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Correction - G20
Message de sushis posté le 04-07-2010 à 03:09:05 (S | E | F)
Hello, here is my essay.
Thanks to people who will underline(s) the mistakes.
In Toronto on June 26th-27th, leaders of the G20 group of big economies gathered for the fourth time. The first time was in Washington, D.C. on 2008. The G20 summit was created as a response both to the financial crisis of 2007-2010 and to a growing recognition that key emerging countries were not adequately included in the core of global economic discussion and governance in the former main economic council, the G8.
Disagreement are brewing over how the global economy's fragile recovery should best be steered. On the one hand, Keynesian think that savage budget cuts will fell a fragile recovery and condemn the rich world to deflation. Barack Obama thinks like this, but neither the G20 nor the United States Congress agree.
On the other hand like Hoover in his time (Hoover was the US president during 1929 to 1933), most of the countries, especially European ones (thanks to Greece's sovereign debt crisis) think that austerity is the good solution and that spending cuts and tax increases will reassure people on the health of the states and encourage them to invest and consume more.
Austerity may not completely save the economy, but could be the better solution if economy makers want to avoid a bigger crisis at midterm. A crisis now is preferable at a bigger crisis later.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-07-2010 07:55
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Modifié par sushis le 22-07-2010 00:56
Thank you Lucile and NotrePere for the correction.
Message de sushis posté le 04-07-2010 à 03:09:05 (S | E | F)
Hello, here is my essay.
Thanks to people who will underline
In Toronto on June 26th-27th, leaders of the G20 group of big economies gathered for the fourth time. The first time was in Washington, D.C. on 2008. The G20 summit was created as a response both to the financial crisis of 2007-2010 and to a growing recognition that key emerging countries were not adequately included in the core of global economic discussion and governance in the former main economic council, the G8.
Disagreement are brewing over how the global economy's fragile recovery should best be steered. On the one hand, Keynesian think that savage budget cuts will fell a fragile recovery and condemn the rich world to deflation. Barack Obama thinks like this, but neither the G20 nor the United States Congress agree.
On the other hand like Hoover in his time (Hoover was the US president during 1929 to 1933), most of the countries, especially European ones (thanks to Greece's sovereign debt crisis) think that austerity is the good solution and that spending cuts and tax increases will reassure people on the health of the states and encourage them to invest and consume more.
Austerity may not completely save the economy, but could be the better solution if economy makers want to avoid a bigger crisis at midterm. A crisis now is preferable at a bigger crisis later.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-07-2010 07:55
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Modifié par sushis le 22-07-2010 00:56
Thank you Lucile and NotrePere for the correction.
Réponse: Correction - G20 de notrepere, postée le 08-07-2010 à 23:21:10 (S | E)
Bonjour! Personne ne vous aide ?In Toronto on June 26th-27th, leaders of the G20 group of big economies gathered for the fourth time. The first time was in Washington, D.C. on [mal préposition] 2008. The G20 summit was created as a response both to the financial crisis of 2007-2010 and to a growing recognition that key emerging countries were not adequately included in the core of global economic discussion and governance in the former main economic council, the G8.
Disagreement [pluriel] are brewing over how the global economy's fragile recovery should best be steered. On the one hand, Keynesian [pluriel] think that savage budget cuts will fell a fragile recovery and condemn the rich world to deflation. Barack Obama thinks like this, but neither the G20 nor the United States Congress agree.
On the other hand like Hoover in his time (Hoover was the US president during (from) 1929 to 1933), most of the countries, especially European ones (thanks to Greece's sovereign debt crisis) think that austerity is the good [superlatif (forme irrégulière)] solution and that spending cuts and tax increases will reassure people on the health of the states and encourage them to invest and consume more.
Austerity may not completely save the economy, but could be the better solution if economy makers want to avoid a bigger crisis at midterm. A crisis now is preferable at [mal préposition] a bigger crisis later.
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Modifié par notrepere le 11-07-2010 04:47
Le sujet de ce fil doit être "Notrepere correction"
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Modifié par willy le 11-07-2010 09:57
Pourquoi pas, après tout ? Je vais te dire ceci : dans l'ensemble, tes phrases sont correctes. Congratulations! Parfois, comme dans ma correction sur ce fil, ce sont de petites phrases spontanées "de tous les jours" qui demandent une modification.
Réponse: Correction - G20 de may, postée le 11-07-2010 à 03:26:40 (S | E)
Hello notrepere, une très très petite modification: Il me semble (emploi pronominal)..., n'est-ce pas?
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