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Message de pirrot posté le 13-04-2011 à 14:37:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous;
J'ai une petite rédaction sur mes vacances d'été, à rédiger, pouvez-vous voir si j'ai fait des fautes s'il vous plaît?
Do you during the summer holidays? would you like to? why, why not?
I went to Arizona with my old college in Cave Creek, I went in a host family, there were eight hours time difference compared to France, I have visited the Grand Canyon, I went to the school of my correspondent and when I returned I went to my grandfather for swimming and fishing and I went to my aunt to celebrate my birthday that my mother and my grandfather. and I've finished my holiday by going to school.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par bridg le 13-04-2011 14:37
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2011 18:29
Consigne erronée
Message de pirrot posté le 13-04-2011 à 14:37:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous;
J'ai une petite rédaction sur mes vacances d'été, à rédiger, pouvez-vous voir si j'ai fait des fautes s'il vous plaît?
Do you during the summer holidays? would you like to? why, why not?
I went to Arizona with my old college in Cave Creek, I went in a host family, there were eight hours time difference compared to France, I have visited the Grand Canyon, I went to the school of my correspondent and when I returned I went to my grandfather for swimming and fishing and I went to my aunt to celebrate my birthday that my mother and my grandfather. and I've finished my holiday by going to school.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par bridg le 13-04-2011 14:37
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2011 18:29
Consigne erronée
Réponse: Vacances/Correction de gerondif, postée le 13-04-2011 à 16:05:13 (S | E)
Bonjour,
sujet incomplet, traduction mécanique.
Do you .........during the summer holidays? would you like to................? why, why not?
I went to Arizona with my old college in Cave Creek, I went in(went et in ne vont pas ensemble, "was in" ou "went into") a host family, there were(difference est singulier) eight hours time difference compared to France, I have visited (pourquoi passer au present perfect)the Grand Canyon, I went to the school of(cas possessif) my correspondent(il y a d'autres mots pour un correspondant scolaire) and when I returned I went to my grandfather...( chez) for(for + ing traduit pour + une cause et non un but) swimming and fishing and I went to my aunt...(chez) to celebrate my birthday that my mother and my grandfather(phrase incomplète, pas de verbe). and I've finished (pourquoi un present perfect)my holiday by going to school.(by + ing indique un moyen)
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