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A hero
Message de piixl0wnd posté le 03-03-2010 à 18:25:28 (S | E | F)
!!Bonjour
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes ? Merci par avance !
This man looks like a hero because he is proud and very upright. Furthermore, he looks in height what shows ihis desire to be ready at any time for any mission. The used angle is the low-angle shot. Therefore, the hero is bigger and dominates us. A hero must be brave and determined. He also risk his life to save that of the others. A hero can be a politician or a singer who marks the history by its words or his actions. A hero is an example to be followed because he helps the society.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-03-2010 18:35
Message de piixl0wnd posté le 03-03-2010 à 18:25:28 (S | E | F)
!!BonjourPouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes ? Merci par avance !
This man looks like a hero because he is proud and very upright. Furthermore, he looks in height what shows ihis desire to be ready at any time for any mission. The used angle is the low-angle shot. Therefore, the hero is bigger and dominates us. A hero must be brave and determined. He also risk his life to save that of the others. A hero can be a politician or a singer who marks the history by its words or his actions. A hero is an example to be followed because he helps the society.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-03-2010 18:35
Réponse: A hero de laure95, postée le 03-03-2010 à 18:37:51 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voici ce que tu dois corriger:
This man looks like a hero because he is proud and very upright. Furthermore, he looks in height (je ne comprends pas) what (pas le bon pronom relatif) shows ihis (faute de frappe) desire to be ready at any time for any mission. The used angle is the low-angle shot. Therefore, the hero is bigger and dominates us. A hero must be brave and determined. He also risk (conjugaison) his life to save that of the others. A hero can be a politician or a singer who marks the history by its (pas le bon possessif) words or
Réponse: A hero de piixl0wnd, postée le 03-03-2010 à 18:59:55 (S | E)
pour votre aide ! Qui m'a été très utile ! -------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 03-03-2010 19:01
Couleur du texte.
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