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Message de kool posté le 13-02-2011 à 21:59:43 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Notre professeur d'anglais nous a demandé d'écrire une production. Voici le sujet:
you have received a letter from an English-speaking friend of yours.He asked you for advice about getting into shape and eating healthy food.Write a letter to him, giving practical advice on fitness and healthy eating.
Voici la lettre que j'ai écrite:
Dear …,
I’m writing you to thank you for your letter where I’ve understood that you need some advice about getting into shape and healthy food. I will try to help you.
Here are advices about fitness ant healthy thing:
• Eat a balanced diet with more fruits and vegetables and less fat and sugar.
• Practice a physical activity in order to help your body staying fit. Choose a sport you like and you won’t be bored. You can also practice a relaxing activity like yoga… .
• Your body and mind work together. Get rid of your problems as quickly as possible and surround your life with what makes you happy: people around you ...
• Avoid snacking between meals and eating before going to bed.
• Eliminate stress.
I hope these advices will help you. I wish you good luck with your healthy lifestyle.
I’m looking forward your answer, and next letter with your news.
Best wishes.
Pouvez-vousSVP s'il vous plaît me corriger, s'il y a des fautes? Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2011 08:11
Message de kool posté le 13-02-2011 à 21:59:43 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Notre professeur d'anglais nous a demandé d'écrire une production. Voici le sujet:
you have received a letter from an English-speaking friend of yours.He asked you for advice about getting into shape and eating healthy food.Write a letter to him, giving practical advice on fitness and healthy eating.
Voici la lettre que j'ai écrite:
Dear …,
I’m writing you to thank you for your letter where I’ve understood that you need some advice about getting into shape and healthy food. I will try to help you.
Here are advices about fitness ant healthy thing:
• Eat a balanced diet with more fruits and vegetables and less fat and sugar.
• Practice a physical activity in order to help your body staying fit. Choose a sport you like and you won’t be bored. You can also practice a relaxing activity like yoga… .
• Your body and mind work together. Get rid of your problems as quickly as possible and surround your life with what makes you happy: people around you ...
• Avoid snacking between meals and eating before going to bed.
• Eliminate stress.
I hope these advices will help you. I wish you good luck with your healthy lifestyle.
I’m looking forward your answer, and next letter with your news.
Best wishes.
Pouvez-vous
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2011 08:11
Réponse: Healthy food de gerondif, postée le 13-02-2011 à 22:07:53 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Dear …,
I’m writing ***you to thank you for your letter where I’ve understood that you need some advice about getting into shape and healthy food. I will try to help you.
Here are advices about fitness ant healthy thing (expression maladroite:health suffirait)
• Eat a balanced diet with more fruits and vegetables and less fat and sugar.
• Practice a physical activity in order to help your body ** staying fit. Choose a sport you like and you won’t be bored. You can also practice a relaxing activity like yoga… .
• Your body and mind work together. Get rid of your problems as quickly as possible and surround your life with what makes you happy: people around you ...
• Avoid snacking between meals and eating before going to bed.
• Eliminate stress.
I hope these advices will help you. I wish you good luck with your healthy lifestyle.
I’m looking forward to your answer, and ****** next letter with your news.
Best wishes.
modèle: I look forward to hearing from you .
Réponse: Healthy food de nine26, postée le 14-02-2011 à 09:10:15 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- le "where I have understood" est trop calqué sur le français à mon avis,
- je ne suis pas sûre du "advices" au pluriel. Il me semble que c'est comme "information", il ne prend jamais de "s". Il faut par exemple dire "pieces of advice".
A confirmer par un anglophone ou un prof d'anglais...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2011 09:14
Dans le message précédent vous pouvez lire les indications d'un prof d'anglais
Réponse: Healthy food de gerondif, postée le 14-02-2011 à 09:56:24 (S | E)
Hello,
c'est exact ces mots collectifs sont singuliers avec un sens pluriel(luggage, information, advice,furniture,hair)
This information is interesting: ces renseignements.....
Listen to my advice: Ecoutez mes conseils.
Si on en veut un seul, c'est un peu comme pour le chocolat, on en casse un morceau.
a piece of furniture: un meuble.
a piece of advice: un conseil.
a piece of information: un renseignement.
Il est vrai que "I see that, I understand that, I realize that" suffiraient dans ce texte.
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