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Message de missdu13 posté le 07-05-2010 à 13:29:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai un exposé à faire en anglais sur la révolution industrielle en angleterre ;pouvez-vousme corriger mes fautes svp s'il vous plaît ? 
Merci beaucoup
Aurore
Csq social et econonique ...????
With all this progress, industries developed only in big cities like Liverpool. People had to moved in this cities. So the cottage industries disappeared. In the industries workers were paid just a little bit. Rich for some misery for others, this sentence illustrate well the situation in England.
Oil / Gas power
Energy comes from fuel engines can use a lot of types of combustible such as coal , oil, diesel, and gas. To create steam, coal is needed to head water .
Gas engines were created in 1867 it was the main source of power for smaller industries this source of power was used in workshops, sawmills and printing and food business.
The German Nikolaus August Otto invented the Rophca Otto Engine in 1876.
Royce Motor car engine was the 1st car, which was created in 1904 by Frederick Henry Royce. This car used oil energy.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-05-2010 17:48
Message de missdu13 posté le 07-05-2010 à 13:29:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
j'ai un exposé à faire en anglais sur la révolution industrielle en angleterre ;pouvez-vous
Merci beaucoup
Aurore
Csq social et econonique ...????
With all this progress, industries developed only in big cities like Liverpool. People had to moved in this cities. So the cottage industries disappeared. In the industries workers were paid just a little bit. Rich for some misery for others, this sentence illustrate well the situation in England.
Oil / Gas power
Energy comes from fuel engines can use a lot of types of combustible such as coal , oil, diesel, and gas. To create steam, coal is needed to head water .
Gas engines were created in 1867 it was the main source of power for smaller industries this source of power was used in workshops, sawmills and printing and food business.
The German Nikolaus August Otto invented the Rophca Otto Engine in 1876.
Royce Motor car engine was the 1st car, which was created in 1904 by Frederick Henry Royce. This car used oil energy.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-05-2010 17:48
Réponse: Correction /industrial revolution de ricou81, postée le 07-05-2010 à 14:49:29 (S | E)
Bonjour,
quelques remarques :
-people had to move
-Riches for some, misery for others..
- sentence (3eme personne donc -s) illustrates
-vérifier "combustible" dans dico
-to heat water , et vérifier ponctuation dans la phrase commençant par Gas engines. Bon courage
Réponse: Correction /industrial revolution de notrepere, postée le 09-05-2010 à 04:30:41 (S | E)
Hello!Energy comes from fuel engines can use a lot of types of combustible such as coal , oil, diesel, and gas.
Notice how the meaning changes when you rewrite it like this:
The energy produced by combustion engines comes from the combustion of fuels such as coal, oil, diesel, and gas.
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