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Message de louciie-13 posté le 28-03-2010 à 11:28:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'avais une petite rédaction à faire sur le film Mississippi Burning en anglais. J'aimerais juste savoir si il y a des fautes dans mon devoir, même si je pense l'avoir bien réussi ! Merci !
This movie works advances a difficult subject that is the racism in the South of the United States in the 1960s. The story is inspired by real facts and is there only more authentic and deeply moving. Indeed, this movie is alarming and disturbing at the same time. I am shocked to see so much intolerance and inhumanity. The intrigue is fascinating.
It is the movie which makes think about a terrible subject: the racism, the KKK... Very poignant, with scenes stages full of realism, very violent and shocking. The segregation in the South of the United States is hideous. I remained to shock when men of the KKK strike innocents, when the man is hung and when the little boy is made beat up. A movie shock, not because it shows a terrible violence but because it reveals us a whole psychology, a society of the racism.
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Message de louciie-13 posté le 28-03-2010 à 11:28:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'avais une petite rédaction à faire sur le film Mississippi Burning en anglais. J'aimerais juste savoir si il y a des fautes dans mon devoir, même si je pense l'avoir bien réussi ! Merci !
This movie works advances a difficult subject that is the racism in the South of the United States in the 1960s. The story is inspired by real facts and is there only more authentic and deeply moving. Indeed, this movie is alarming and disturbing at the same time. I am shocked to see so much intolerance and inhumanity. The intrigue is fascinating.
It is the movie which makes think about a terrible subject: the racism, the KKK... Very poignant, with scenes stages full of realism, very violent and shocking. The segregation in the South of the United States is hideous. I remained to shock when men of the KKK strike innocents, when the man is hung and when the little boy is made beat up. A movie shock, not because it shows a terrible violence but because it reveals us a whole psychology, a society of the racism.
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Modifié par bridg le 28-03-2010 11:35
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Réponse: Mississippi Burning/correction de ricou81, postée le 29-03-2010 à 16:26:22 (S | E)
Bonjour
déjà racism sans article
et the little boy is beaten up
bon courage
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