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Message de lillyrose posté le 18-08-2010 à 19:27:13
Bonjour,
Serait-il possible de me corriger s'il vous plaît?(fautes grammaticales & orthographes). Merci pour votre aide.
Subjects: Are experiments made on animals to test new products or new medecines really useful and necessary?Should we stop them?give your opinion.
Animals testing is like necessary to insure the products safety and to find new therapies.In reality she is not useful to uge effects and dangers of chemical substances on the human.These testings don't keep theirs promesses.Theirss results can't be directly applicable to the human.
The animal experimentation is dangerous.We often listen that the animal testings are necessary.Tests on a whole body would be necessary to devellop medicines.Animal can't be whle bodies, but they aren't the adequate bodies.The anatomy,the physiology and the metabolism of animals and humans are totally different.Even different animal species can react on a way totally against chemical substances or against medicines.From testing results made on animals we can't predict if a human will react in a identical way or different way.
These experimentations are unethical for animals.Every days 115 millions animals dead in industrial laboratories,universities...Animals are like disposable instruments.These experimentation isn't consistent with medicine and a science morally justifiable.We should stop it ,these methods are cruel and immoral.
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Modifié par bridg le 18-08-2010 19:39
Bonjour.
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre, de ne pas donner de corrections toutes faites mais de proposer des pistes de réflexion, des éléments, permettant au membre demandeur un travail en commun menant à s'auto corriger.
Merci pour votre participation.)
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Modifié par bridg le 19-08-2010 00:41
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Message de lillyrose posté le 18-08-2010 à 19:27:13
Bonjour,
Serait-il possible de me corriger s'il vous plaît?(fautes grammaticales & orthographes). Merci pour votre aide.
Subjects: Are experiments made on animals to test new products or new medecines really useful and necessary?Should we stop them?give your opinion.
Animals testing is like necessary to insure the products safety and to find new therapies.In reality she is not useful to uge effects and dangers of chemical substances on the human.These testings don't keep theirs promesses.Theirss results can't be directly applicable to the human.
The animal experimentation is dangerous.We often listen that the animal testings are necessary.Tests on a whole body would be necessary to devellop medicines.Animal can't be whle bodies, but they aren't the adequate bodies.The anatomy,the physiology and the metabolism of animals and humans are totally different.Even different animal species can react on a way totally against chemical substances or against medicines.From testing results made on animals we can't predict if a human will react in a identical way or different way.
These experimentations are unethical for animals.Every days 115 millions animals dead in industrial laboratories,universities...Animals are like disposable instruments.These experimentation isn't consistent with medicine and a science morally justifiable.We should stop it ,these methods are cruel and immoral.
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Modifié par bridg le 18-08-2010 19:39
Bonjour.
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre, de ne pas donner de corrections toutes faites mais de proposer des pistes de réflexion, des éléments, permettant au membre demandeur un travail en commun menant à s'auto corriger.
Merci pour votre participation.)
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Modifié par bridg le 19-08-2010 00:41
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Réponse: experiments/Correction de benboom, postée le 18-08-2010 à 20:10:46
First paragraph: "Subjects: Are experiments made on animals to test new products or new medecines really useful and necessary?Should we stop them?give your opinion."
Your first word should probably be "topics", not "subjects".
In English, experiments are not "made"; they are performed. So you should change that one. "Medecines" isn't spelled right. And the usual form for indicating that a response is expected on a test would be "state your opinion"; "give your opinion" isn't exactly wrong for this simple imperative, but it is awkward and I've certainly never seen it in this context.
Additionally, in English there is a space between the period at the end of a sentence and the next sentence. Take a look - right in front of this sentence is a space.
À vous!
Réponse: experiments/Correction de notrepere, postée le 18-08-2010 à 23:35:02
Hello!(Was this translated using an automated translator?) Il y a trop de choses qui n'a pas de sens.
"In reality SHE is not useful to UGE..."
"Animals can't be while bodies"
Je suggère que vous postez aussi le texte français.
Cordialement
