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Message de jozo10 posté le 11-04-2012 à 15:31:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis nouveau sur le site et je ne suis pas trés bon en anglais
J'ai un exercice dans lequel je dois reécrire un énoncé en utilisant la voix passive. Je l'ai fait et j'aimerais que vous me le corrigiez s'il vous plaît.
L'énoncé:
In britain an increasing number of CCTV cameras spy upon passers-by. Yet statistics have not proved the efficiency of the system against terrorism. And the extension of surveillance to other places worries more and more citizens. they feel that the systems threatens the right to privacy. Civil rights associations criticize authorities for this extensive use of CCTV cameras.
Ce que j'ai fait:
Passers-by are spy uponed by cameras of CCTV in briain an increasing numbers.
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have been not proved by yet statistic.
Citizens more and more are worried by the extension of surveillance to other place.
The right to privacy is threatens by they feel that the system.
Authorities fot this extensive use of CCTV cameras are criticized by civil rights associations.
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-04-2012 16:31
Message de jozo10 posté le 11-04-2012 à 15:31:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis nouveau sur le site et je ne suis pas trés bon en anglais
J'ai un exercice dans lequel je dois reécrire un énoncé en utilisant la voix passive. Je l'ai fait et j'aimerais que vous me le corrigiez s'il vous plaît.
L'énoncé:
In britain an increasing number of CCTV cameras spy upon passers-by. Yet statistics have not proved the efficiency of the system against terrorism. And the extension of surveillance to other places worries more and more citizens. they feel that the systems threatens the right to privacy. Civil rights associations criticize authorities for this extensive use of CCTV cameras.
Ce que j'ai fait:
Passers-by are spy uponed by cameras of CCTV in briain an increasing numbers.
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have been not proved by yet statistic.
Citizens more and more are worried by the extension of surveillance to other place.
The right to privacy is threatens by they feel that the system.
Authorities fot this extensive use of CCTV cameras are criticized by civil rights associations.
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-04-2012 16:31
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de gerondif, postée le 11-04-2012 à 15:43:44 (S | E)
Bonjour
Passers-by are spy uponed(vous conjuguez la préposition) by cameras of CCTV in briain an increasing numbers.(mal placé)
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have(singulier) been not proved by yet(mal placé) statistic.
Citizens are more and more (s'appliquait à citizens au départ)worried by the extension of surveillance to other places.
The right to privacy is threatens by they feel that (n'a rien à faire là)the system.
Authorities for this extensive use of CCTV cameras (mal placé)are criticized by civil rights associations.
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de headway, postée le 11-04-2012 à 15:49:03 (S | E)
Bonjour,
"Passers-by are spy uponed by cameras of CCTV in briain an increasing numbers. Petite erreur ici, c'est le verbe que vous devez accorder.
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have been not proved by yet statistic." Le sujet est au singulier, accordez le verbe en conséquence et la négation n'est pas à la bonne place.
Headway
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de jozo10, postée le 11-04-2012 à 16:08:50 (S | E)
D'accord merci de vos réponses
je reprends:
Passers-by are spied upon by an increasing cameras of CCTV in britain.
They feel that The right to privacy is threatens by the system.
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have been not yet proved by statistic.
est-ce correct ?
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de willy, postée le 11-04-2012 à 16:48:23 (S | E)
Hello!
L'ordre des mots est incorrect dans les 4 phrases.
Il manque des mots dans la première.
"threatens"
"have" ?
Comprends-tu le sens des phrases ?
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de gerondif, postée le 11-04-2012 à 16:50:36 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je crois que vous manipulez les phrases sans comprendre ce qu'elles veulent dire.
Passers-by are spied upon by an increasing(manquent deux mots: un grand nombre de) cameras of CCTV in britain.
They feel that The right to privacy is threatens(participe passé!) by the system.
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have(singulier!!) been not yet proved (dans le désordre)by statistics.
Authorities for this extensive use of CCTV cameras (mal placé)are criticized by civil rights associations.
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de headway, postée le 11-04-2012 à 16:53:52 (S | E)
Bonjour,
"D'accord merci de vos réponses
je reprends:
Passers-by are spied upon by an increasing cameras of CCTV in britain.Ok.
They feel that The right to privacy is threatens by the system. incorrect.
Il faut que vous écriviez: est menacé. Vous avez écrit: menace
The efficiency of the system against terrorism have been not yet proved by statistic. Vous n'avez rien corrigé ici.
Efficiency= it, faites le bon accord.
not n'est pas à la bonne place: I have not been to South Africa yet.
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de jozo10, postée le 11-04-2012 à 17:41:28 (S | E)
Je recommence
Passers-by are spied upon by an increasing number of CCTV cameras in britain.
They feel that The right to privacy is threatened by the system.
The efficiency of the system against terrorism has not been yet proved by statistic.
Authorities are criticized by civil rights associations for this extensive use of CCTV cameras.
Au début je ne comprenais pas le sens des phrases maintenant c'est un peu mieux.
Réponse: Enoncé/voix passive de gerondif, postée le 11-04-2012 à 20:13:15 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je recommence
Passers-by are spied upon by an increasing number of CCTV cameras in Britain. ok
They feel that The right to privacy is threatened by the system. ok
The efficiency of the system against terrorism has not been yet(à mettre en fin de phrase) proved by statisticS(avec un S).
Authorities are criticized by civil rights associations for this extensive use of CCTV cameras. ok
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