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Message de choupinette0 posté le 03-02-2010 à 18:19:52 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je dois traiter un sujet pour mon exposé qui est le suivant : L'art Aborigène .
J'ai fait un texte & j'aimerais voir si cela est incorrect & ' peut-être ' me corriger certaines de mes fautes .
Je vous remercie .
Voici le texte : So, I'm going to deal about the Aborigenes art .
The Aborigenes art is the oldest tradition in the world.
The Art is a key element in the Aboriginal culture.
They sing, dance, paint...Etc.
Almost always, traditional Aboriginal art relates to dream time that 500 years ago.
The dream time explains their origins, and that of the Australia.
The aborigines are remarkable painters, on bark in the northern territories on tissues and paintings on the side of the desert Central.
The drawings and figures which they paint have meaning with Mythology of the dream and that can be assimilated for a form of writing.
And most indigenous works were ephemeral: bodily paintings, drawings on the sand, plant paintings ground... AT starting the years 1970,. the aborigines have used acrylic paint on canvas.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-02-2010 18:43
Message de choupinette0 posté le 03-02-2010 à 18:19:52 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je dois traiter un sujet pour mon exposé qui est le suivant : L'art Aborigène .
J'ai fait un texte & j'aimerais voir si cela est incorrect & ' peut-être ' me corriger certaines de mes fautes .
Je vous remercie .
Voici le texte : So, I'm going to deal about the Aborigenes art .
The Aborigenes art is the oldest tradition in the world.
The Art is a key element in the Aboriginal culture.
They sing, dance, paint...Etc.
Almost always, traditional Aboriginal art relates to dream time that 500 years ago.
The dream time explains their origins, and that of the Australia.
The aborigines are remarkable painters, on bark in the northern territories on tissues and paintings on the side of the desert Central.
The drawings and figures which they paint have meaning with Mythology of the dream and that can be assimilated for a form of writing.
And most indigenous works were ephemeral: bodily paintings, drawings on the sand, plant paintings ground... AT starting the years 1970,. the aborigines have used acrylic paint on canvas.
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Modifié par bridg le 03-02-2010 18:43
Réponse: Correction & Aide pour un texte -) de laure95, postée le 04-02-2010 à 11:08:38 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici ce que tu dois reprendre:
So, I'm going to deal about (with) the Aborigenes (mettre l'adjectif) art .
The Aborigenes art is the oldest tradition in the world.
They sing, dance, paint...Etc.
Almost always (pas à la bonne place), traditional Aboriginal art relates to dream time that (il manque 1 verbe ua prétérit)500 years ago.
The dream time explains their origins, and that of
The aborigines are remarkable painters, on bark ? in the northern territories on tissues and paintings on the side of ? the desert Central (inverser l'ordre des mots). The drawings and figures
And most indigenous works were ephemeral: bodily (body?) paintings, drawings on the sand, plant paintings ground ?... AT starting the years (utiliser 1 construction verbale: sujet + verbe conjugué)1970,. the aborigines have used acrylic paint on canvas.
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