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Message de jessicaaupy posté le 07-02-2011 à 16:44:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
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Merci
Paris. What do you think of? Champ Elysee avenue, a major shopping street of Paris, with its luxury stores, as Louis Vuitton. Eiffel Tower, symbol of Paris. Many historial monuments and buildings. Paris by night, with its famous clubs and cabarets as Moulin Rouge or Lido. Yes, Paris is a fabulous and attractive city for tourists. But, in this exciting city, always in movement, there are famous gardens to find peace and quiet. My favourite garden is Les buttes Chaumont, situated in the 19th arrondissement, because, only Parisians know this parc. There is few tourists. It was a former gypsum and limestone quarry. It was developed by Haussman and was opened in 1867. In this parc, people climb, run, sit and read books. Summer, many families come to picnic and we can see children running, playing, laughing. Sometimes we can see girls in swimsuit, lying down as if she was on th beach. I love this garden. It is a green paradise in middle of big city.
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Modifié par bridg le 07-02-2011 16:56
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Message de jessicaaupy posté le 07-02-2011 à 16:44:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce paragraphe, s'il vous plaît?
Merci
Paris. What do you think of? Champ Elysee avenue, a major shopping street of Paris, with its luxury stores, as Louis Vuitton. Eiffel Tower, symbol of Paris. Many historial monuments and buildings. Paris by night, with its famous clubs and cabarets as Moulin Rouge or Lido. Yes, Paris is a fabulous and attractive city for tourists. But, in this exciting city, always in movement, there are famous gardens to find peace and quiet. My favourite garden is Les buttes Chaumont, situated in the 19th arrondissement, because, only Parisians know this parc. There is few tourists. It was a former gypsum and limestone quarry. It was developed by Haussman and was opened in 1867. In this parc, people climb, run, sit and read books. Summer, many families come to picnic and we can see children running, playing, laughing. Sometimes we can see girls in swimsuit, lying down as if she was on th beach. I love this garden. It is a green paradise in middle of big city.
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Modifié par bridg le 07-02-2011 16:56
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Réponse: Paris / Correction de notrepere, postée le 07-02-2011 à 17:21:15 (S | E)
Bonjour. Paris. What do you think of?
* [article] Champ Elysee avenue, a major shopping street of Paris, with its luxury stores, such as Louis Vuitton [pas une phrase complète; il manque un verbe]
* [article] Eiffel Tower, a symbol of Paris [pas une phrase complète; il manque un verbe]
* Many historial [orthographe] monuments and buildings [pas une phrase complète; il manque un verbe]
* Paris by night, with its famous clubs and cabarets such as Moulin Rouge or Lido [pas une phrase complète; il manque un verbe]
Yes, Paris is a fabulous and attractive city for tourists. But, in this exciting city, always in movement, there are famous gardens
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La première partie est une liste d'idées car les verbes sont manquants
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