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Message de axol38 posté le 10-12-2010 à 12:20:01
Bonjour.
Merci de regarder s'il y a des fautes, ce serait sympathique.
Dear Madam,
In reply to the various information about the candidates for the co location, that you sent me, I you written for you announce the four candidates that I chose and also the two message that I sent to them .
Firstly, as regards the different candidates, I chose 4 candidates who seems to me the most appropriate for a life in co-rent. With the information that I was able to have about this candidates, the four candidates that I have to convene for the final interview to the university Lyon 2 are Henry Patterson, Alexandre Dumartin.....In fact, I think that Henry Patterson is the person who can suit for a co location, I don't think that his age is a problem, a contrary, is a good thing, his experience,his maturity can de beneficial in every co tenant. As regards Alexandre Dumartin, he comes from a big family, so, the life in community isn't a problem for him and In fact, he used to work, to do the cleaning, cooking, washing & even the ironing
Secondly, to convene the pretenders has the final interview who will take place the 10th January to 14pm at the university Lyon2, I their have to leave a first message where I their explain when will takes place the interview and also where is situated the university Lyon 2 with a itinerary since the station Part-Dieu up to the meeting place.
Furthermore, I sent to them a second message for to answer at the question and to avoid misunderstanding where I explain to them the details about the co location with the rent,the characteristic to the house (the surface,number of room...) and also informations about the geographical situation of the house(his distance with the campus). Besides, I given many informations about the modalities to study and work in Canada and also news on Canada,its climate, its geography....
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-12-2010 14:02
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Message de axol38 posté le 10-12-2010 à 12:20:01
Bonjour.
Merci de regarder s'il y a des fautes, ce serait sympathique.
Dear Madam,
In reply to the various information about the candidates for the co location, that you sent me, I you written for you announce the four candidates that I chose and also the two message that I sent to them .
Firstly, as regards the different candidates, I chose 4 candidates who seems to me the most appropriate for a life in co-rent. With the information that I was able to have about this candidates, the four candidates that I have to convene for the final interview to the university Lyon 2 are Henry Patterson, Alexandre Dumartin.....In fact, I think that Henry Patterson is the person who can suit for a co location, I don't think that his age is a problem, a contrary, is a good thing, his experience,his maturity can de beneficial in every co tenant. As regards Alexandre Dumartin, he comes from a big family, so, the life in community isn't a problem for him and In fact, he used to work, to do the cleaning, cooking, washing & even the ironing
Secondly, to convene the pretenders has the final interview who will take place the 10th January to 14pm at the university Lyon2, I their have to leave a first message where I their explain when will takes place the interview and also where is situated the university Lyon 2 with a itinerary since the station Part-Dieu up to the meeting place.
Furthermore, I sent to them a second message for to answer at the question and to avoid misunderstanding where I explain to them the details about the co location with the rent,the characteristic to the house (the surface,number of room...) and also informations about the geographical situation of the house(his distance with the campus). Besides, I given many informations about the modalities to study and work in Canada and also news on Canada,its climate, its geography....
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-12-2010 14:02
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Réponse: Rédaction /colocation de lamy, postée le 10-12-2010 à 14:03:11
bonjour
Des phrases comme: I you written for you announce ou I their explain when will takes place the interview sentent la traduction automatique à plein nez.
Désolée, mais je ne donne pas de mon temps à ceux ou celles qui font un clic de souris sur un traducteur.
