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Message de ctanguy posté le 20-03-2011 à 13:42:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire la suite d'un texte qui se passe en Inde durant la colonisation britannique dans les années 1850, un colonel rend visite à un indien qui collabore avec les anglais; le fils de celui-ci se révolte en disant que la supériorité britannique n'est qu'une imagination du peuple. Voilà donc la suite, le dialogue entre le colonel et sa femme;
merci de regarder les fautes
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“Alicia! We are leaving!” he shouted to his wife.
“I don’t wish to stay here one moment longer” he muttered.
Alicia Mills bowed his head and followed his husband without a sight for Indrajit’s family. Colonel Mills and Alicia Mills leaved Indrajit’s house and walked on the way without a word. The Colonel was so angered that he thought ceaselessly about what just happened. Alicia didn’t dared to bother his husband when he was furious.
The Colonel broke the silence: “Who does he guess he is? This Indian doesn’t have to offend a British! This thoughtless young man will pay for his rudeness!” he replied furiously. Alicia listened his husband and like she saw that he was still irritated, she nodded.
“Perhaps this boy is disrupted, but about what? India will be better when the British will rule India!” Colonel exclaimed
“Perhaps this young man doesn’t think like that.” Alicia faltered.
“How he can reckon differently?” Colonel Mills ventured.
“May I please simply suggest that the British are colonizing India, and perhaps this boy reckon that we will rule his country, maybe he thinks that British want exploit Indian, you know he’s a young boy, he doesn’t understand what’s happen, and he wants to defend this family and this country” Alicia explained.
Colonel Mills figures one moment about this wife’s speech.
“He’s a young boy, if this happened to me when I had his age, I guess I shall have rebelled.” Colonel confessed he stopped and added “But now British are ruling India and Indian need to respect that.”
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2011 16:12
Message de ctanguy posté le 20-03-2011 à 13:42:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois écrire la suite d'un texte qui se passe en Inde durant la colonisation britannique dans les années 1850, un colonel rend visite à un indien qui collabore avec les anglais; le fils de celui-ci se révolte en disant que la supériorité britannique n'est qu'une imagination du peuple. Voilà donc la suite, le dialogue entre le colonel et sa femme;
merci de regarder les fautes
:“Alicia! We are leaving!” he shouted to his wife.
“I don’t wish to stay here one moment longer” he muttered.
Alicia Mills bowed his head and followed his husband without a sight for Indrajit’s family. Colonel Mills and Alicia Mills leaved Indrajit’s house and walked on the way without a word. The Colonel was so angered that he thought ceaselessly about what just happened. Alicia didn’t dared to bother his husband when he was furious.
The Colonel broke the silence: “Who does he guess he is? This Indian doesn’t have to offend a British! This thoughtless young man will pay for his rudeness!” he replied furiously. Alicia listened his husband and like she saw that he was still irritated, she nodded.
“Perhaps this boy is disrupted, but about what? India will be better when the British will rule India!” Colonel exclaimed
“Perhaps this young man doesn’t think like that.” Alicia faltered.
“How he can reckon differently?” Colonel Mills ventured.
“May I please simply suggest that the British are colonizing India, and perhaps this boy reckon that we will rule his country, maybe he thinks that British want exploit Indian, you know he’s a young boy, he doesn’t understand what’s happen, and he wants to defend this family and this country” Alicia explained.
Colonel Mills figures one moment about this wife’s speech.
“He’s a young boy, if this happened to me when I had his age, I guess I shall have rebelled.” Colonel confessed he stopped and added “But now British are ruling India and Indian need to respect that.”
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2011 16:12
Réponse: Écrire un dialogue de notrepere, postée le 20-03-2011 à 16:07:17 (S | E)
Hello“Alicia! We are leaving!” he shouted to his wife.
“I don’t wish to stay here one moment longer” he muttered.
Alicia Mills bowed his (1) head and followed his (1) husband without a sight (2) for Indrajit’s family. Colonel Mills and Alicia Mills leaved (3) Indrajit’s house and walked on the way without a word. The Colonel was so angered that he thought ceaselessly about what just happened. Alicia didn’t dared
The Colonel broke the silence: “Who does he guess (2) he is? This Indian doesn’t have to offend a British (4)! This thoughtless young man will pay for his rudeness!” he replied furiously. Alicia listened (5) his (1) husband and like (6) she saw that he was still irritated, she nodded.
“Perhaps this boy is disrupted (2), but about what? India will be better when the British will rule India!” the Colonel exclaimed.
“Perhaps this young man doesn’t think like that.” Alicia faltered.
“How he can (12) reckon differently?” Colonel Mills ventured.
“May I please simply suggest that the British are colonizing India, and perhaps this boy reckon (7) that we will rule his country, [point] Maybe he thinks that (8) British want to exploit Indian, [point] You know he’s a young boy, he doesn’t understand what’s happen???, and he wants to defend this family and this country” Alicia explained.
Colonel Mills figures (2) one moment about this wife’s speech.
“He’s a young boy, if this happened to me when I had (9) his age, I guess I shall (10) have rebelled.” Colonel confessed he stopped and added “But now the British are ruling India and Indian need (11) to respect that.”
(1) Attention: his, her, its; Alicia est une femme, quel choix convient ?
(2) un autre verbe
(3) 'leaved' n'existe pas; verbe irregulier
(4) Mal dit; The British = The British people pas une personne; un autre mot
(5) Verbe à particule en anglais; il manque une préposition
(6) Comme: like, as
(7) accorde
(8) article manquant
(9) Etre en anglais
(10) Conditionnel
(11) Mal dit
(12) en forme interrogative
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Modifié par notrepere le 22-03-2011 19:20
Réponse: Écrire un dialogue de millogoadi, postée le 20-03-2011 à 16:35:49 (S | E)
Salut. Je te conseille de tout simplement essayer d'appliquer les dernières règles vues en classe.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2011 16:54
Réponse: Écrire un dialogue de ctanguy, postée le 22-03-2011 à 18:35:56 (S | E)
merci beaucoup pour votre aide, je vais de suite corriger mes fautes et revoir ce que j'ai mal comprit.
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