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Essay on Liverpool city
Message de tutti-frutti88 posté le 10-03-2011 à 20:41:58 (S | E | F)
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Liverpool is a city and a metropolitan Merseyside°s council based in the north-west England°s region on the east and north side of the Mersey°s estuary river. It°s the fourth largest town of the United Kingdom and the England°s third. With its population of over 816 216 the Liverpool°s urban area°s the second economic city under London that have taken more prosperity including industrial area. Its name°s townspeople are the Liverpudlians.
Before the building of Merseyside°s country the town was all part Lancashire°s country until 1974. The town was built in 1207 and gets city status in 1880. There are 2500 listed architectural buildings, the largest number of statues after Westminster and more numbered Gregorian style homes as Bath. It°s the reason that the town°s often described as the beautifulest city of the Gregorian°s era. There°s an important variety of human cultures including one of the eldest Chinese and African European°s community of the country. The city reborn slowly since 1070 because it was been suffered by a falling industrial.
Several city districts have sent the status of the world heritage in 2004 and shared the title of the European°s culture capital in 2008 with Stavanger to celebrate its birthday 800th.
Liverpool°s a famous touristic destination associated with The Beatles°s fame that°s one of the largest phenomena of the world discography industrial.
Liverpool°s also an important centre university became famous by its both principal clubs of football, Everton and Liverpool that all graduate until to the highest Britannics and Europeans tops
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2011 20:50
Message de tutti-frutti88 posté le 10-03-2011 à 20:41:58 (S | E | F)
Good evening,
I need some help if you want to give me some signs of correction.
Thanks for your answers.
Best wishes.
Liverpool is a city and a metropolitan Merseyside°s council based in the north-west England°s region on the east and north side of the Mersey°s estuary river. It°s the fourth largest town of the United Kingdom and the England°s third. With its population of over 816 216 the Liverpool°s urban area°s the second economic city under London that have taken more prosperity including industrial area. Its name°s townspeople are the Liverpudlians.
Before the building of Merseyside°s country the town was all part Lancashire°s country until 1974. The town was built in 1207 and gets city status in 1880. There are 2500 listed architectural buildings, the largest number of statues after Westminster and more numbered Gregorian style homes as Bath. It°s the reason that the town°s often described as the beautifulest city of the Gregorian°s era. There°s an important variety of human cultures including one of the eldest Chinese and African European°s community of the country. The city reborn slowly since 1070 because it was been suffered by a falling industrial.
Several city districts have sent the status of the world heritage in 2004 and shared the title of the European°s culture capital in 2008 with Stavanger to celebrate its birthday 800th.
Liverpool°s a famous touristic destination associated with The Beatles°s fame that°s one of the largest phenomena of the world discography industrial.
Liverpool°s also an important centre university became famous by its both principal clubs of football, Everton and Liverpool that all graduate until to the highest Britannics and Europeans tops
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2011 20:50
Réponse: Essay on Liverpool city de notrepere, postée le 11-03-2011 à 22:23:32 (S | E)
HelloLiverpool is a city and a metropolitan Merseyside°s council based in the north-west England°s region on the east and north side of the Mersey°s estuary river.(1) It's the fourth largest town of (2) the United Kingdom and the England's third (3). With its (4) population of over 816 216, the (5) Liverpool°s urban area's (6) the second economic city under London that have taken more prosperity including industrial area. Its name°s townspeople are the Liverpudlians (1).
Before the building of Merseyside°s country the town was all part Lancashire°s country until 1974 (1). The town was built in 1207 and gets (8) city status in 1880. There are 2500 listed architectural buildings, the largest number of statues after Westminster and more numbered Gregorian style homes as (9) Bath. It's the reason that the town's (6) often described as the beautifulest (10) city of the Gregorian°s era. There's an important variety of human cultures including one of the eldest Chinese and African European°s community of (2) the country. The city reborn slowly since 1070 because it was been suffered by a falling industrial. (1)
Several city districts have sent the status of the world heritage in 2004 and shared the title of the European°s culture capital in 2008 with Stavanger to celebrate its birthday 800th (1).
Liverpool's (6) a famous touristic destination associated with The Beatles's fame
Liverpool's (6) also an important centre university became famous by its both principal clubs of football, Everton and Liverpool that all graduate until to the highest Britannics and Europeans tops (1)
(1) Cette phrase n'a pas de sens; attention la différence entre country et "county"
(2) Mauvaise préposition
(3) Il faut répéter "largest" comme l'exemple précédent
(4) Article indéfini vaut mieux
(5) mots superflus; il faut revoir les règles concernant les articles
(6) pas un nom possessif ou contraction connue; sans contraction
(7) n'a pas de sens; il faut refaire
(8) temps à revoir
(9) on dit "more ... than" ou "as many ... as"
(10) ce mot n'existe pas
(11) pas les bons mots
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Modifié par notrepere le 11-03-2011 22:24
Réponse: Essay on Liverpool city de ariane6, postée le 11-03-2011 à 22:41:34 (S | E)
Hello tutti !
I think you meant to write "Georgian", not "Gregorian"...
Hello np !
Réponse: Essay on Liverpool city de notrepere, postée le 12-03-2011 à 00:00:19 (S | E)
Hello ariane! 
You are right, I wasn't paying much attention to the actual content. 
Thank you for noticing that.Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
