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Message de presc59 posté le 27-12-2010 à 10:38:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît?
Voici le sujet:
you are Jun Mizuno. you have just found this note on your desk.
Your travel agent rang. All flights to Hong Kong on 12 March are full. The first available flight arrives at 8:00 a.m on 13 March. She has booked you on that flight. She also wants to know which hotel you want to stay at.
Write to change your appointment with the international Relations Sed Leefung Plastic (International) Ltd in Hong Kong. Ask them to recommend a hotel to you.
Message plan:
- Put a subject heading
- Say what you are writtingg about (your forthcoming visit to their company)
- Say, infortunately, you will not be in Hong Kong until 13 March (say why)
- Ask if you can meet them on 13 March (At the same time as before)
- Ask them about the hotel
- Close the message
Voici mon travail:
My forthcoming visit to their company
Unfortunately, I will not be in Hong Kong until 13 March because all flights to Hong Kong on 12 March are full. However, I would like to suggest that I arrive at your office at the same time as before for a breakfast meeting.
Could you possibly book hotel accommodation near your office.
I look forward to receiving confirmation of these arrangements.
Yours sincerely
Jun Mizuno.
Voilà, j'espére que j'ai bien répondu au sujet et que je n'ai pas fait beaucoup de fautes.
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2010 15:09
Message de presc59 posté le 27-12-2010 à 10:38:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît?
Voici le sujet:
you are Jun Mizuno. you have just found this note on your desk.
Your travel agent rang. All flights to Hong Kong on 12 March are full. The first available flight arrives at 8:00 a.m on 13 March. She has booked you on that flight. She also wants to know which hotel you want to stay at.
Write to change your appointment with the international Relations Sed Leefung Plastic (International) Ltd in Hong Kong. Ask them to recommend a hotel to you.
Message plan:
- Put a subject heading
- Say what you are writtingg about (your forthcoming visit to their company)
- Say, infortunately, you will not be in Hong Kong until 13 March (say why)
- Ask if you can meet them on 13 March (At the same time as before)
- Ask them about the hotel
- Close the message
Voici mon travail:
My forthcoming visit to their company
Unfortunately, I will not be in Hong Kong until 13 March because all flights to Hong Kong on 12 March are full. However, I would like to suggest that I arrive at your office at the same time as before for a breakfast meeting.
Could you possibly book hotel accommodation near your office.
I look forward to receiving confirmation of these arrangements.
Yours sincerely
Jun Mizuno.
Voilà, j'espére que j'ai bien répondu au sujet et que je n'ai pas fait beaucoup de fautes.
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2010 15:09
Réponse: Corriger un exercice de alphonse46, postée le 27-12-2010 à 11:36:50 (S | E)
Good morning Presc
My forthcoming visit to their company? Whom do you send this letter to?
Réponse: Corriger un exercice de ariane6, postée le 27-12-2010 à 12:52:58 (S | E)
Bonjour Presc,
Voyez la remarque d'Alphonse,
d'autre part vous n'avez pas clairement précisé la nouvelle date proposée pour votre rencontre,
et attention, pour la reservation de l'hôtel, ne pas confondre recommend( et non recomand) et book.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2010 17:04
J'ai corrigé recommend dans le post initial car c'était dans la consigne (mal recopiée)
Réponse: Corriger un exercice de notrepere, postée le 27-12-2010 à 15:52:37 (S | E)
Hello!Et quelque chose est manquante à la fin de cette phrase:
Could you possibly book hotel accommodations near your office.
Le texte en bleu, comme le dit ariane.
Réponse: Corriger un exercice de ariane6, postée le 27-12-2010 à 16:26:27 (S | E)
Hello NP !
Presc, les consignes sont :
Ask them to recommend a hotel to you.
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