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Message de androwide posté le 11-05-2011 à 22:38:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Demain j'ai un oral d'anglais et j'aimerais avoir votre avis sur ma présentation personnelle et si possible corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to introduce myself
My name is Andrew, I'am 23 years old. I live in ..., a village near Roche sur Yon in Vendée.I have a small brother who follows studies of a accounting at Roche sur Yon and big sister who is graphic designer at ...
Since 7 yeas old, i am trained in the same firm. It's a enterprise of a joinery based near ... The reasons why i am in this field are firstly, my passion for the wood and secondly the various technic of implementation.
Since september 2009, in parallel with the work in enterprise i prepare my certificate of advanced vocational in finishing at training center to ... The reasons of this training are firstly, the discovery of new materiaux and secondly theirs technique of implementation.
This certificate will be a good advantage to find a work station in design office. After some years of experience in design office, maybe i could to open my firm.
On my free time, i spend time with my friends, i practice mountain bike with them and every tuesday, i play tennis in club
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2011 22:39
Message de androwide posté le 11-05-2011 à 22:38:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Demain j'ai un oral d'anglais et j'aimerais avoir votre avis sur ma présentation personnelle et si possible corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to introduce myself
My name is Andrew, I'am 23 years old. I live in ..., a village near Roche sur Yon in Vendée.I have a small brother who follows studies of a accounting at Roche sur Yon and big sister who is graphic designer at ...
Since 7 yeas old, i am trained in the same firm. It's a enterprise of a joinery based near ... The reasons why i am in this field are firstly, my passion for the wood and secondly the various technic of implementation.
Since september 2009, in parallel with the work in enterprise i prepare my certificate of advanced vocational in finishing at training center to ... The reasons of this training are firstly, the discovery of new materiaux and secondly theirs technique of implementation.
This certificate will be a good advantage to find a work station in design office. After some years of experience in design office, maybe i could to open my firm.
On my free time, i spend time with my friends, i practice mountain bike with them and every tuesday, i play tennis in club
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2011 22:39
Réponse: Présentation personnelle de notrepere, postée le 11-05-2011 à 23:43:14 (S | E)
Hello
Demain? You've waited too long before posting your work. Here are some tips:
-When a sentence is introduced by "since", the verb should not be in the present tense.
-There should be an article before names of professions in English. I am a network administrator.
-The expression is "little brother" instead of small.
technic, materiaux are misspelled.
suivre est mal traduit dans cette phrase: I have a small brother who follows studies ...
Bonne chance.
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