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Message de cristal-vert posté le 23-04-2011 à 17:54:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un exercice à faire (des phrases pour un exposé sur le sud de l'Afrique mais je ne suis pas sûre de l'orthographe et de toutes les tournures de phrases... Quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider?
Localisation and population.
South Africa is located at the tip of Africa and near Nambidia and Mozambique.
Eleven oficial languages are spoken in South Africa.
The area is 19991300 km² .
There is 49991300 persons in South Africa in 2010.
There are a lot of ethnic groups in Soutth Africa:
75,2 percent of the population is black, 13,6 percent is white, 8,6 percent is indian , 2,6 percent is asian.
History:
In 1948, Daniel François Malan, who win elections, does a new political regime : the Apartheid.
But, the blacks africans think this regime not fair because they lost a lot of rights , in particular the right to vote.
The apartheid result in manifestations and massacres. It is prohibited to protest and people who protest can be imprisonned for six mounth immediatly.
In 1991, the latter law of apartheid were totaly abolished and south Africa become a democratie. Nelson Mandella, who was emprisonned during the Apartheid , become presidant.
The flag and symbol :
The new flag is adopted in 1994 to represent the new democratie.
We can see a y who represent the unity of diverse element.
The motto of the republic of South Africa is “unity in diversity”
South Africa is nicknamed “the rainbow nation” because there is diversity of cultures, languages, color, etc… in this nation and it reminds of a rainbow.
Voilà, par avance, merci pour votre aide!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2011 17:58
Message de cristal-vert posté le 23-04-2011 à 17:54:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un exercice à faire (des phrases pour un exposé sur le sud de l'Afrique mais je ne suis pas sûre de l'orthographe et de toutes les tournures de phrases... Quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider?
Localisation and population.
South Africa is located at the tip of Africa and near Nambidia and Mozambique.
Eleven oficial languages are spoken in South Africa.
The area is 19991300 km² .
There is 49991300 persons in South Africa in 2010.
There are a lot of ethnic groups in Soutth Africa:
75,2 percent of the population is black, 13,6 percent is white, 8,6 percent is indian , 2,6 percent is asian.
History:
In 1948, Daniel François Malan, who win elections, does a new political regime : the Apartheid.
But, the blacks africans think this regime not fair because they lost a lot of rights , in particular the right to vote.
The apartheid result in manifestations and massacres. It is prohibited to protest and people who protest can be imprisonned for six mounth immediatly.
In 1991, the latter law of apartheid were totaly abolished and south Africa become a democratie. Nelson Mandella, who was emprisonned during the Apartheid , become presidant.
The flag and symbol :
The new flag is adopted in 1994 to represent the new democratie.
We can see a y who represent the unity of diverse element.
The motto of the republic of South Africa is “unity in diversity”
South Africa is nicknamed “the rainbow nation” because there is diversity of cultures, languages, color, etc… in this nation and it reminds of a rainbow.
Voilà, par avance, merci pour votre aide!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2011 17:58
Réponse: Correction/South Africa de notrepere, postée le 23-04-2011 à 19:08:13 (S | E)
HelloLocalisation and population.
South Africa is located at the tip of Africa and near Nambidia and Mozambique.
Eleven oficial (1) languages are spoken in South Africa.
The area is 19991300 km² .
There is (2) 49991300 persons (3) in South Africa in 2010.
There are a lot of ethnic groups in Soutth Africa:
75,2 percent of the population is black, 13,6 percent is white, 8,6 percent is indian , 2,6 percent is asian.
History:
In 1948, Daniel François Malan, who win (4) (5) elections, does (6) a new political regime : the (7) Apartheid.
But, the blacks africans think (4) this regime (8) not fair because they lost a lot of rights , in particular the right to vote.
The (7) apartheid result (4) in manifestations (9) and massacres. It is (4) prohibited to protest and people who protest can (4) be imprisonned for six mounth immediately (10).
In 1991, the latter
laws of apartheid were totaly (1) abolished and south Africa become (4) a democratie. Nelson Mandella, who was emprisonned during the Apartheid , become (4) presidant.The flag and symbol :
The new flag is (4) adopted in 1994 to represent the new democratie.
We can see a Y who (qui = which) represent (11) the unity of diverse elements.
The motto of the republic of South Africa is “unity in diversity”
South Africa is nicknamed “the rainbow nation” because there is diversity of cultures, languages, color, etc… in this nation and it reminds you of a rainbow.
(1) orthographe
(2) accorde et temps à revoir
(3) dans ce contexte, le mot 'people' convient
(4) temps de narration; au passé
(5) article manquant
(6) pas le bon verbe
(7) pas d'article avant "Apartheid"
(8) verbe manquant
(9) mauvaise traduction du mot "manifestations"; sous POLITIQUE voyez Lien Internet
(10) mal placé; il faut le placer entre l'auxiliaire et le verbe
(11) accorde
Réponse: Correction/South Africa de cristal-vert, postée le 23-04-2011 à 21:03:41 (S | E)
Bonjour notrepere.
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris la peine de m'aider ... J'ai re-essayé et ça me donne le texte suivant. Est-ce que c'est bon?
Localisation and population.
South Africa is located at the tip of Africa and near Nambidia and Mozambique.
Eleven official languages are spoken in South Africa.
The area is 19991300 km² .
There are 49991300 peoples in South Africa in 2010.
There are a lot of ethnic groups in Soutth Africa:
75,2 percent of the population is Black, 13,6 percent is White, 8,6 percent is Indian , 2,6 percent is Asian.
History:
In 1948, Daniel François Malan, who won the elections, does a new political regime : Apartheid.
But, the blacks Africans thought this regime not fair because they lost a lot of rights , in particular the right to vote.
Apartheid resulted in demonstrations and massacres. It was prohibited to protest and people who protested could immédiatly be imprisoned for six month .
In 1991, the latest laws of Apartheid were totally abolished and South Africa become a democracy. Nelson Mandella, who was imprisonned during Apartheid , became presidant.
The flag and symbol :
The new flag was adopted in 1994 to represent the new democratie.
We can see a Y which represented the unity of diverse elements.
The motto of the republic of South Africa is “unity in diversity”
South Africa is nicknamed “the rainbow nation” because there is diversity of cultures, languages, color, etc… in this nation and it reminds of a rainbow.
Merci encore!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-04-2011 21:06
Réponse: Correction/South Africa de notrepere, postée le 24-04-2011 à 06:25:42 (S | E)
Localisation and population.
South Africa is located at the tip of Africa and near
Eleven official languages are spoken in South Africa.
The area is 19991300 km² .
There are 49991300 peoples in South Africa in 2010.
There are a lot of ethnic groups in Soutth Africa:
75,2 percent of the population is Black, 13,6 percent is White, 8,6 percent is Indian , 2,6 percent is Asian.
History:
In 1948, Daniel François Malan, who won the elections,
But, the Black Africans thought this regime [verb to be preterit]not fair because they lost a lot of rights , in particular the right to vote.
Apartheid resulted in demonstrations and massacres. It was prohibited to protest and people who protested could be immediately imprisoned for six months .
In 1991, the latest laws of Apartheid were totally abolished and South Africa become a democracy. Nelson Mandella, who was imprisonned during Apartheid , became president.
The flag and symbol :
The new flag was adopted in 1994 to represent the new democratie.
We can see a Y which represents the unity of diverse elements.
The motto of the Republic of South Africa is “unity in diversity”
South Africa is nicknamed “the rainbow nation” because there is diversity of cultures, languages, color, etc… in this nation
Réponse: Correction/South Africa de headway, postée le 24-04-2011 à 12:10:07 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Juste une petite précision; vous dites que votre exposé doit porter sur le sud de l'Afrique, hors "South Africa" signifie: Afrique du Sud.
Je vous cite: "J'ai un exercice à faire (des phrases pour un exposé sur le sud de l'Afrique ..."
Bon dimanche.
Headway.
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Modifié par headway le 24-04-2011 12:11
Réponse: Correction/South Africa de cristal-vert, postée le 24-04-2011 à 16:31:59 (S | E)
Bonjour headway et NotrePère.
D'abord, merci de m'aider!
Headway a bien raison, c'est de l'Afrique du sud que je veux parler (oups !)
ensuite, merci notrepere pour votre aide ... En tenant compte des nouvelles remarques, j'obtiens :
Localisation and population.
South Africa is located at the tip of Africa and near Namibia and Mozambique.
Eleven official languages are spoken in South Africa.
The area is 19991300 km² .
There are 49991300 people in South Africa in 2010.
There are a lot of ethnic groups in South Africa:
75,2 percent of the population is Black, 13,6 percent is White, 8,6 percent is Indian , 2,6 percent is Asian.
History:
In 1948, Daniel François Malan, who won the elections, created a new political regime : Apartheid.
But, the Black Africans thought this regime was not fair because they lost a lot of rights , in particular the right to vote.
Apartheid resulted in demonstrations and massacres. It was prohibited to protest and people who protested could be immediately imprisoned for six months .
In 1991, the latest laws of Apartheid were totally abolished and South Africa become a democracy. Nelson Mandella, who was imprisonned during Apartheid , became president.
The flag and symbol :
The new flag was adopted in 1994 to represent the new democracy.
We can see a Y which represents the unity of diverse elements.
The motto of the Republic of South Africa is “unity in diversity”
South Africa is nicknamed “the rainbow nation” because there is diversity of cultures, languages, color, etc… in this nation which is reminiscent of a rainbow.
Mais arriverais-je un jour à faire un texte sans faute?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-04-2011 19:04
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