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Message de charlemagne91 posté le 06-02-2010 à 11:45:49 (S | E | F)
bonjour,
pouvez vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît? Merci pour votre aide.
Shall I marry him ?
« My dear Louisa, said the father, I will invite my best friend, mister Bonderby for tea. »
“Father, returned Louisa, I am at loss and a little afraid of Mr Bounderby.”
“But he is very friendly. I think you are heartbroken and…”
“I am just a little disconcerted!”
The next day, Mr B. went to Louisa’s house.
‘Good afternoon, said louisa, and nice to see you!”
“Oh, you are a nice girl, returned he. I am Mr.B., a very romantic man, and you?”
“I am your future woman, said Louisa”
“It’s the fate, said Mr gragdgrind bewildered. Do you love Mr B. asked he.
“Yes father, he is beautiful!”
“And you, do you love Louisa, returned he”
“I am in two minds, returned the old man but…yes, I think.”
A servant brought some chocolate and a cup of tea for Mr. B. merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 06-02-2010 12:20
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Message de charlemagne91 posté le 06-02-2010 à 11:45:49 (S | E | F)
bonjour,
pouvez vous m'aider à corriger ce texte s'il vous plaît? Merci pour votre aide.
Shall I marry him ?
« My dear Louisa, said the father, I will invite my best friend, mister Bonderby for tea. »
“Father, returned Louisa, I am at loss and a little afraid of Mr Bounderby.”
“But he is very friendly. I think you are heartbroken and…”
“I am just a little disconcerted!”
The next day, Mr B. went to Louisa’s house.
‘Good afternoon, said louisa, and nice to see you!”
“Oh, you are a nice girl, returned he. I am Mr.B., a very romantic man, and you?”
“I am your future woman, said Louisa”
“It’s the fate, said Mr gragdgrind bewildered. Do you love Mr B. asked he.
“Yes father, he is beautiful!”
“And you, do you love Louisa, returned he”
“I am in two minds, returned the old man but…yes, I think.”
A servant brought some chocolate and a cup of tea for Mr. B. merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 06-02-2010 12:20
Ne perdez pas les bonnes habitdes.
Titre
Réponse: Shall I marry him /Correction de laure95, postée le 07-02-2010 à 17:50:50 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voici ce que tu dois reprendre:
Shall I marry him ?
« My dear Louisa, said the (utiliser un possessif) father, I will invite my best friend, mister Bonderby for teatime. »
“Father, returned (pas le bon verbe) Louisa, I am at loss and a little afraid of Mr Bounderby.”
“But he is very friendly. I think you are heartbroken and…”
“I am just a little disconcerted!”
The next day, Mr B. went to Louisa’s house.
‘Good afternoon, said louisa, and nice to see you!”
“Oh, you are a nice girl, returned he. I am Mr.B., a very romantic man, and you?”
“I am your future woman (chercher le mot épouse), said Louisa”
“It’s the fate, said Mr gragdgrind bewildered. Do you love Mr B. asked he (inverser l'ordre des mots).
“Yes father, he is beautiful!”
“And you, do you love Louisa, returned he”
“I am in two minds, returned the old man but…yes, I think.”
A servant brought some chocolate and a cup of tea for Mr. B.
Réponse: Shall I marry him /Correction de oxfordsorbonne, postée le 07-02-2010 à 18:00:14 (S | E)
Shall I marry him?
"My dear Louisa," said the father, I will invite my best friend, mister Bonderby for tea. "
"Father, returned Louisa, I am at a Loss and a little afraid of Mr Bounderby."
"But he is very friendly. I think you are heartbroken and ..."
"I am just a little disconcerted!"
The next day, Mr B. went to Louisa's house.
'Good afternoon, said Louisa, and nice to see you! "
"Oh, you are a nice girl, he returned. Mr.B. I am, a very romantic man, and you?"
"I am your future wife , said Louisa"
"It's the fate, said Mr gragdgrind bewildered. Do you love Mr. B. he asked.
"Yes father, he is beautiful!"
"And you, do you love Louisa, he returned"
"I am in two minds, returned the old man but ... yes, I think."
A serving brought some chocolate and a cup of tea for Mr. B. thank you in advance
Réponse: Shall I marry him /Correction de charlemagne91, postée le 07-02-2010 à 18:45:11 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide.
C'est très gentil d'aider comme vous le faites!
bonne soirée
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