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Ten commandments
Message de jujusoleil posté le 25-04-2010 à 11:45:58
Bonjour, je dois faire les 10 commandements en forme ironique sur ce que les enfants doivent respecter:
1.Let your children play at least 4 hours of video games per day
2.For the well-being of your child, it is essential that he does not go to bed before 11 o'clock
3.Forbid has your child to tidy up his room, and to clean it.
4.To incite your child has not to do homework
5.Teach to your child well behavior at table: for example put feet on the table
6.Also learn the good manners has your child when you take the public transportation: do not give up the place to the old persons, and to the persons handicapped persons
7.For its education, it is essential that dices his youngest age you teach to him to be impolite, not to say hello or still to pull the language
8.To teach the healthy lifestyle has your child, wash that once a week
9.During the quarrels between companions, to oblige your child struck (knocked)
10. Learn the lie has your child.
Voilà, pouvez-vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance.
Jujusoleil
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2010 11:47
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2010 14:16
Message de jujusoleil posté le 25-04-2010 à 11:45:58
Bonjour, je dois faire les 10 commandements en forme ironique sur ce que les enfants doivent respecter:
1.Let your children play at least 4 hours of video games per day
2.For the well-being of your child, it is essential that he does not go to bed before 11 o'clock
3.Forbid has your child to tidy up his room, and to clean it.
4.To incite your child has not to do homework
5.Teach to your child well behavior at table: for example put feet on the table
6.Also learn the good manners has your child when you take the public transportation: do not give up the place to the old persons, and to the persons handicapped persons
7.For its education, it is essential that dices his youngest age you teach to him to be impolite, not to say hello or still to pull the language
8.To teach the healthy lifestyle has your child, wash that once a week
9.During the quarrels between companions, to oblige your child struck (knocked)
10. Learn the lie has your child.
Voilà, pouvez-vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance.
Jujusoleil
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2010 11:47
+ titre
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-04-2010 14:16
Réponse: Ten commandments de lucile83, postée le 25-04-2010 à 14:16:46
Hello,
Je viens de relire vos phrases et je soupçonne l'usage d'un traducteur automatique.
Voir la traduction de: à = has
ce qui n'a aucun sens.
Merci de revoir tout ça car nous ne pouvons pas corriger dans ces conditions.
Cordialement.
