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Exposé/Scarf and business
Message de maaathilde posté le 19-10-2011 à 23:03:31
Bonjour,
j'ai un exposé à faire en anglais. Je l'ai préparé, serait-ce possible s'il vous plaît de me corriger ?
Merci d'avance à ceux qui m'aideront .
This scarf multi-use will be useful for you in any situations...
This product was create with various materials:
30 % of cashmere 40 % of cotton 30 % of polyester
In this scarf will be incorporated by several signals colored to choose you even the color that you wish to carry, but also to choose the temperature warmly
Every realized sale will allow our partner associations to receive gifts of your part.
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The concept of this scarf, is to facilitate you the life, and so to propose you a multiple choice of styles. It will facilitate you your everyday life, a saving of time to adapt your scarf to your dresses, but also, thanks to that this you will save that is you will possess that a single scarf for several dresses.
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The family company creates in 2010 already knows a success amazing for these slings of various colors. The company is implanted in United States near New York and spreads since 2011 in the other countries as Russia, Spain, England, and Mexico,
Every company holds a minimum of 150 employees to answer all the demands.
We possess several Scarf Color shops in several cities such as New York, Moscow, Mexico City, Madrid, London.
Our work has for role to create ceaselessly of new concept to satisfy at most our customers and widen our clientele.
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Advantages:
Every personality will find what he/she is looking for in one of our slings thanks to our varied collections.
This scarf will be useful in the change in temperature, no matter the seasons.
She will thus allow you to adapt herself to all dresses, even the most original!
The relatively low price allows to satisfy a large number of persons.
Even with the presence of fragile materials on this scarf, it is all the same possible to wash her
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How to sell?
By advertising, on several radios world-famous and TV commercials.
Thanks to our web sites.
In our selling points.
Thanks to doors opened on every first Sunday of the month in the whole of our factories.
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His price: his price is 70 euro to be accessible to all.
Profit: the profit represents 14 % of the price. A part of these profits will be put back to associations.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-10-2011 23:12
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2011 08:39
C'est vrai dear np que ça ne veut rien dire!
je n'avais pas lu...
Message de maaathilde posté le 19-10-2011 à 23:03:31
Bonjour,
j'ai un exposé à faire en anglais. Je l'ai préparé, serait-ce possible s'il vous plaît de me corriger ?
Merci d'avance à ceux qui m'aideront .
This scarf multi-use will be useful for you in any situations...
This product was create with various materials:
30 % of cashmere 40 % of cotton 30 % of polyester
In this scarf will be incorporated by several signals colored to choose you even the color that you wish to carry, but also to choose the temperature warmly
Every realized sale will allow our partner associations to receive gifts of your part.
----
The concept of this scarf, is to facilitate you the life, and so to propose you a multiple choice of styles. It will facilitate you your everyday life, a saving of time to adapt your scarf to your dresses, but also, thanks to that this you will save that is you will possess that a single scarf for several dresses.
-----
The family company creates in 2010 already knows a success amazing for these slings of various colors. The company is implanted in United States near New York and spreads since 2011 in the other countries as Russia, Spain, England, and Mexico,
Every company holds a minimum of 150 employees to answer all the demands.
We possess several Scarf Color shops in several cities such as New York, Moscow, Mexico City, Madrid, London.
Our work has for role to create ceaselessly of new concept to satisfy at most our customers and widen our clientele.
-------
Advantages:
Every personality will find what he/she is looking for in one of our slings thanks to our varied collections.
This scarf will be useful in the change in temperature, no matter the seasons.
She will thus allow you to adapt herself to all dresses, even the most original!
The relatively low price allows to satisfy a large number of persons.
Even with the presence of fragile materials on this scarf, it is all the same possible to wash her
-----
How to sell?
By advertising, on several radios world-famous and TV commercials.
Thanks to our web sites.
In our selling points.
Thanks to doors opened on every first Sunday of the month in the whole of our factories.
------
His price: his price is 70 euro to be accessible to all.
Profit: the profit represents 14 % of the price. A part of these profits will be put back to associations.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-10-2011 23:12
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-10-2011 08:39
C'est vrai dear np que ça ne veut rien dire!
je n'avais pas lu... Réponse: Exposé/Scarf and business de notrepere, postée le 20-10-2011 à 02:49:33
HelloVotre texte provient de toute évidence d'un traducteur en ligne, ce que nous ne corrigeons pas car votre travail n'a aucun sens. Merci de nous proposer un travail personnel qui sera alors sans doute vérifié.
Cordialement
