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Parler de son héros
Message de loulyannie posté le 24-10-2011 à 12:27:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur mon héros ou mon héroïne, je dois utiliser le superlatif et le comparatif de supériorité.
Voilà ce que j'ai fait :
My hero is my dad.
My dad is the person that I most admire. It has always been for me.
Even if my dad is no longer in this world, it is always in my memory.
My dad was a chemist before.
For 10 years he had a disease, but during those 10 years he has always kept the smile.
He was the smartest and nicest men I know.
Together we went to the cinema or expositions.
We watched a lot of film even the movies that scared and we did a lot of activities and games for boys.
My dad was adorable and always made me laugh. He was the most humorous of the family. My dad was always happy and he was unique. My dad was as cool as my mom too.
My dad loved me and I loved him too.
My dad is my hero
Pourriez vous corriger mes erreurs et me donner votre avissvp s'il vous plaît? ?
Merci !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-10-2011 12:47
Message de loulyannie posté le 24-10-2011 à 12:27:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur mon héros ou mon héroïne, je dois utiliser le superlatif et le comparatif de supériorité.
Voilà ce que j'ai fait :
My hero is my dad.
My dad is the person that I most admire. It has always been for me.
Even if my dad is no longer in this world, it is always in my memory.
My dad was a chemist before.
For 10 years he had a disease, but during those 10 years he has always kept the smile.
He was the smartest and nicest men I know.
Together we went to the cinema or expositions.
We watched a lot of film even the movies that scared and we did a lot of activities and games for boys.
My dad was adorable and always made me laugh. He was the most humorous of the family. My dad was always happy and he was unique. My dad was as cool as my mom too.
My dad loved me and I loved him too.
My dad is my hero
Pourriez vous corriger mes erreurs et me donner votre avis
Merci !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-10-2011 12:47
Réponse: Parler de son héros de headway, postée le 24-10-2011 à 15:51:14 (S | E)
Bonjour,
si vous l'aviez fait sans traducteur, cela aurait été mieux.
Cordialement.
Headway.
Réponse: Parler de son héros de dvn44, postée le 24-10-2011 à 16:26:50 (S | E)
Hello,
Ah ! Ces fameux traducteurs en ligne (Grrrrrrr!)
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Bon courage.
Modifié par dvn44 le 24-10-2011 16:32
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-10-2011 18:43
Correction toute faite effacée,sorry!
Réponse: Parler de son héros de notrepere, postée le 24-10-2011 à 17:08:17 (S | E)
HelloHow can anyone learn anything if you do their work for them?
Réponse: Parler de son héros de dvn44, postée le 24-10-2011 à 17:40:01 (S | E)
Hello ,
Maybe to show them that online translators are not helpful !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-10-2011 18:45
They don't care,as long as you do their work for them.
Réponse: Parler de son héros de notrepere, postée le 24-10-2011 à 18:35:55 (S | E)
Hello againI doubt that is what they'll learn. I suggest they'll learn to use an online translator and then hope you're online to correct it for them while they go back to using their ipod, mp3 player or iphone.
Réponse: Parler de son héros de dvn44, postée le 24-10-2011 à 20:09:36 (S | E)
Thank you Lucile for erasing my suggestions, at least I wasn't unhappy about trying to be helpful. From now, I'll be careful not being cheated by all this toe jam that careless teenagers are posting in this forum.
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