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Message de epinay posté le 10-03-2010 à 21:45:00 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Somebody can say Could you tell me please if my description is correct and if possible to give ideas for so that my text is would be interesting please, thank you in advance.
My sister bought a house with two floors, and a back garden and front of a yard.During the holidays I helped her, there is a lot of work.
Between my work and to help my sister I have no time for me.
Best Wishes
Epinay
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2010 21:57
Nous corrigeons ce que vous avez écrit; nous ne trouvons pas les idées pour vous.
Message de epinay posté le 10-03-2010 à 21:45:00 (S | E | F)
Hello,My sister bought a house with two floors, and a back garden and front of a yard.During the holidays I helped her, there is a lot of work.
Between my work and to help my sister I have no time for me.
Best Wishes
Epinay
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-03-2010 21:57
Nous corrigeons ce que vous avez écrit; nous ne trouvons pas les idées pour vous.
Réponse: Correction/Just to describe de epinay, postée le 10-03-2010 à 22:10:16 (S | E)
Hello again,
Could you tell me if my way of description is correct please?
And if you find that my idas are good without angry, thanks.
regard
Epinay
Réponse: Correction/Just to describe de gerondif, postée le 10-03-2010 à 23:30:53 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
My sister bought a house with two floors,
Between my work and helping my sister I have no time left for myself.
You could give more details, and what you think of her house.
Réponse: Correction/Just to describe de headway, postée le 11-03-2010 à 08:39:53 (S | E)
Bonjour,
a house with two floors would be "a two-storey house"
Regards.
Réponse: Correction/Just to describe de epinay, postée le 11-03-2010 à 15:18:42 (S | E)
Hello, Gerondif and hello Headway
Thank you Headway for the correction which helped me.
Gerondif hello again, I wanted to describe the house, which my sister has just bought
because it is bigger than that of my brother and more beautiful to my neighbour who knew the family simply.
I'd like to improve my dialogue.
Best Wishes
Epinay
Réponse: Correction/Just to describe de epinay, postée le 11-03-2010 à 21:40:35 (S | E)
Hello Gerondif,
Sorry , I forgot I thank your for the corrections also.
Best Wishes
Epinay
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