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Message de elii-se posté le 26-11-2010 à 10:42:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous s'il vous plait m'aider à corrigerl'anglais de ces quelques phrases:
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are suggested in the lawsuit. Also mentioned is the fact that there are no warning labels to inform people that the use of XXXs can cause loss of hearing.
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause damage because with it, you can experience hearing loss. No XXX has a warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the normal decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to hear music at high decibel levels. Because it is possible to do this, it’s dangerous. Any labels on the players should state this. Moreover, ear buds are also defective for me because with them, sound is closer to the ear canal than other sound sources. I want XXX to include a cap of 100 decibels for player sound. In spite of AXXX limiting XXX to producing 100 decibels of sound in France, users in other countries can still use their XXX players at high decibels of sound.
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay damages to XXX users and to Jxxx to compensate for the hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx sold a dangerous product and if someone put a defective product like XXX on the market, he must to repair it.
5. The associated press is reporting the suit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, hearing XXX is bad for audition. You can come deaf if you hear it at more high level.
Merci pour votre aide! Elise.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-11-2010 11:18
encore un peu de xxx ajoutés
Message de elii-se posté le 26-11-2010 à 10:42:44 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous s'il vous plait m'aider à corriger
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are suggested in the lawsuit. Also mentioned is the fact that there are no warning labels to inform people that the use of XXXs can cause loss of hearing.
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause damage because with it, you can experience hearing loss. No XXX has a warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the normal decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to hear music at high decibel levels. Because it is possible to do this, it’s dangerous. Any labels on the players should state this. Moreover, ear buds are also defective for me because with them, sound is closer to the ear canal than other sound sources. I want XXX to include a cap of 100 decibels for player sound. In spite of AXXX limiting XXX to producing 100 decibels of sound in France, users in other countries can still use their XXX players at high decibels of sound.
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay damages to XXX users and to Jxxx to compensate for the hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx sold a dangerous product and if someone put a defective product like XXX on the market, he must to repair it.
5. The associated press is reporting the suit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, hearing XXX is bad for audition. You can come deaf if you hear it at more high level.
Merci pour votre aide! Elise.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-11-2010 11:18
encore un peu de xxx ajoutés
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de may, postée le 26-11-2010 à 21:31:39 (S | E)
Bonjour
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are suggested in the lawsuit. Also sujet manquant mentioned (is the fact) that there are no warning labels to inform people that the use of XXXs can cause loss of hearing hearing loss.
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause besoin un nom damage because (with it,) you can experience hearing loss when.... No XXX has (a) warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the normal decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to hear un autre verbe music at high decibel levels. Because (it is possible to do)préposition this, it’s dangerous. Any labels on the players should state choisir autre verbe this cette phrase n'a pas de sens, et vous répéter la même idée plusieur fois. Moreover, ear buds are also defective pas bon ? for me because(with)quand je le porte them, sound is closer to the ear canal than article other sound sources. I want XXX (to include) a cap of 100 decibels for player sound. In spite of AXXX limiting XXX to producing 100 decibels of sound in France, users in other countries can still use their XXX players at high decibels of sound.
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay (damages)compensation to XXX users and to Jxxx( to compensate) for the ajdectif possessif hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx sold a dangerous product and if someone put a defective product like XXX on the market, he must to repair it.
5. The associated press is reporting the suit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, hearing utiliser XXX is bad for audition. You can come verbe to be deaf if you hear autre verbe it at (more) higher level.
Bleu : ma suggestion
(...) pour omettre
Vert: reconstruire la phrase
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-11-2010 22:44
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de notrepere, postée le 27-11-2010 à 04:22:35 (S | E)
Hello!1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are suggested [pas le meilleur verbe] in the lawsuit. Also mentioned is the fact that there are no warning labels to inform people that the use of XXXs can cause loss of hearing.
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause damage because with it, you can experience hearing loss. No XXX has a warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the normal [le mot 'safe' est mieux] decibel levels for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to hear [écouter] music at high decibel levels. Because it is possible to do this, it’s dangerous. Any labels on the players should state this. Moreover, I think ear buds are also defective
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay damages to XXX users and to Jxxx to compensate for the hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx sold [temps: présent continu] a dangerous product and if someone puts a defective product like XXX on the market, he must to repair it.
5. The associated press is reporting the lawsuit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, hearing XXX is bad for audition [pas le bon choix]. You can come [devenir] deaf if you hear [écouter] it at more high (higher) levels.
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de elii-se, postée le 28-11-2010 à 17:47:41 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup à vous pour votre correction, voici la correction que j'en retire, reste-t-il des erreurs?
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are described in the lawsuit. Also they mentioned that there are no warning labels to inform people that the use of XXXs can cause hearing loss.
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause a damage because (with it,) you can experience hearing loss when you hear XXX at high level. No XXX has warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the safe decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to listen music at high decibel levels. Because it, it’s dangerous. Moreover, I think ear buds are also defective pas bon ? for me because with them, sound is closer to the ear canal than an other sound sources. I want XXX to include a cap of 100 decibels for player sound output. In spite of AXXX limiting XXX to producing 100 decibels of sound in France, users in other countries can still use their XXX players at high decibels of levels.
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay (damages)compensation to XXX users and to Jxxx( to compensate) for the ajdectif possessif hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx sell a dangerous product and if someone puts a defective product like XXX on the market, he must to repair it.
5. The associated press is reporting the suit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, using XXX is bad for audition. You can become deaf if you listen it at more higher levels.
Elise ;)
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de may, postée le 29-11-2010 à 01:40:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are described brought, je pense in the lawsuit. Also they mentioned that there are no warning labels to inform people
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause a damage because (with it,) you can experience hearing loss when you hear XXX at high level. No XXX has warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the safe decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to listen to the music at high decibel levels. Because préposition
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay (damages)compensation to XXX users and to Jxxx( to compensate) for the ajdectif possessif hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx sell to be+verb+ing a dangerous product and if someone puts a defective product like XXX on the market, he must
5. The associated press is reporting the suit lawsuit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, using XXX is bad for audition auditive perception. You can become deaf if you listen prép. it at more higher levels.
Elise ;)
I follow up notrepere's correction and I think it's all right
Bonne nuit
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de elii-se, postée le 01-12-2010 à 10:05:04 (S | E)
Bonjour, merci pour votre aide qui m'aide réellement, néanmoins, reste-t-il des erreurs?
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are described brought, in the lawsuit. Also they mentioned that there are no warning labels to inform people about the use of XXXs which can cause hearing loss.
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause damage because you can experience hearing loss when you hear XXX at high level. No XXX has warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the safe decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to listen to the music at high decibel levels. Because that, it’s dangerous. Moreover, I think ear buds are also defective for me because with them, sound is closer to the ear canal than another sound source. I want XXX to include a cap of 100 decibels for player sound output. In spite of AXXX limiting XXX to producing 100 decibels of sound in France, users in other countries can still use their XXX players at high levels of decibels.
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay compensation to XXX users and to Jxxx( to compensate) for their hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx was selling to a dangerous product and if someone puts a defective product like XXX on the market, he must to repair it.
5. The associated press is reporting the suit lawsuit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, using XXX is bad for audition auditive perception. You can become deaf if you listen that at more higher levels.
Another correction, thank you very much!
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de may, postée le 01-12-2010 à 17:57:55 (S | E)
Bonjour
1. US District court: Defects in the XXX’s design are
2. Jxxx is the claimant. For me, XXX can cause damage to the auditory system because you can experience hearing loss or hearing deficiencies when you hear XXX at high level. No XXX has warning label and they’re all defective in design which could all lead to hearing loss. XXXs are defective because they aren’t limited to the safe decibel level for not causing hearing loss but they allow users to listen to the music at high decibel levels. Because of that, it’s dangerous. Moreover, I think ear buds are also defective for me because with them, sound is closer to the ear canal than
3. Firm AXXX spokesperson: Finally, we have put warning labels on each XXX to warn users that listening to XXXs at high decibel levels is dangerous. We must nevertheless pay compensation to XXX users and to Jxxx( to compensate) for their hearing loss. We were forced to improve our design, and we have limited sound to 100 decibels in France.
4. Berman: Currently, xxx was selling
5. The associated press is reporting the suit.
6. Medical specialist is agreeing with Jxxx, using XXX is bad for
Best wishes,
Réponse: X can cause hearing loss de elii-se, postée le 03-12-2010 à 09:41:20 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup à tous pour votre aide et vos corrections!
Bonne journée
Elise
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-12-2010 15:24
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