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Message de piixl0wnd posté le 31-03-2010 à 19:15:50 (S | E | F)
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ceci ?
Gorillas are African monkeys who measure 1,2 in 1,8m and who weigh from 135 to 220 kg. They feed especially on leaves and are thus omnivores. However, gorillas are endangered because of the illegal cutting down of forests and poaching.
Dian Fossey was a scientist who fights for the conservation of the gorillas of mountains and who looked like to have a relation very fusionnelle with them. She studied them and takes care of them to avoid the poaching.
Je vous remercie par avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-03-2010 19:22
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Message de piixl0wnd posté le 31-03-2010 à 19:15:50 (S | E | F)
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ceci ?Gorillas are African monkeys who measure 1,2 in 1,8m and who weigh from 135 to 220 kg. They feed especially on leaves and are thus omnivores. However, gorillas are endangered because of the illegal cutting down of forests and poaching.
Dian Fossey was a scientist who fights for the conservation of the gorillas of mountains and who looked like to have a relation very fusionnelle with them. She studied them and takes care of them to avoid the poaching.
Je vous remercie par avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-03-2010 19:22
titre en minuscules + couleur du texte
Réponse: Correction/Gorillas de headway, postée le 31-03-2010 à 19:42:16 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici ma modeste contribution:
"Gorillas are African monkeys(ce sont de grands singes, donc il faudrait trouver un autre mot) who measure 1,2 in 1,8m and who weigh from 135 to 220 kg. They feed(pas le bon verbe) especially on leaves and are thus omnivores. However, gorillas are endangered because of the illegal cutting down of forests and poaching.
Dian Fossey was a scientist(tu pourrais mentionner sa spécialité) who fights(pas le bon temps) for the conservation of the gorillas of mountains and who looked like to have a relation very fusionnelle(ça, c'est en français ;) ) with them. She studied them and takes care of them to avoid the poaching."
Bonne soirée
Réponse: Correction/Gorillas de robertbrou, postée le 31-03-2010 à 19:49:32 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Gorillas are African monkeys who measure 1,2 in (mot incorrect) 1,8m and who weigh from 135 to 220 kg. They feed especially on leaves and are thus omnivores (omni-=mange tout/herbi-=mange que des plantes/carni-=mange que de viande). However, gorillas are endangered because of the illegal cutting down of forests and poaching.
Dian Fossey was a scientist who fights (temps) for the conservation of the gorillas
Hope this helps!
Réponse: Correction/Gorillas de piixl0wnd, postée le 31-03-2010 à 20:06:13 (S | E)
ÉNORME MERCI POUR VOTRE AIDE QUI M'A ÉTÉ TRÈS UTILE !
Réponse: Correction/Gorillas de lamy, postée le 31-03-2010 à 21:28:30 (S | E)
Gorillas are African monkeys who measure 1,2 in (mot incorrect) 1,8m and who weigh from 135 to 220 kg. They feed especially on leaves and are thus omnivores. However, gorillas are endangered because of the illegal cutting down of forests and poaching.
Dian Fossey was a scientist who fought for the conservation of the mountain gorillas and who (looked like = ressembler; plutôt ) was looking for a passionate relationship with them. She studied them and took care of them to avoid poaching.
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