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Message de wushu posté le 26-03-2012 à 12:04:07 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I must do a work for a meeting and I want to correct my text with you, thank you very much.
See you soon
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PS: I gave you just my answers in this meeting.
"Hi, guys! How's it going guys?
Well, Vincent says that we should take city plaza hotel up-market, so I think it's a good idea, and you? What do you think?
I'm not quite sure about that we need to reposition the hotel as a budget hotel with either low prices and limited service and the rest because obviously its means that we risk to lose the customers and we not will cash in on a situation.
Moreover, I have got an example of this bad choice, the Millennium Hotel have been choose a reposition his hotel as budget hotel and right now they are going to go bankrupt! This news made the headlines!
But, it's just my own opinion.
In my opinion, I believe we should stay in its present position as a market follower, but improve the hotel. Indeed, the aim is to consolidate our faithfulness customers and attract more people less risk.
In other words, you are saying make our business at a niche market with family groups this is it? But you know, since the beginning our target market is generally business people! Its means, we should change all the advertising campaign and its will cost much money! So, it's not for me!
This is not fake but to return to my option, I propose the complete redecoration of the rooms of our hotel. Thus we would spend an average C$ 12 000 per room. The idea being to give a new birth to our hotel, to create novelty and exclusivity. Consequently, we will satisfy our current customers and we will attract new customers."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-03-2012 18:50
Message de wushu posté le 26-03-2012 à 12:04:07 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I must do a work for a meeting and I want to correct my text with you, thank you very much.
See you soon
!PS: I gave you just my answers in this meeting.
"Hi, guys! How's it going guys?
Well, Vincent says that we should take city plaza hotel up-market, so I think it's a good idea, and you? What do you think?
I'm not quite sure about that we need to reposition the hotel as a budget hotel with either low prices and limited service and the rest because obviously its means that we risk to lose the customers and we not will cash in on a situation.
Moreover, I have got an example of this bad choice, the Millennium Hotel have been choose a reposition his hotel as budget hotel and right now they are going to go bankrupt! This news made the headlines!
But, it's just my own opinion.
In my opinion, I believe we should stay in its present position as a market follower, but improve the hotel. Indeed, the aim is to consolidate our faithfulness customers and attract more people less risk.
In other words, you are saying make our business at a niche market with family groups this is it? But you know, since the beginning our target market is generally business people! Its means, we should change all the advertising campaign and its will cost much money! So, it's not for me!
This is not fake but to return to my option, I propose the complete redecoration of the rooms of our hotel. Thus we would spend an average C$ 12 000 per room. The idea being to give a new birth to our hotel, to create novelty and exclusivity. Consequently, we will satisfy our current customers and we will attract new customers."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-03-2012 18:50
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