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Correction/Logo d'Apple
Message de baskelise posté le 28-10-2011 à 19:50:11 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'ai écrit un texte sur l'histoire du logo d'Apple, et j'aurais voulu savoir les différentes fautes que j'aurais pu faire surtout sur l'emploi des temps.
Merci d'avance.
Voici mon texte :
The first Apple logo was designed in 1976 by Ronald Wayne, sometimes called the third co-
founder of Apple. The logo illustrates Isaac Newton, physicist, sitting under a tree, an apple falling
down from the tree and fell on his head. On the edge of the drawing is a segment of the poem
Prelude to Willian Wordsworth: « Newton… A mind forever voyaging through strange seas of
thought… alone. ». This logo only lasted one year.
In early 1977, Steve Jobs, one of the founder of Apple, places an order for the designer Rob Janoff.
His mission is to find a modern-looking logo. Rob creates one of the most iconic emblems and most
recognizable in history of the companies : the famous bitten apple. Janoff presents to Steeve
different monochromatics versions of the apple.
However, Jobs insisted for to Apple is coloured as a way to humanize the company, the designer
mixed the order of the colours of the rainbow and to the green is on the top to symbolize the leaf of
apple, these colours can reflect the abilities of Apple II to display colours. Moreover, the apple is
bitten for it is not confused with a tomato. This multicoloured Apple logo has been used for 22
years.
In 1998, the monochromatic logo appeared, it has the advantage to be enough discreet and put on
any part of an Apple product. It was first used in blue with a addition of relief and finally in grey
metal.
5th October 2011, Steve Jobs has died following an illness. He leaves one of the best makes known
in the world with a turnover of 65.23 billion dollars. Recently, a young student created a media
buzz with the new logo who pays tribute to its founder. The fang in the apple is replaced by the
profile of Steve Jobs. Copyright are even claimed.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-10-2011 20:01
Message de baskelise posté le 28-10-2011 à 19:50:11 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'ai écrit un texte sur l'histoire du logo d'Apple, et j'aurais voulu savoir les différentes fautes que j'aurais pu faire surtout sur l'emploi des temps.
Merci d'avance.
Voici mon texte :
The first Apple logo was designed in 1976 by Ronald Wayne, sometimes called the third co-
founder of Apple. The logo illustrates Isaac Newton, physicist, sitting under a tree, an apple falling
down from the tree and fell on his head. On the edge of the drawing is a segment of the poem
Prelude to Willian Wordsworth: « Newton… A mind forever voyaging through strange seas of
thought… alone. ». This logo only lasted one year.
In early 1977, Steve Jobs, one of the founder of Apple, places an order for the designer Rob Janoff.
His mission is to find a modern-looking logo. Rob creates one of the most iconic emblems and most
recognizable in history of the companies : the famous bitten apple. Janoff presents to Steeve
different monochromatics versions of the apple.
However, Jobs insisted for to Apple is coloured as a way to humanize the company, the designer
mixed the order of the colours of the rainbow and to the green is on the top to symbolize the leaf of
apple, these colours can reflect the abilities of Apple II to display colours. Moreover, the apple is
bitten for it is not confused with a tomato. This multicoloured Apple logo has been used for 22
years.
In 1998, the monochromatic logo appeared, it has the advantage to be enough discreet and put on
any part of an Apple product. It was first used in blue with a addition of relief and finally in grey
metal.
5th October 2011, Steve Jobs has died following an illness. He leaves one of the best makes known
in the world with a turnover of 65.23 billion dollars. Recently, a young student created a media
buzz with the new logo who pays tribute to its founder. The fang in the apple is replaced by the
profile of Steve Jobs. Copyright are even claimed.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-10-2011 20:01
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