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Fait divers/voix passive
Message de cop4530 posté le 31-05-2011 à 21:06:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je vais vous présenter le fait divers que j'ai dû écrire pour mon examen.
Pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît me corrigerme donné une cote sur 20 en tant que professeur.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
two days ago, matt, 24, was attacked by two burglar in his house situate in huy. the facts are matt was sleeping when he heard a stange noise in his house, he got up and went to see what's happen , he arrived in the kitchen and the two burglar jumped into matt , he fell on the floor, and one of the burglar cut matt with a knife, they stole a lot of money and a tv , matt was calling the police when the 2 burglar left his home, they arrived 10 minutes later, matt was taken to hospital , he has several hurt at the head , the two burglar was arrested a the end of the road , they 'll be judged , matt is going to temoi
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Message de cop4530 posté le 31-05-2011 à 21:06:40 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je vais vous présenter le fait divers que j'ai dû écrire pour mon examen.
Pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît me corriger
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
two days ago, matt, 24, was attacked by two burglar in his house situate in huy. the facts are matt was sleeping when he heard a stange noise in his house, he got up and went to see what's happen , he arrived in the kitchen and the two burglar jumped into matt , he fell on the floor, and one of the burglar cut matt with a knife, they stole a lot of money and a tv , matt was calling the police when the 2 burglar left his home, they arrived 10 minutes later, matt was taken to hospital , he has several hurt at the head , the two burglar was arrested a the end of the road , they 'll be judged , matt is going to temoi
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-05-2011 21:25
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Réponse: Fait divers/voix passive de laure95, postée le 01-06-2011 à 10:51:00 (S | E)
Bonjour,
two days ago, matt (majuscule), 24, was attacked by two burglar (pluriel) in his house situate (participe passé) in huy (nom d'un endroit?).
Réponse: Fait divers/voix passive de cop4530, postée le 01-06-2011 à 14:06:17 (S | E)
et une petite cote sur 20 ?? je suis en 4ieme
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