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Message de denassv posté le 12-12-2010 à 16:03:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mon devoir s'il vous plaît ?
J'ai mis quelques questions en plus entre parenthèses.
Charles Dickens
Charles John Huffam Dickens was born in Portsmouth in the County of Hampshire the 7th February (of??) 1812. He died in Gadshill in the Kent the 9th (of??)June 1870.
He was an english author and novelist. He wrote in particular « David Copperfield », « a Christmas Carol » and « Oliver Twist ».
He is counted among the more famous english writers of the 19th century.
His family was poor. He was 12 as he worked in a factory because his father was in prison for debts.
Then he went to school again for 3 years.
He became lawyer’s clerk in 1827 and next worked for the « Morning Herald » and published « Sketches by Boz » in 1835.
He denounced the socials injustices of this time.
He traveled in America in 1840 and was disappointed to see (by seeing ??)slavery.
Dickens wrote a lot of books and he is always famous in the world ; there are films inspired of his books in cinema and television.
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-12-2010 16:46
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Modifié par denassv le 12-12-2010 18:15
Message de denassv posté le 12-12-2010 à 16:03:34 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mon devoir s'il vous plaît ?
J'ai mis quelques questions en plus entre parenthèses.
Charles Dickens
Charles John Huffam Dickens was born in Portsmouth in the County of Hampshire the 7th February (of??) 1812. He died in Gadshill in the Kent the 9th (of??)June 1870.
He was an english author and novelist. He wrote in particular « David Copperfield », « a Christmas Carol » and « Oliver Twist ».
He is counted among the more famous english writers of the 19th century.
His family was poor. He was 12 as he worked in a factory because his father was in prison for debts.
Then he went to school again for 3 years.
He became lawyer’s clerk in 1827 and next worked for the « Morning Herald » and published « Sketches by Boz » in 1835.
He denounced the socials injustices of this time.
He traveled in America in 1840 and was disappointed to see (by seeing ??)slavery.
Dickens wrote a lot of books and he is always famous in the world ; there are films inspired of his books in cinema and television.
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-12-2010 16:46
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Modifié par denassv le 12-12-2010 18:15
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de taconnet, postée le 12-12-2010 à 16:31:11 (S | E)
Bonjour.
Charles John Huffam Dickens was born ... ,on February 7, 1812
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de laure95, postée le 12-12-2010 à 18:42:29 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Charles Dickens
Charles John Huffam Dickens was born in Portsmouth in the County of Hampshire the 7th February (of??) 1812 (ON + MOIS + DATE + ANNEE). He died in Gadshill in the Kent the 9th (of??)June (même remarque) 1870.
He was an english (majuscule) author and novelist. He wrote in particular « David Copperfield », « a Christmas Carol » and « Oliver Twist ».
He is counted among the more famous english writers of the 19th century.
His family was poor. He was 12 as (pas le bon mot) he worked in a factory because his father was in prison for debts.
Then he went to school again for 3 years.
He became a lawyer’s clerk in 1827 and next worked for the « Morning Herald » and published « Sketches by Boz » in 1835.
He denounced the socials (les adjectifs sont invariables) injustices of this (that) time.
He traveled in America in 1840 and was disappointed to see
Dickens wrote a lot of books and he is always famous in the world ; there are films inspired of his books in cinema and television.
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de violet91, postée le 12-12-2010 à 23:04:39 (S | E)
Other corrections..--in the Kent (nom propre sg..donc ?)-- the more(superlatif)writer...--he traveled orth.
...soit le futur simple (to be) always(constance) famous..soit he is (encore = continuité= still)famous.Good night.
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de notrepere, postée le 12-12-2010 à 23:11:12 (S | E)
Bonjour...
A Christmas Carol
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de gerondif, postée le 12-12-2010 à 23:20:00 (S | E)
Hello,
He died in * Kent in 1870 (pas de the)
Il est toujours célèbre: toujours au sens de "continuellement": always? ou au sens de "encore de nos jours": still ?
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de may, postée le 13-12-2010 à 01:25:59 (S | E)
Bonsoir
...went back to school...
Best wishes,
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de taconnet, postée le 13-12-2010 à 10:05:20 (S | E)
Bonjour.
He is
famous English writers of the 19th century.Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de violet91, postée le 13-12-2010 à 16:24:16 (S | E)
Alors ? Young denassy, que proposez-vous après nos conseils ? Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de denassv, postée le 13-12-2010 à 18:16:33 (S | E)
merci pour toutes vos réponses
je reposte mon texte corrigé.
je ne suis pas sûr de tout ce que j'ai marqué
Charles John Huffam Dickens was born in Portsmouth in the County of Hampshire on February 7, 1812. He died in Gadshill in Kent on June 9, 1870.
He was an English author and novelist. He wrote in particular « David Copperfield», «A Christmas Carol » and «Oliver Twist ».
He is among the most famous English writers of the 19th century.
His family was poor. He was 12 when he worked in a factory because his father was in prison for debts.
Then he went back to school for 3 years.
He became a lawyer’s clerk in 1827 and next worked for the « Morning Herald » and published « Sketches by Boz » in 1835.
He denounced the social injustices of that time.
He travelled in America in 1840 and was disappointed to see slavery.
Dickens wrote a lot of books and he is still famous in the world ; there are films inspired from his books at the cinema and on television.
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Modifié par denassv le 13-12-2010 18:22
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-12-2010 22:44
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de violet91, postée le 13-12-2010 à 18:33:16 (S | E)
Thank you, denassy,for answering and your good work. --Une remarque (pour moi) : he wrote n'est pas daté..et vous êtes dans une phrase exprimant le bilan d'aujourd'hui : alors ? Vous avez une autre possibilité de temps.
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de denassv, postée le 13-12-2010 à 19:02:02 (S | E)
je n'ai pas encore appris tous les temps 
passé composé= he has writen???
Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de violet91, postée le 13-12-2010 à 19:28:02 (S | E)
C'est bien !! Voir l'orth. du P.passé de to write. Les Américains emploient le prétérit indifféremment, pas les British.. Réponse: Devoir sur Dickens de gerondif, postée le 13-12-2010 à 19:36:24 (S | E)
oui, written avec 2 t, bon travail pour un élève de douze ans !!
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