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Message de fafo posté le 28-12-2010 à 21:38:07 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir et joyeuses fêtes.
J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à corriger ma parodie( il s'agit de faire une parodie en anglais), voilà ce que j'ai fait:
The three little wolfs and the mediocre pig.
Once open a time, three little wolfs wanted to live their life and leave the family home to attact their chance in the world. The first small wolf constructs a home of straw. The second wolf constructs a home made by sticks and the third small wolf constructs a home of bricks and ciment. The big mediocre pig manages to destroy the houses of the first two small wolfs by blowing over and swallowed up them. On the other hand, it is powerless against the house of the third small wolf.
Then, the pig, very angered, decided to go down by the chimney to eat the three small wolfs. But these hurried up to put a big casserole of water on
fire, and righteous man as the pig went down, they raised the cover, and the wolf fell in scalding water! The small wolfs quickly delayed the cover, and when the pig was cooked, they ate it for the supper.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2010 21:45
Message de fafo posté le 28-12-2010 à 21:38:07 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir et joyeuses fêtes.
J'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à corriger ma parodie( il s'agit de faire une parodie en anglais), voilà ce que j'ai fait:
The three little wolfs and the mediocre pig.
Once open a time, three little wolfs wanted to live their life and leave the family home to attact their chance in the world. The first small wolf constructs a home of straw. The second wolf constructs a home made by sticks and the third small wolf constructs a home of bricks and ciment. The big mediocre pig manages to destroy the houses of the first two small wolfs by blowing over and swallowed up them. On the other hand, it is powerless against the house of the third small wolf.
Then, the pig, very angered, decided to go down by the chimney to eat the three small wolfs. But these hurried up to put a big casserole of water on
fire, and righteous man as the pig went down, they raised the cover, and the wolf fell in scalding water! The small wolfs quickly delayed the cover, and when the pig was cooked, they ate it for the supper.
Merci d'avance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2010 21:45
Réponse: Une parodie de dsmith, postée le 29-12-2010 à 04:18:23 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Très bien fait!
The three little wolfs and the mediocre pig.
Once open a time, three little wolfs (le pluriel de wolf est irregulier) wanted to live their life and leave the family home to attact (misspelled) their chance in the world. The first small wolf constructs a home of straw. The second wolf constructs a home made by (with or of - not by) sticks and the third small wolf constructs a home of bricks and ciment (misspelled). The big mediocre pig manages to destroy the houses of the first two small wolfs by blowing them over and swallowed (you must be consistent in the verb form - you used blowing before - use the gerund again) them up
Then, the pig, very angered, decided to go down by the chimney to eat the three small wolfs. But these (need a subject pronoun) hurried up to put a big casserole of water on
the fire, and righteous man (I don't understand this) as the pig went down, they raised the cover, and the wolf (wasn't it the pig??) fell in scalding water! The small wolfs quickly delayed (mauvais mot) the cover, and when the pig was cooked, they ate it for the supper.
Réponse: Une parodie de alphonse46, postée le 30-12-2010 à 16:44:30 (S | E)
Bonjour, fafo
Cet essai me rappelle un livre intitulé:Les trois petits loups et le grand méchant cochon, écrit par Eugène Trivizas, Helen Oxenbury, Fanny Joly.
Happy New Year
Réponse: Une parodie de lysflower, postée le 30-12-2010 à 16:59:58 (S | E)
Hello,
dont' you think we say :
Once UPON a time...?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-12-2010 17:03
Réponse: Une parodie de dolfine56, postée le 30-12-2010 à 17:03:19 (S | E)
Yes, you are right, lysflower
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