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Correction/more or less affinity
Message de scar95 posté le 14-02-2010 à 11:27:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un devoir maison d'anglais à rendre pour demain. Je l'ai entièrement terminé mais j'aimerais avoir votre aide pour rectifier quelques erreurs que j'aurais pu oublier.
Voilà merci de votre aide !!
The fact to be in continuously with people whom one has more or less affinity, fail to exercise , are obstacles that all students have already encountered.
early 2007, I joined the highschool Evariste Galois. the year before, I had studied at persan's college.Dans this college, I was one of the best students I got very good exam results. I felt very comfortable in my classroom where I had many friends . But on my arrival at school, I was very disoriented.I knew absolutely no one in my new class and being highly shy, making friends seemed me impossible. It was a very difficult for me and this is felt in my school résults, which have sharply fell. Over time, I tried so overcoming my shyness and speak out to others. So I have learned to be more sociable. . I think that having overcome my shyness at school made me stronger,I have much confidence in my capacity . This difficult time procured me from the experience, and this experience will serve me in the future.
However my results was always disastrous. Yet I really think I was providing a serious work but my results didn't reflect him. And at year end , despite a council of intensification, I decided to switch terminal. I was back to the wall opposite my responsabilities.today, my results have improved significantly. For the moment I have absolutely no regrets for dropping in terminal. Certainly, there are still subjects or I'm not level, in particular English, but I try to hang on and I see that my level is better.It is why I really think this year was a real obstacle for me. The failure of a year made me stronger, I took consience the importance of my studies and this made me grow up.
Overcome these obstacles made me stronger, I gained experience and this experience will help me in future years
En espèrant avoir une réponserapide 
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2010 11:29
Pas d'urgence sur le site,merci!
Message de scar95 posté le 14-02-2010 à 11:27:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un devoir maison d'anglais à rendre pour demain. Je l'ai entièrement terminé mais j'aimerais avoir votre aide pour rectifier quelques erreurs que j'aurais pu oublier.
Voilà merci de votre aide !!
The fact to be in continuously with people whom one has more or less affinity, fail to exercise , are obstacles that all students have already encountered.
early 2007, I joined the highschool Evariste Galois. the year before, I had studied at persan's college.Dans this college, I was one of the best students I got very good exam results. I felt very comfortable in my classroom where I had many friends . But on my arrival at school, I was very disoriented.I knew absolutely no one in my new class and being highly shy, making friends seemed me impossible. It was a very difficult for me and this is felt in my school résults, which have sharply fell. Over time, I tried so overcoming my shyness and speak out to others. So I have learned to be more sociable. . I think that having overcome my shyness at school made me stronger,I have much confidence in my capacity . This difficult time procured me from the experience, and this experience will serve me in the future.
However my results was always disastrous. Yet I really think I was providing a serious work but my results didn't reflect him. And at year end , despite a council of intensification, I decided to switch terminal. I was back to the wall opposite my responsabilities.today, my results have improved significantly. For the moment I have absolutely no regrets for dropping in terminal. Certainly, there are still subjects or I'm not level, in particular English, but I try to hang on and I see that my level is better.It is why I really think this year was a real obstacle for me. The failure of a year made me stronger, I took consience the importance of my studies and this made me grow up.
Overcome these obstacles made me stronger, I gained experience and this experience will help me in future years
En espèrant avoir une réponse
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-02-2010 11:29
Pas d'urgence sur le site,merci!
Réponse: Correction/more or less affinity de scar95, postée le 14-02-2010 à 11:34:59 (S | E)
Oups désolé !!
Réponse: Correction/more or less affinity de scar95, postée le 14-02-2010 à 12:41:59 (S | E)
personne pour m'aider?
Réponse: Correction/more or less affinity de laure95, postée le 14-02-2010 à 14:38:35 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je vais t'aider en t'indiquant ce que tu dois corriger:
The fact to be
In early 2007, I joined the highschool (à mettre après le nom de l'école) Evariste Galois. the year before, I had studied at persan's college (chercher l'équivalent anglais). Dans
this college, I was one of the best students (mettre un point) I got very good exam results. I felt very comfortable (pas le bon mot pour ce contexte) in my classroom where I had many friends . But on my arrival (faire 1 construction S + V) at school, I was very disoriented (orthographe). I knew absolutely no one in my new class and being highly shy, making friends seemed to me impossible. It was However my results was (conjugaison) always disastrous. Yet I really think I was providing a serious work but my results didn't reflect him ?. And at year end (the end of the year) , despite a council of intensification, I decided to switch terminal. I was back to the wall opposite my responsabilities.today, my results have improved significantly. For the moment I have absolutely no regrets for dropping in terminal. Certainly, there are still subjects or I'm not level, in particular English, but I try to hang on and I see (can notice) that my level is better.It (that ou this) is why I really think this year was a real obstacle for me. The failure of a year made me stronger, I took consience of the importance of my studies and this (that) made me grow up.
to Overcome these (those) obstacles made me stronger, I gained experience and this experience will help me in future years (tu l'as déjà dit)
Réponse: Correction/more or less affinity de scar95, postée le 14-02-2010 à 14:53:59 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de me répondre, cela va m'être très utile et je vous en suis très reconnaissant.
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