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Message de macvil posté le 03-03-2011 à 22:43:12 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Élève en Terminale ES, je prépare un exposé-revue-de-presse en anglais. J’ai donc eu la joie de lire et d'analyser les derniers Tabloïds. J’ai tiré les grandes informations mais je voudrais avoir une bonne correction pour faire un oral correct (mon niveau d’anglais étant très moyen).
Donc excusez-moi, le fond ne va pas être très intéressant, seule la forme importe :D
1. Firsly, I must to speak about the most important news : Justin Beaber has his hair cut. He plan to sell his hairs on Ebay. The money earned will be use for a charitable association.
2. The new Tony Parker’s life : As you can see, TP is in good company. While his ex wife is now with Eduardo Cruz (Penelope C’s brother), hi m does the party. Since the divorce 1 months ago, nobody seems to be in depression !
3. Break of the month : Jay-z leave Beyoncé because she doesn’t want a baby.
4. Rightly Beyoncé seems to have a strange sickness. As you can see, her skin turn white. It is the same treatment that Micheal ? Her family become to be worry.
5. When she was just celebrate her 30 years old, Paris Hilton get married with Cy Waits, her new boy friend since summer 2010.
6. Diane Kruger exposured naker for a american magazine.
7. At the time of NBA All-Star Game, we could see Justin Bieber try to chat up Rihanna. Actually his on charm since long time. After Kim Kardashian (30 years old), it’s the turn of Rihanna.
8. New York, 12 .17.11, Lady Gaga with two little couple of horn
9. Colin Farrell bought some yaourt and fresh vegetable in a supermarket.
10. It’s very hard for Celin Dion to leave her chieldren for going sing around the world. She ressently had a documentary about her new mom life and she looks really cheerful.
11. The Carla Bruni’s mother is in a bad situation, she was hospitalize in Switzerland. According press, her kidney are blocked and it’s enough serious.
12. Jean Luc Delarue in Camping car for his turn of french scool. He wants to make sensitive about drogues dangers.
Un grand grand merci d'avance!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-03-2011 22:45
Message de macvil posté le 03-03-2011 à 22:43:12 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Élève en Terminale ES, je prépare un exposé-revue-de-presse en anglais. J’ai donc eu la joie de lire et d'analyser les derniers Tabloïds. J’ai tiré les grandes informations mais je voudrais avoir une bonne correction pour faire un oral correct (mon niveau d’anglais étant très moyen).
Donc excusez-moi, le fond ne va pas être très intéressant, seule la forme importe :D
1. Firsly, I must to speak about the most important news : Justin Beaber has his hair cut. He plan to sell his hairs on Ebay. The money earned will be use for a charitable association.
2. The new Tony Parker’s life : As you can see, TP is in good company. While his ex wife is now with Eduardo Cruz (Penelope C’s brother), hi m does the party. Since the divorce 1 months ago, nobody seems to be in depression !
3. Break of the month : Jay-z leave Beyoncé because she doesn’t want a baby.
4. Rightly Beyoncé seems to have a strange sickness. As you can see, her skin turn white. It is the same treatment that Micheal ? Her family become to be worry.
5. When she was just celebrate her 30 years old, Paris Hilton get married with Cy Waits, her new boy friend since summer 2010.
6. Diane Kruger exposured naker for a american magazine.
7. At the time of NBA All-Star Game, we could see Justin Bieber try to chat up Rihanna. Actually his on charm since long time. After Kim Kardashian (30 years old), it’s the turn of Rihanna.
8. New York, 12 .17.11, Lady Gaga with two little couple of horn
9. Colin Farrell bought some yaourt and fresh vegetable in a supermarket.
10. It’s very hard for Celin Dion to leave her chieldren for going sing around the world. She ressently had a documentary about her new mom life and she looks really cheerful.
11. The Carla Bruni’s mother is in a bad situation, she was hospitalize in Switzerland. According press, her kidney are blocked and it’s enough serious.
12. Jean Luc Delarue in Camping car for his turn of french scool. He wants to make sensitive about drogues dangers.
Un grand grand merci d'avance!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-03-2011 22:45
Réponse: Correction /revue de presse de notrepere, postée le 04-03-2011 à 02:26:40 (S | E)
Hello1. Firsly (1), I must to (2) speak about the most important news : Justin Beaber (1) has his hair cut (3). He plan (8) to sell his hairs on Ebay. The money earned will be use* for a charitable association.
2. The new Tony Parker’s life (5) : As you can see, TP is in good company. While (6) his ex wife is now with Eduardo Cruz (Penelope C’s brother), hi m does the party (5). Since the divorce 1 months ago, nobody seems to be in depression (7) !
3. Break (5) of the month : Jay-z leave (8) Beyoncé because she doesn’t want a baby.
4. Rightly Beyoncé seems to have a strange sickness. As you can see, her skin turn (8) white. It is the same treatment that Micheal *** (9)? Her family become to be worry (5).
5. When she was just celebrate her 30 years old (5), Paris Hilton get (8) married with Cy Waits, her new boyfriend since summer 2010.
6. Diane Kruger exposured naker (5) for a american magazine.
7. At the time of NBA All-Star Game, we could see Justin Bieber try to chat up Rihanna. Actually his on charm since long time. After Kim Kardashian (30 years old), it’s the turn of Rihanna. (9)
8. New York, 12 .17.11, Lady Gaga with two little couple of horn (9)
9. Colin Farrell bought some yaourt (1) and fresh vegetable* in a supermarket.
10. It’s very hard for Celin Dion to leave her chieldren for going sing (5) around the world. She ressently had a documentary about her new mom life (5) and she looks really cheerful.
11. The Carla Bruni’s mother is in a bad situation, she was hospitalize* in Switzerland. According (10) the press, her kidney* are blocked and it’s enough (11) serious.
12. Jean Luc Delarue in Camping car for his turn of french scool (9). He wants to make sensitive about drogues dangers (9).
(1) Orthographe
(2) Jamais après 'must'
(3) Ordre des mots : mettez le verbe avant 'his hair'
(5) Mal dit
(6) Since?
(7) Expression idiomatique ; consultez un dictionnaire
(8) Temps à revoir
(9) Ce n'a pas de sens
(10) Préposition manquante
(11) assez ne se traduit pas comme 'enough' dans le contexte
Réponse: Correction /revue de presse de macvil, postée le 04-03-2011 à 09:35:50 (S | E)
MErci merci merci. C'est parfait.
Réponse: Correction /revue de presse de may, postée le 04-03-2011 à 16:50:25 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Hmmmmm...
He has his hair cut (Present) or He had his hair cut (Past) is more accurate, however.
Since, He has cut his hair makes me think he cut his own hair himself
Oh...maybe he did. Did he?
Happy Friday!
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Modifié par traviskidd le 04-03-2011 21:31
Why not "has had his hair cut" or "has gotten a haircut"?
Yes, why not
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Modifié par may le 06-03-2011 15:38
Réponse: Correction /revue de presse de notrepere, postée le 07-03-2011 à 06:45:39 (S | E)
HelloNow that you mention it "He has got a haircut" would be best. We must also remember that "gotten" does not exist in BE.
Cordialement
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