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Correction/my internship
Message de misterg posté le 02-10-2011 à 19:02:57 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
Voici un petit texte que je devais réaliser pour un exercice, pouvez-vous me signaler mes erreurs s'il vous plaît?
I realised my internship in .... A international company, it's a automobile supplier and a leader in plastic product.
This company is located in B;;. I worked for Quality service, I controled the new products and I prepared work station.
I got with my coworker and many superior gave a lot of mission. I worked for quality supplier, quality customer and quality production accountance. SO I lean a lot of knowledge in a quality filed and I got ahead with my own initiative.
My responsible spoke thaht I did a good job and I finished my mission on time.
Merci de votra aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-10-2011 20:47
Message de misterg posté le 02-10-2011 à 19:02:57 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
Voici un petit texte que je devais réaliser pour un exercice, pouvez-vous me signaler mes erreurs s'il vous plaît?
I realised my internship in .... A international company, it's a automobile supplier and a leader in plastic product.
This company is located in B;;. I worked for Quality service, I controled the new products and I prepared work station.
I got with my coworker and many superior gave a lot of mission. I worked for quality supplier, quality customer and quality production accountance. SO I lean a lot of knowledge in a quality filed and I got ahead with my own initiative.
My responsible spoke thaht I did a good job and I finished my mission on time.
Merci de votra aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-10-2011 20:47
Réponse: Correction/my internship de gerondif, postée le 02-10-2011 à 19:37:33 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
texte tapé un peu vite, erreurs de frappe.....
I realised(se rendre compte, et non effectuer) my internship in .... A(n devant son voyelle) international company, it's a(idem) automobile supplier and a leader in plastic product(pluriel).
This company is located in B;;. I worked for (article)Quality service, I controled the new products and I prepared (article)work station.
I got (incomplet, quel sens a ce "get" ? to get on well with, bien s'entendre avec?) with my co-worker and many superior(pluriel; superior me paraît bizarre comme substantif même s'l existe)) gave (à qui ?)a lot of mission(pluriel derrière a lot!!). I worked for quality supplier, quality customer and quality production accountance (cette traduction a peu de sens en anglais . C'était quelle phrase au départ?). SO I lean(plutôt lear et au prétérit) a lot of knowledge(changez de mot to learn knowledge n'a pas de sens) in a quality filed(field) and I got ahead with my own initiative.(un double click donne on)
My responsible(est un adjectif, pas un nom et ne peut "parler que" vous faisiez du bon travail, vous confondez dire et parler) spoke thaht I did a good job and I finished my mission on time.
Bonne correction ! Respectez les pluriels.
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