name is Nicolas, i m
* apprentice since four years and I’m lovingit. I m 23 * olds. Before have begin my BEP electrotechnic I had working in * temporary employee during one year, and then I had wanted take back (a 1 word synonym would go better here) my studies, principally because without more knowledge we can t evolve, and have a better work.I had never regret my decision.In my life I like kite surf, to travel, friends and family. (Add a verb before 'friends', and use verbs ending in ing or the infinitive).
During this last years, I m gone to London two times. (There is another word that means the same). This city is awesome; the people are sociable and opened by spirit. Maybe I think (start with I think)in any
years I will go * live here.Have a nice weekend.
Sherry
Réponse: Correction/présentation de callmedaddy, postée le 08-05-2012 à 16:39:43 (S | E)
Bonjour, je comprends la petite étoile mais pas les points d’exclamation, si vous pouviez m'expliquer, merci!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2012 17:13
Réponse: Correction/présentation de lucile83, postée le 08-05-2012 à 17:16:44 (S | E)
Hello,
= il y a une faute Réponse: Correction/présentation de callmedaddy, postée le 08-05-2012 à 20:31:55 (S | E)
Bonjour,
ok, est-ce que vous pourriez directement me corriger parce-que je dois rendre cela pour demain et je n'y arrive pas tout seul, à la limite voilà ce que j'arrive à faire :
My name is Nicolas, i m an apprentice since four years and I’m loving it. I m 23 years olds. Before have begin my BEP electrotechnic I had working in * temporary employee during one year, and then I wanted resume my studies, principally because without more knowledge we can t evolve, and have a better work.I never regreted my decision.
In my life I like practice kite surf, to travel, past time with my friends and my family.
During this last years, I went to London two times. (There is another word that means the same). I think that this city is awesome and the people are sociable and opened by spirit.I think that maybe I will go to live here.
Merci encore pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-05-2012 21:12
Réponse: Correction/présentation de lucile83, postée le 08-05-2012 à 21:09:16 (S | E)
Hello,
Quand vous aurez corrigé les fautes signalées par sherry dans un post précédent, nous pourrons continuer à travailler ensemble
merci.Réponse: Correction/présentation de sherry48, postée le 08-05-2012 à 22:10:30 (S | E)
Hello.
My name is Nicolas, i m an apprentice since four years and I’m loving it. I m (punctuation) 23 years olds. Before have begin my BEP electrotechnic I had working in * temporary employee during one year, and then I wanted resume (infinitive) my studies, principally because without more knowledge we can t (punctuation) evolve, and have a better work (I would change the verb--trouver, and use another word for work).I never regreted my decision.
In my life I like practice (infinitive) kite surf,(verb ends in ing) (to) travel, past time with my friends and my family. ( use the verb spend)
During this last years, (agreement...this is singular, years is plural)I went to London two times. (There is another word that means the same). I think that this city is awesome and the people are sociable and opened by spirit.( You can change this or use a hyphenated word, but if you do that, the ed goes on spirit)I think that maybe I will go to live here (Wrong word....Here in France[close] or _ _ _ _ _ in England [far away]).
verb tense or wrong verb
wrong preposition
spelling
I may have missed something, but I'm short on time today. I'm sure someone else can tell you if I have missed anything. Sherry
Réponse: Correction/présentation de callmedaddy, postée le 09-05-2012 à 06:16:07 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup Sherry c'est bien plus clair pour moi! je t'enverrai ma correction dès lors qu'elle sera faite!
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Modifié par callmedaddy le 09-05-2012 07:09
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