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Message de dreaming-today posté le 21-11-2010 à 11:21:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
je dois me présenter en anglais à une assistante d'anglais et j'aimerais savoir si ma présentation est correcte:
Hi, My name is Paula, I come from France, Aix-en-Provence next to Marseille. I celebrated my 14 years old two month ago on the 18th of September. I live in Biot since 2001 in a house with my family. I'm an only child but my parents adopted a dog, Snoopy (like the comic strip) for me when I was 7 to feel less lonely.
I'm not really good-natured: i'm absent-minded, clumsy, jealous, a little bit shy, impatient, pessimistic sometimes lazy and very talkative.
I speak french and I learn english and italian at shcool, and spanish with my grand-mother. I dance each tuesday after shcool since I am 7 but I stopped 3 years ago to play tennis.
I enjoy hanging out with friends to go to the cinema or do some shopping on Wednesdays, Saturdays and Sundays when I don't work. In the weekend, I read a lot, watch TV, write texts and I cook sometimes.
I love travelling: I have already visited Italia in May, Spain in July and I go in Maroc for Christmas to see my family. Later, I'd like to go to New-York, London, Australia and Caribbean.
Les phrases/expressions en rouges sont celles que je pense fausses ou mal dites.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-11-2010 11:22
Message de dreaming-today posté le 21-11-2010 à 11:21:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
je dois me présenter en anglais à une assistante d'anglais et j'aimerais savoir si ma présentation est correcte:
Hi, My name is Paula, I come from France, Aix-en-Provence next to Marseille. I celebrated my 14 years old two month ago on the 18th of September. I live in Biot since 2001 in a house with my family. I'm an only child but my parents adopted a dog, Snoopy (like the comic strip) for me when I was 7 to feel less lonely.
I'm not really good-natured: i'm absent-minded, clumsy, jealous, a little bit shy, impatient, pessimistic sometimes lazy and very talkative.
I speak french and I learn english and italian at shcool, and spanish with my grand-mother. I dance each tuesday after shcool since I am 7 but I stopped 3 years ago to play tennis.
I enjoy hanging out with friends to go to the cinema or do some shopping on Wednesdays, Saturdays and Sundays when I don't work. In the weekend, I read a lot, watch TV, write texts and I cook sometimes.
I love travelling: I have already visited Italia in May, Spain in July and I go in Maroc for Christmas to see my family. Later, I'd like to go to New-York, London, Australia and Caribbean.
Les phrases/expressions en rouges sont celles que je pense fausses ou mal dites.
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-11-2010 11:22
Réponse: Introduce myself/correction de laure95, postée le 21-11-2010 à 12:47:06 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici ce que tu dois corriger:
Hi, My name is Paula, I come from France, Aix-en-Provence next to Marseille. I celebrated my 14 years old (dis simplement que tu as 14 ans depuis 2 mois) two month ago (donc à changer >+ pluriel sur month) (mets 1 point et dis que tu es né le...) on the 18th of September. I live (présent perfect avec since) in Biot since 2001 in a house with my family. I'm an only child but my parents adopted a dog, Snoopy (like the comic strip) for me when I was 7 to feel less lonely (OK).
I'm not really good-natured: i'm absent-minded, clumsy, jealous, a little bit shy, impatient, pessimistic sometimes lazy and very talkative.
I speak french and I learn english and italian at shcool, and spanish (les langues prennent une majuscule) with my grand-mother (pas de tiret). I dance (present perfect + since) each tuesday (majuscule) after shcool since I am (tu n'as plus 7 ans, donc le prétérit) 7 but I stopped 3 years ago to play tennis.
I enjoy hanging out with friends to go to the cinema or do some shopping on Wednesdays, Saturdays and Sundays when I don't work. In the weekend, I read a lot, watch TV, write texts and I cook sometimes (pas à la bonne place).
I love travelling: I have already visited Italia in May, Spain in July and I go in Maroc for Christmas to see my family. Later, I'd like to go to New-York, London, Australia and Caribbean.
Réponse: Introduce myself/correction de dsmith, postée le 21-11-2010 à 13:58:46 (S | E)
J'ajoute aux conseils déjà donnés:
shcool - school
Italia - ce n'est pas anglais - c'est l'italien
In the weekend - les prépositions sont difficiles. Je dis "On the weekend..."
I enjoy hanging out with friends to go to the cinema or do some shopping on Wednesdays, Saturdays and Sundays when I don't work. In the weekend, I read a lot, watch TV, write texts and I cook sometimes. Il faut un accord avec toutes les verbes.
soit tous avec la forme -ing ou tous avec l'infinitif.
"I like to hang out with friends, to go ..."
ou "I enjoy hanging out with friends, going to..." etc.
I go in Maroc for Christmas to see my family. You go TO a country en anglais. C'est le futur - il faut utiliser le futur
I celebrated my 14 years old - I celebrated my 14th birthday...
voir Lien Internet
New-York - sans tiret. Et moi je préfère préciser New York City - parce que l'état de New York est beaucoup plus grand/important... que New York City.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-11-2010 14:00
On the weekend is used in US
At the weekend is used in UK
Réponse: Introduce myself/correction de alearner, postée le 25-11-2010 à 17:06:29 (S | E)
Bonjour,
j'espère que ma réponse ne vient pas trop tard et pourra aussi t'aider!
Comme l'a dit laure95, je pense qu'il est préférable que tu dises simplement ton nom, que tu fasses attention au pluriel des mots. Je préfère aussi que tu dises Every week-end parce que je suppose que c'est une habitude pour toi de faire ces choses les week-end n'est ce pas. A part cela je pense que les autres ont tout dit.
Bye et bonne chance!
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