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Message from steve_vai0 posted on 15-12-2010 at 18:21:49 (D | E | F)
Hello,
could you please correctto me these simple sentences .
Thank you for your answers.
- My family don't like watching horror films , they like comedy films , My parents like watching most new films at the cinema ,
- My mother likes stay at home when it rains
- My father always repairs stuffs at home when he's not working and specially in Saturday
- My brother likes playing guitar , it's his favorite hobby .
- My mother is a great cooker.
- The both of my little sister and brother are always fighting because of their games .
- From time to time my father practice a shoot game .
- My father take always time deciding to buy expensive things like car or television .
- My mother likes ski sports .
- I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare .
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Edited by lucile83 on 15-12-2010 19:27
Message from steve_vai0 posted on 15-12-2010 at 18:21:49 (D | E | F)
Hello,
could you please correct
Thank you for your answers.
- My family don't like watching horror films , they like comedy films , My parents like watching most new films at the cinema ,
- My mother likes stay at home when it rains
- My father always repairs stuffs at home when he's not working and specially in Saturday
- My brother likes playing guitar , it's his favorite hobby .
- My mother is a great cooker.
- The both of my little sister and brother are always fighting because of their games .
- From time to time my father practice a shoot game .
- My father take always time deciding to buy expensive things like car or television .
- My mother likes ski sports .
- I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare .
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Edited by lucile83 on 15-12-2010 19:27
Re: Correction/sentences from gerondif, posted on 15-12-2010 at 19:35:22 (D | E)
Hello,
My family don't like watching horror films , they like comedy films , My parents like watching most new films at the cinema ,
- My mother likes stay****(gerund, ing form) at home when it rains
- My father always repairs stuffs at home when he's not working and specially in Saturday
- My brother likes playing **** guitar , it's his favorite hobby .
- My mother is a great cooker.(a cooker is the object you cook on, a cook is a person.In French ,both are "une cuisinière")
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- From time to time my father practice a shoot game .
- My father always take** time deciding to buy expensive things like *** car or *** television .
- My mother likes ski sports .
- I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare .
Re: Correction/sentences from notrepere, posted on 15-12-2010 at 22:46:03 (D | E)
Bonjour!- My father ... [comme a dit gerondif/as gerondif said] ... working and especially in [wrong preposition] Saturday.
- My brother likes playing guitar , [semi-colon] it's his favorite
favourite
hobby.- From time to time my father practises
practices a shooting game. (like 'skeet'?)- My mother likes ski sports. [This sounds odd; one usually says 'My mother likes skiing/to ski'] Saying "ski sports" is like saying "football sports".
- I like my family when they are together at home, that's really rare. I think what you mean is: I like it when my family is together ...
Cordialement/Regards.
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Edited by lucile83 on 15-12-2010 22:53
This is the English Only forum np
Re: Correction/sentences from steve_vai0, posted on 16-12-2010 at 00:34:41 (D | E)
Thank you very much
I appreciate it
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