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Message de tulipe12 posté le 09-04-2010 à 18:03:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici un nouvel exercice, encore très simple.
Traduisez s'il vous plaît le texte suivant
Correction le 16 avril .
Mon journal intime
Chère Laura
Comment vas-tu ? Moi, je vais bien.
Je t'appelle Laura mais tu n'es pas un humain. Tu n'es qu'un journal. Un journal stupide qui ne peut pas répondre. Mais tu es mon journal, c'est le plus important !
Je m'appelle Grace, j'ai 15 ans. Je suis anglaise, je vis à Londres. J'ai une soeur : Kitty. Elle a 10 ans.
J'ai un petit ami qui s'appelle John. Il est si beau, si intelligent ! Moi, je ne travaille pas bien à l'école...
Ma meilleure amie est Lucy, elle a 15 ans, comme moi.
J'aime tout le monde, excepté Ariane. Elle est trop intelligente, trop belle, et elle est française !
Bisous,
Grace
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Modifié par tulipe12 le 11-04-2010 17:23
Message de tulipe12 posté le 09-04-2010 à 18:03:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici un nouvel exercice, encore très simple.
Traduisez s'il vous plaît le texte suivant
Correction le 16 avril .
Mon journal intime
Chère Laura
Comment vas-tu ? Moi, je vais bien.
Je t'appelle Laura mais tu n'es pas un humain. Tu n'es qu'un journal. Un journal stupide qui ne peut pas répondre. Mais tu es mon journal, c'est le plus important !
Je m'appelle Grace, j'ai 15 ans. Je suis anglaise, je vis à Londres. J'ai une soeur : Kitty. Elle a 10 ans.
J'ai un petit ami qui s'appelle John. Il est si beau, si intelligent ! Moi, je ne travaille pas bien à l'école...
Ma meilleure amie est Lucy, elle a 15 ans, comme moi.
J'aime tout le monde, excepté Ariane. Elle est trop intelligente, trop belle, et elle est française !
Bisous,
Grace
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Modifié par tulipe12 le 11-04-2010 17:23
Réponse: My diary/Thème de lamy, postée le 09-04-2010 à 22:06:24 (S | E)
bonsoir tulipe
Il faut bien que quelqu'un ouvre le bal ... alors je me lance:
My personal diary
Dear Laura
How are you? I'm fine.
I call you Laura but you are not a human being. You're only just a diary. A silly diary that can't reply. But you're my diary, that's most important.
My name is Grace, I'm 15. I'm British, I live in London. I've got a sister: Kitty. She's 10. I've got a boyfriend; his name's John. He's so cute, and so clever! I don't work very well at school…
My best friend is Lucy, she's 15, just like me.
I like everybody but Ariane. She is too bright, too glamorous and, what's more, she's French!
Love
Grace
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Modifié par lamy le 10-04-2010 21:31
Réponse: My diary/Thème de lucile83, postée le 09-04-2010 à 23:16:23 (S | E)
Hello tulipe,
J'emboîte le pas à lamy, en espérant ne pas faire de faux-pas à mon tour !
Best wishes
My diary,
How are you? I'm quite fine.
I call you Laura but you're not a human being.You are just a diary.A stupid diary unable to answer.Still you are my diary, that's the most important thing.
My name is Grace,I'm 15. I'm English and I live in London.I have got a sister: Kitty.She is 10.
I have got a boyfriend whose name is John.He is so handsome, so intelligent! I don't actually work hard at school...
My best friend is Lucy, she is 15, like me.
I like everybody but Ariane.She is too clever,too lovely, and on top of that she is French!
Love,
Grace
Réponse: My diary/Thème de robertbrou, postée le 10-04-2010 à 01:37:18 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Here's my
spin, which is kinda funny since it takes place in London. Hope you enjoy it.My Diary
Dear Laura,
How are you? I'm fine.
I'm calling you Laura but you're not human. You're only a diary. A stupid book that cannot talk. But you are mine, which is the most important.
My name is Grace. I'm 15 years old. I'm English and live in London. I have sister who's name is Kitty. She's 10.
I have a boyfriend whose name is John. He is so handsome and smart! I myself, am not doing so well in school...
My best friend is Lucy. She's 15, like me.
I like everyone, except Ariane. She's too smart, too pretty, and French!
XOX,
Grace
Réponse: My diary/Thème de sanna6, postée le 10-04-2010 à 22:11:12 (S | E)
Bonsoir Tulipe,
Merci bien pour ce nouvel exercice.
My diary
Dear Laura,
How are you ? Me, I'm fine.
I call you Laura but you're not human. You are just a diary. A dumb diary which can't reply. But you are my diary, it's the most important !
My name is Grace, I'm 15. I'm English, I live in London. I have a sister : Kitty. She's 10.
I have a boyfriend named John. He is so handsome, so clever ! Me, I don't work good at school...
My bestfriend is Lucy, she is 15, like me.
I love every body, except Ariane. She is too clever, too pretty, and she is French!
Kisses
Grace
Réponse: My diary/Thème de violet91, postée le 11-04-2010 à 15:32:16 (S | E)
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Hello, dear tulipe12, audacieuse petite bordelaise!!Well done, a second go!..
My private diary.*
Dear Laura,
How are you getting on ? I am fine.
Let me call you Laura although you aren't a human being. Just a diary, you are, aren't you ? Silly thing which can't answer me back, then! Anyway, you ARE my diary and that is (already) great!
My name is Grace . I am English and I live in London. I've got a sister : Kitty. She is ten-year(s)-old.
I've got a boyfriend whose name is John. He is so cute ,so bright !
I'm not actually doing well at school , you know.
My best friend is Lucy : she is fifteen too, just like me. I am friendly with everybody but (that) Ariane. Honestly, she is just too clever, too beautiful (attractive)...and guess what ?...she is French !
Love from Grace. XXX
* J'insiste volontairement sur la notion de "privacy"..certains parents racontent y mettre le nez!! Horrid!!
Thank you for this sweet text.
Réponse: My diary/Thème de dolfine56, postée le 11-04-2010 à 18:38:56 (S | E)
Hello petite Tulipe
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My private diary
Dear Laura,
How are you?I'm fine.
I call you Laura although you aren't a human being. you only are a diary, a stunned diary ,not able to answer.But you are my own diary,it's the most important!
My name is Grace,I'm fifteen years old,I'm English and live in london. I have got a sister: Kitty,she is ten; I have got a boyfriend,called John.He is so handsome,so clever!I don't work hard enough at school...
My best friend is Lucy,she is fifteen too,like me.
I like everybody but Ariane. She is too clever,too lovely and , what's more, she is French!
love
Grace.
thanks for this new one.
Réponse: My diary/Thème de lucile83, postée le 13-04-2010 à 05:51:57 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Merci de noter que tulipe a avancé la date de sa correction au 16 avril
Réponse: My diary/Thème de prescott, postée le 13-04-2010 à 10:24:55 (S | E)
Bonjour Tulipe,
Une douzième tulipe à fleuri dans mon jardinet ce matin, c'était un signe qu'il était grand temps to "pay you a visit".
Bravo pour tes efforts pour rendre le site encore plus agréable et... studieux!
XXX,
Uncle Scott.
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My first diary
Dear...
'Laura,How are you doing, mate?
As for me, I'm fine.
I'll call you Laura, even though you're not human.
You may be just a diary, a stupid notebook that cannot answer back, but you're Mine, and that makes you unique!
My name is Grace. I'm 15. I'm English and I live in London.
I've got a sister named Kitty. She is 10.
I've also got a boyfriend whose name is...John!
He's so handsome, so brilliant!
Myself, I am not doing so well at school...
My best friend is Lucy. She's 15, like me.
Actually, I like everyone... uh, except Ariane
.She is too beautiful, too clever and, to crown it all, she's French!
Love XXX
Grace Kelly
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Réponse: My diary/Thème de julie85, postée le 13-04-2010 à 14:08:48 (S | E)
Bonjour Tulipe ,
Merci pour ce petit exercice
My diary.
Dear Laura,
How are you? Me, I'm fine.
I call you Laura but you are not a human. You're only a diary. A stupid diary which can't answer. But you are my diary, that's the most important!
My name is Grace. I'm 15. I'm British, I live in London. I have got a sister : Kitty. She's 10.
I have got a boyfriend who is called John. He's so beautiful, so clever! Me, I don't work good at school...
My best friend is Lucy, she's 15, like me. I like everybody, except Ariane. She's too clever, too pretty, and she's French!
Love,
Grace
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2010 18:43
Retrait des bugs.Mise en page standard.
Réponse: My diary/Thème de eos17, postée le 13-04-2010 à 14:23:19 (S | E)
hello Tulip
My diary
Dear Laura
How are you ? Me, I'm fine .
I call you Laura but you aren't a human being .You 're just a diary .A stupid diary that is unable to answer .But you're my diary ,this is the most important !
My name is Grace,I'm fifteen years old.I'm English, I live in London .I have got a sister:Kitty.She 's ten years .
I have got a boyfriend whose name is John.He's so good-looking,so bright!Me,I'm not working very well at school...
My best friend is Lucy,fifteen years old like me .
I like everybody except Ariane .She's too clever ,too beautiful and what's more she 's French!
Kisses.
Grace
and 
for the translation .Réponse: My diary/Thème de vanou2, postée le 13-04-2010 à 14:32:56 (S | E)
Good morning
je suis une débutante et je vais oser parce qu'il le faut pour avancer.
Dear Laura
how why you i am fine
i call you laue but you not human
you are a journal;a journal stupide whose not speak,but you are a jounalis it is so must important
my name is grace i have fiftyold i live in london.i have a brother:katy she has ten old
i have as small friend who name is john,he is a beautiful,more intelligent;me i have not work good in scholl
my best friens is lucie she has fifty old like me
i love every body excep ariane.she is must intelligent;must beautiful,and she is french
love
grace
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-04-2010 18:46
Réponse: My diary/Thème de moony59, postée le 13-04-2010 à 19:00:40 (S | E)
Hello tulipe,
My private diary
Dear Laura,
How are you? I'm fine.
I call you Laura but you're not human. You're only a diary. A stupid book which is not able to talk. But you're my diary,it's the most important.
My name is Grace, I'm 15. I'm English and live in London. I've got one sister:Kitty. She's 10.
I've got a boyfriend who is called John. He is so handsome,so smart!I don't work well at school...
My best friend is Lucy. She's 15 like me.
I like everybody but Ariane. She's too clever, too beautiful, and she's French!
Kisses!
Grace.
tulipe! Very nice!Réponse: My diary/Thème de violette19, postée le 13-04-2010 à 19:11:35 (S | E)
Hello tulip!My diary
Dear Laura
How are you ? As for me, I’m well.
I name you Laura but you’re not a human being . You’re only a diary. A silly diary, unable to reply . But you’re mine, that’s the most important thing !
My name is Grace, I’m fifteen years old. I’m English, I live in London . I have a sister: Kitty . She ’s ten years old .
I have a boyfriend whose name is John . He’s so handsome, so clever ! I do not well at school …
My best friend is Lucy, she’s fifteen years old, as I am .
I like everybody but Ariane . She’s too clever, too beautiful, and more... she is French !
Kisses from Grace
Réponse: My diary/Thème de tulipe12, postée le 16-04-2010 à 10:09:15 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici la correction.
My diary
Dear Laura,
How are you ? I'm quite fine.
I call you Laura but you're not a human being. You're just a diary. A stupid diary that can't answer. But you're my diary, it's the most important thing !
My name is Grace, I'm 15 . I'm English and I live in London. I've got one sister : Kitty. She is 10 .
I have got a boyfriend whose name is John. He's so handsome, so intelligent ! Actually, I am not doing very well at school.
My best friend is Lucy. She is 15, like me.
I like everybody, except Ariane. She is too intelligent, too beautiful, and she is French !
Love,
Grace
Merci à tous (et à toutes)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-04-2010 16:27
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