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Message de olyday posté le 06-02-2011 à 18:00:44 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Je dois faire un paragraphe sur cette publicité anglaise : Lien Internet
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Je vous remercie par avance !
What we have here is a poster of the Commission for Racial Equality. The poster is in black and white what emphasizes the various from skin colours and we can see 31 happy face of persons who have various origins. Indeed, there are men, women, elderly persons, young people and even child. Faces recover almost the totality of the poster and below every face, the first name and the district of London where lives the person can be read.
There is also the cathphrase to the left of the poster which says: " Brittany. We all make it unique ". It is about the main message of the poster and below on the right we have a sentence which defines the Britain population and which says: "56 million people, over 300 languges at least 14 faiths make us what we are today ". To finish, we have below this sentence, the logo of the Commission for Racial Equality.
The goal of the CRE is to show the multiplicity of the persons who live in London. Indeed, London being one most world big cities, a lot of persons and students of the whole world come to work there what makes of this city a center possessing the biggest ethnic variety because we find all the nationalities, all the languages and all the faiths.
The necessity of such a campaign is to fight against prejudices with persons who live differently and to encourage the cultural diversity of London.
The catchphrase summarize perfectly the wish of a mixed population in London because every person introduce its culture and its difference to allow to make of London a unique city full of wealth and variety.
This campaign can thus fight against the racism and contribute to spread a peace message between the various races of population.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2011 18:52
Message de olyday posté le 06-02-2011 à 18:00:44 (S | E | F)
Hello,Je dois faire un paragraphe sur cette publicité anglaise : Lien Internet
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Je vous remercie par avance !
What we have here is a poster of the Commission for Racial Equality. The poster is in black and white what emphasizes the various from skin colours and we can see 31 happy face of persons who have various origins. Indeed, there are men, women, elderly persons, young people and even child. Faces recover almost the totality of the poster and below every face, the first name and the district of London where lives the person can be read.
There is also the cathphrase to the left of the poster which says: " Brittany. We all make it unique ". It is about the main message of the poster and below on the right we have a sentence which defines the Britain population and which says: "56 million people, over 300 languges at least 14 faiths make us what we are today ". To finish, we have below this sentence, the logo of the Commission for Racial Equality.
The goal of the CRE is to show the multiplicity of the persons who live in London. Indeed, London being one most world big cities, a lot of persons and students of the whole world come to work there what makes of this city a center possessing the biggest ethnic variety because we find all the nationalities, all the languages and all the faiths.
The necessity of such a campaign is to fight against prejudices with persons who live differently and to encourage the cultural diversity of London.
The catchphrase summarize perfectly the wish of a mixed population in London because every person introduce its culture and its difference to allow to make of London a unique city full of wealth and variety.
This campaign can thus fight against the racism and contribute to spread a peace message between the various races of population.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2011 18:52
Réponse: Correction /Publicity de traviskidd, postée le 06-02-2011 à 20:53:31 (S | E)
Brittany is a region of France!
Réponse: Correction /Publicity de cattie, postée le 07-02-2011 à 13:20:12 (S | E)
Hello,
What we have here is a poster of the Commission for Racial Equality. The poster is in black and white which emphasizes the various skin colours and we can see 31 happy faces of people who vary in origin. Indeed, there are men, women, elderly people, young people and even children. Faces almost completely cover the poster and below every face, the first name and the district of London where the person lives can be read.
There is also the catchphrase to the left of the poster which says: " Brittany. We all make it unique ". It is the main message of the poster and below on the right we have a sentence that defines the British population, which says: "56 million people, over 300 languges and at least 14 faiths make us what we are today ". To finish, we have below this sentence, the logo of the Commission for Racial Equality.
The goal of the CRE is to show the multiplicaction of the people who live in London. Indeed, London, being one of the world's biggest cities, has a lot of people and students from all around the whole world going there to work, which is what makes this city a center possessing the biggest ethnic variety because you can find all the nationalities, all the languages and all the faiths.
The necessity of such a campaign is to fight against prejudices with people who live differently and to encourage the cultural diversity of London.
The catchphrase summarizes perfectly the desire of a mixed population in London because every person introduces a culture with its differences that can make London a unique city full of wealth and variety.
This campaign can thus fight against the racism and contribute to spread a peaceful message between the various races of population.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-02-2011 20:55
Merci pour votre participation mais il est préférable de signaler les fautes, et d'apporter son aide plutôt que de faire le travail qui n'aura plus qu'à être recopié.
Cordialement.
Réponse: Correction /Publicity de olyday, postée le 07-02-2011 à 20:31:07 (S | E)
traviskidd : Je me suis trompée en recopiant trop vite !
cattie : Merci pour votre aide et pour le temps que vous avez passé à corriger mes fautes !
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