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Message de fillmorejive posté le 04-05-2011 à 18:03:40 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Would you help me to make these sentences correct please?
Thank you very much.
1/How came the idea to reissue this two first albums xxx and xxx?
2/How could you explain the longevity of xxx's carreer, which is still continuing 25 years later, although the medias never have left a large area to your music?
3/Do you remember what you wanted to create at the time you have realised xxx and xxx?
4/What it meant to you forming a band at the early 1980? Was it like a restistance act ?
5/What is your feeling now when you think of this two albums you released twenty five years ago?
6/Your songs often sound like lullabies which could be easily sing to a child. Don't you think this "false naivity" has been misunderstand by many people who considered your band wasn't enough "rock n' roll" compared maybe to xxx, or xxx and passed over the sarcastic sens?
7/Named a record as "xxx" in 1989, without figurate on the "xxx's compilation", wasn't it a little bit provocative?
8/In 1996 you released a solo album called "xxx". Do you feel your own pop music as a Frankenstein creation? Not well enough calibrate to make some hits?
9/What is your opinion about new groups like xxx who considere the xxx scene like a huge influence for their music?
10/Finally isn't it a comfy position to be a mythic band than a very famous one? For many now, you seem untouchable.
11/Have you been contacted to participate at the recent movie about the story of xxx? You're an historic member of this glorious period, what feelings do you conserve after all this years?
12/ Could you explain more about the movie "xxx" which is focus on your carreer?
13/What is your part as a musician today in your town? Are you still attentive at new groups? Are you still a participatif actor?
14/Today what would you say to a newcomer at your band whom would have to discover your music?
15/Soon, you're going to play at xxx festival.
This will be your unique tour date?
16/Are you going to realise new stuff soon?
17/What thing help you to continue today with music?
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Edited by lucile83 on 04-05-2011 18:06
Message de fillmorejive posté le 04-05-2011 à 18:03:40 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Would you help me to make these sentences correct please?
Thank you very much.
1/How came the idea to reissue this two first albums xxx and xxx?
2/How could you explain the longevity of xxx's carreer, which is still continuing 25 years later, although the medias never have left a large area to your music?
3/Do you remember what you wanted to create at the time you have realised xxx and xxx?
4/What it meant to you forming a band at the early 1980? Was it like a restistance act ?
5/What is your feeling now when you think of this two albums you released twenty five years ago?
6/Your songs often sound like lullabies which could be easily sing to a child. Don't you think this "false naivity" has been misunderstand by many people who considered your band wasn't enough "rock n' roll" compared maybe to xxx, or xxx and passed over the sarcastic sens?
7/Named a record as "xxx" in 1989, without figurate on the "xxx's compilation", wasn't it a little bit provocative?
8/In 1996 you released a solo album called "xxx". Do you feel your own pop music as a Frankenstein creation? Not well enough calibrate to make some hits?
9/What is your opinion about new groups like xxx who considere the xxx scene like a huge influence for their music?
10/Finally isn't it a comfy position to be a mythic band than a very famous one? For many now, you seem untouchable.
11/Have you been contacted to participate at the recent movie about the story of xxx? You're an historic member of this glorious period, what feelings do you conserve after all this years?
12/ Could you explain more about the movie "xxx" which is focus on your carreer?
13/What is your part as a musician today in your town? Are you still attentive at new groups? Are you still a participatif actor?
14/Today what would you say to a newcomer at your band whom would have to discover your music?
15/Soon, you're going to play at xxx festival.
This will be your unique tour date?
16/Are you going to realise new stuff soon?
17/What thing help you to continue today with music?
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Edited by lucile83 on 04-05-2011 18:06
Réponse: Sentences/ help needed de christian42, postée le 04-05-2011 à 18:59:32 (S | E)
1/How came the idea to reissue this first two albums xxx and xxx?
2/How could you explain the longevity of xxx's carreer, which is still running years later, although medias have never left a large area to HIS / HER music?
3/Do you remember what you wanted to create at the time you produced xxx and xxx?
4/What did it mean to you forming a band in the early 1980? Was it like a resistance act ?
5/What is your feeling now when you think of this two albums you released twenty five years ago?
6/Your songs often sound like lullabies which could be easily sung to a child. Don't you think this "false naivity" has been misunderstood by many people who considered your band wasn't "rock n' roll" enough compared maybe to xxx, or xxx and passed over the sarcastic aspect ?
7/Named record as "xxx" in 1989, without appearing on the "xxx's compilation", wasn't it a little bit provocative?
8/In 1996 you released a solo album called "xxx". Do you consider your own pop music as a Frankenstein creation? Not well enough calibrated to make some hits?
9/What is your opinion about new groups like xxx who consider the xxx scene like a huge influence for their music?
10/Finally isn't it a comfy position to be a mythic band than a very famous one? For many now, you seem untouchable.
11/Have you been contacted to participate to the recent movie about the story of xxx? You're an historic member of this glorious period, what feelings do you keep after all these years?
12/ Could you expand on the movie "xxx" which is focused on your carreer?
13/What is your part as a musician today in your town? Are you still attentive to new groups? Are you still an active actor?
14/Today what would you say to a newcomer in your band who would have to discover your music?
15/Soon, you're going to play at xxx festival.
This will be your unique tour date?
16/Are you going to release new stuff soon?
17/What help you continue today with music?
Réponse: Sentences/ help needed de fillmorejive, postée le 04-05-2011 à 20:34:19 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup christian42 pour cette aide précieuse
Réponse: Sentences/ help needed de notrepere, postée le 05-05-2011 à 07:29:38 (S | E)
Bonjour
Il reste beaucoup de problèmes dans vos phrases.
'this' est utilisé avant un nom singulier
'these' est utilisé avant un nom pluriel
Votre traduction du verbe 'réaliser' n'est pas correcte.
Par exemple :
1/How came the idea to reissue this first two albums xxx and xxx?
How did the idea to reissue these first two albums ... come to you?
2/ How (1) Could you explain the longevity of xxx's carreer (3), which is still continuing 25 years later, although the medias (2) never have (4) left a large area to your music (5)?
(1) inutile
(2) en général, ce mot est invariable
(3) orthographe
(4) ordre des mots et accord
(5) je ne comprends pas
Avant de corriger une autre phrase, il faut corriger celles-ci.
Cordialement
Réponse: Sentences/ help needed de fillmorejive, postée le 05-05-2011 à 08:51:36 (S | E)
Merci/thank you
With some explanations, it is clear.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-05-2011 09:30
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