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Message de bamb09 posté le 28-04-2010 à 19:22:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai une petite expression écrite en anglais à rendre.
Pourriez-vous me dire les fautes que j'ai faites ainsi que les éléments que je pourrais ajouter ou la mise en forme que je pourrais changer pour améliorer le texte.
Merci à tous ceux qui peuvent m'aider!
Austria is a small European country about six time smaller than France surround by Germany (n w) Switzerland (w) Italy (sw) Slovenia (s e) Hungary (e) Slovakia (ne) and Czech Republic (n). Its capital is Vienna who is a city of 107 million of citizen. Its area is of 83 858 km2 and its density of population is of 97.20 citizens a km2. 8.1millon of citizens live in this country. Austrians speak German and their currency is the euro. It entered in EU in 1995. Its national day is on 26 October (This date correspond to the neutrality constitution of 1955 who was a declaration by the Austrian Parliament declaring the country permanently neutral). Austria is a federal republic presided by Heinz Fischer and the chancellor Werner Faymann. Its motto is AEIOU (austriae est imperare orbi universe) It is Austria’s destiny to rule the whole world
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2010 20:09
Message de bamb09 posté le 28-04-2010 à 19:22:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai une petite expression écrite en anglais à rendre.
Pourriez-vous me dire les fautes que j'ai faites ainsi que les éléments que je pourrais ajouter ou la mise en forme que je pourrais changer pour améliorer le texte.
Merci à tous ceux qui peuvent m'aider!
Austria is a small European country about six time smaller than France surround by Germany (n w) Switzerland (w) Italy (sw) Slovenia (s e) Hungary (e) Slovakia (ne) and Czech Republic (n). Its capital is Vienna who is a city of 107 million of citizen. Its area is of 83 858 km2 and its density of population is of 97.20 citizens a km2. 8.1millon of citizens live in this country. Austrians speak German and their currency is the euro. It entered in EU in 1995. Its national day is on 26 October (This date correspond to the neutrality constitution of 1955 who was a declaration by the Austrian Parliament declaring the country permanently neutral). Austria is a federal republic presided by Heinz Fischer and the chancellor Werner Faymann. Its motto is AEIOU (austriae est imperare orbi universe) It is Austria’s destiny to rule the whole world
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2010 20:09
Réponse: Austria/correction de notrepere, postée le 28-04-2010 à 22:27:01 (S | E)
Hello!Austria is a small European country about six time smaller than France surround by Germany (n w) Switzerland (w) Italy (sw) Slovenia (s e) Hungary (e) Slovakia (ne) and [article]Czech Republic (n). Its capital is Vienna who is a city of 107 million
] by Heinz Fischer and the chancellor Werner Faymann. Its motto is AEIOU (austriae est imperare orbi universe). It is Austria’s destiny to rule the whole world.
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Modifié par notrepere le 28-04-2010 23:35
Réponse: Austria/correction de bamb09, postée le 29-04-2010 à 18:27:07 (S | E)
It's good?
Austria is a small European country about six time smaller than France surrounded by Germany (n w) Switzerland (w) Italy (sw) Slovenia (s e) Hungary (e) Slovakia (ne) and the Czech Republic (n). Its capital is Vienna that is a city of 107 million of citizens. Its area is of 83 858 km2 and its density of population is of 97.20 citizens a km2. 8.1millon of citizens live in this country. Austrians speak German and their currency is the euro. It entered in [into the]? EU in 1995. Its national day is on 26 October (This date corresponds to the neutrality constitution of 1955 that was a declaration by the Austrian Parliament declaring the country permanently neutral). Austria is a federal republic whose the president is Heinz Fischer and the chancellor Werner Faymann. Its motto is AEIOU (austriae est imperare orbi universe). It is Austria’s destiny to rule the whole world.
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