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Message de wrath posté le 21-01-2012 à 20:39:40 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je voudrais une petite aidesvp s'il vous plaît. J'ai travaillé sur de la traduction du français vers l'anglais, et je voudrais qu'on me corrige sur les fautes que j'ai pu faire en anglais (texte noir). J'ai une faiblesse notamment sur la traduction de l'imparfait.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
1) Ils étaient ravis : le fils dont ils étaient si fiers avait trouvé du travail. Mais il remarqua que sa soeur avait oublié de le féliciter.
1) They were delighted : The son whose they were so proud had found a job. But he noticed that his sister had forgotten to congratulate him.
2) Ils sont aux antipodes les uns des autres mais elle sait qu'elle peut compter sur eux. Bien que sa décision les bouleverse, ils ne trouveront rien à y redire.
2) They are poles apart but she knows that she can rely on them. Although its decision upset them, they found nothing to say
3) Il est enthousiaste et indépendant alors qu'elle est conventionnelle, amère, frustrée et d'une autre époque.
3) He is enthusiastic and independent whereas she is conventional, bitter, frustrated and behind the times.
4) Il lui est difficile d'affronter la situation sans perturber son mode de vie.
4) It is difficult for him to cope with situation without disrupt one's lifestyle
5) Ils minimisaient l'importance de ses choix et pensait qu'elle remettait tout en cause parce qu'elle voulait affirmer sa personnalité.
5) They was play down the importance of his choices and thought she'd all question because she wanted assert one's personality.
6) Ses parents la confinaient à la maison, mais elle voulait élargir ses horizons, aller à l'étranger, recevoir une formation et accomplir quelque chose.
6) His parents confined her at home, but she wanted broaden one's horizons, go abroad, receiving a formation and achieve something
7) Il était furieux contre elle. Il la trouvait injuste et même parfois grossière.
7) He was furious against her. He found her unfair and sometimes even rude.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-01-2012 21:51
Message de wrath posté le 21-01-2012 à 20:39:40 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je voudrais une petite aide
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
1) Ils étaient ravis : le fils dont ils étaient si fiers avait trouvé du travail. Mais il remarqua que sa soeur avait oublié de le féliciter.
1) They were delighted : The son whose they were so proud had found a job. But he noticed that his sister had forgotten to congratulate him.
2) Ils sont aux antipodes les uns des autres mais elle sait qu'elle peut compter sur eux. Bien que sa décision les bouleverse, ils ne trouveront rien à y redire.
2) They are poles apart but she knows that she can rely on them. Although its decision upset them, they found nothing to say
3) Il est enthousiaste et indépendant alors qu'elle est conventionnelle, amère, frustrée et d'une autre époque.
3) He is enthusiastic and independent whereas she is conventional, bitter, frustrated and behind the times.
4) Il lui est difficile d'affronter la situation sans perturber son mode de vie.
4) It is difficult for him to cope with situation without disrupt one's lifestyle
5) Ils minimisaient l'importance de ses choix et pensait qu'elle remettait tout en cause parce qu'elle voulait affirmer sa personnalité.
5) They was play down the importance of his choices and thought she'd all question because she wanted assert one's personality.
6) Ses parents la confinaient à la maison, mais elle voulait élargir ses horizons, aller à l'étranger, recevoir une formation et accomplir quelque chose.
6) His parents confined her at home, but she wanted broaden one's horizons, go abroad, receiving a formation and achieve something
7) Il était furieux contre elle. Il la trouvait injuste et même parfois grossière.
7) He was furious against her. He found her unfair and sometimes even rude.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-01-2012 21:51
Réponse: Traduction/phrases de sherry48, postée le 21-01-2012 à 23:20:41 (S | E)
Hello wrath.
Take another look at these areas.
1) whose they were so proud
2) its .... (they found nothing to say …Is it complete?)
4) to cope with * situation... disrupt one's
5) was play .... his choices ...she'd all ...she wanted * assert one's
6) His parents ...she wanted * broaden one's ... receiving a formation
7) against
Have a good weekend.
Sherry
Réponse: Traduction/phrases de wrath, postée le 22-01-2012 à 10:59:16 (S | E)
Bonjour,
J'ai effectué des modifications suite à la correction de sherry48.
Est-ce mieux ?
1) They were delighted : The son
2) They are poles apart but she knows that she can rely on them. Although her decision upset them, they found nothing to say (still?)
4) It is difficult for him to cope with the situation without disrupt his lifestyle
5) They
5) je ne vois pas comment changer "she all" (she put all question ?)
6) Her parents confined her at home, but she wanted to broaden one's horizons, go abroad, receive a formation and achieve something
7) He was furious against her. He found her unfair and sometimes even rude.
7) je ne vois pas par quoi peut on remplacer "against"
Réponse: Traduction/phrases de sherry48, postée le 22-01-2012 à 18:12:36 (S | E)
Hello again wrath.
1) They were delighted : The son they were so proud * had found a job. (A preposition is required, either after son or after proud.)
2) What about 'y'?
4) It is difficult for him to cope with the situation without disrupt his lifestyle (Not present tense-what is frequently used in the place of an infinitive?))
5) They played down the importance of his choices and thought she all question because she wanted to assert one's personality. (Whose choices?) (The verb goes after the subject, but not present tense. A synonym for all goes better.)
6) Her parents confined her at home, but she wanted to broaden one's horizons, go abroad, receive a formation (False friend-use the dictionary.) and achieve something (Whose horizons?)
7)Look up 'furieux' in the dictionary.
Have a good evening. Sherry
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