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Message de walid75010 posté le 06-10-2011 à 19:31:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et grammaire s'il vous plaît?
Je vous remercie d'avance .
The document is an article from the Newspaper «The economist» of the 24/09/11 in the rubric «world economy»
The Title of this article is : "A game of catch up"
He’s writting by a Journalist of The Economist.
The text speak about the économics évolution.
Quarry Bank Mill Built by samuel Greg in 1784 ( Industrial revolution ) In england.
He was supplying cotton hread to lancashie’s weavers.
Greg’s Mill was part of a revolution in industry, The new technologies Labour spread to other parts of western Europe and later to america
Now, production of cotton are in country with low wages.
West is Rich because poorer countries speedily adopt the technology like china , india, and now Latin america and africa
And the pace of convergence is increasing since the financial crisis.
The Journalist think that if it would be continue, in 2013, the emerging markets will product more than half of global output and in ten or 20 years , America can be poorer place than now
He say the force of economic convergence depends on the income gap between developing and developed countries, and he is wondering if china can become a reasonably rich country
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-10-2011 08:31
Message de walid75010 posté le 06-10-2011 à 19:31:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes d'orthographe et grammaire s'il vous plaît?
Je vous remercie d'avance .
The document is an article from the Newspaper «The economist» of the 24/09/11 in the rubric «world economy»
The Title of this article is : "A game of catch up"
He’s writting by a Journalist of The Economist.
The text speak about the économics évolution.
Quarry Bank Mill Built by samuel Greg in 1784 ( Industrial revolution ) In england.
He was supplying cotton hread to lancashie’s weavers.
Greg’s Mill was part of a revolution in industry, The new technologies Labour spread to other parts of western Europe and later to america
Now, production of cotton are in country with low wages.
West is Rich because poorer countries speedily adopt the technology like china , india, and now Latin america and africa
And the pace of convergence is increasing since the financial crisis.
The Journalist think that if it would be continue, in 2013, the emerging markets will product more than half of global output and in ten or 20 years , America can be poorer place than now
He say the force of economic convergence depends on the income gap between developing and developed countries, and he is wondering if china can become a reasonably rich country
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-10-2011 08:31
Réponse: Economy de stammer, postée le 07-10-2011 à 00:08:23 (S | E)
Hello,
I live near Quarry Bank Mill... (end of irrelevant fact)
At the moment it hurts my eyes to read this with the random capital letters (lettres majuscules). Samuel, Lancashire, "...revolution in industry, The new technologies", China, India etc.
This is not a complete correction but it is enough for you to work on. Perhaps others will find it easier to help if you edit your first post.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-10-2011 08:32
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