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Message de dorine-paris posté le 28-01-2010 à 19:01:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois rendre un biographie en anglais, et savoir quelles fautes j'ai faites.
Biography of Marilyn Monroe
Norma Jeane Baker, who is known under the name Marilyn Monroe, was an actress and singer who was born on 1 June 1926.
After a difficult childhood during which she lived in many adoptive family, Marilyn began a life of a young housewife with her husband James Dougherty, before register in a modeling agency, divorced in 1946, then start a career cinema.
She played in several small films before sign a seven-year contract with 20th Century Fox, which enabled it to be directed by Fritz Lang and Howard Hawks.
'Niagara' in 1953, broke his image of blonde superficial.
The same year she married the player Baseball Joe DiMaggio, whose she divorced a few months later.
After that, she has accumulated success, mainly comedies signed the great masters as Howard Hawks, ( 'Gentlemen Prefer Blondes' 1953), or Billy Wilder ( "Seven Year Itch '1955 and' Some Like It Hot '1959).
Marilyn followed at this time courses the Lee Strasberg at the Actors Studio.
'Bus Stop' in 1956 and 'The River of No Return' in 1954 have confirmed his talent as an actress.
In 1956 she married the famous playwright Arthur Miller, but 5 years later they divorced.
In 1961 Marilyn incarnated a break heroine in 'The Misfits'.
Depressive, she is one a plateau a one year later to begin shooting a film she has never ending, 'Something's Got to Give' by George Cukor.
She died August 5, 1962 at the age of 36, victim of an overdose of barbiturates. The investigation found a suicide.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 28-01-2010 19:20
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Message de dorine-paris posté le 28-01-2010 à 19:01:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois rendre un biographie en anglais, et savoir quelles fautes j'ai faites.
Biography of Marilyn Monroe
Norma Jeane Baker, who is known under the name Marilyn Monroe, was an actress and singer who was born on 1 June 1926.
After a difficult childhood during which she lived in many adoptive family, Marilyn began a life of a young housewife with her husband James Dougherty, before register in a modeling agency, divorced in 1946, then start a career cinema.
She played in several small films before sign a seven-year contract with 20th Century Fox, which enabled it to be directed by Fritz Lang and Howard Hawks.
'Niagara' in 1953, broke his image of blonde superficial.
The same year she married the player Baseball Joe DiMaggio, whose she divorced a few months later.
After that, she has accumulated success, mainly comedies signed the great masters as Howard Hawks, ( 'Gentlemen Prefer Blondes' 1953), or Billy Wilder ( "Seven Year Itch '1955 and' Some Like It Hot '1959).
Marilyn followed at this time courses the Lee Strasberg at the Actors Studio.
'Bus Stop' in 1956 and 'The River of No Return' in 1954 have confirmed his talent as an actress.
In 1956 she married the famous playwright Arthur Miller, but 5 years later they divorced.
In 1961 Marilyn incarnated a break heroine in 'The Misfits'.
Depressive, she is one a plateau a one year later to begin shooting a film she has never ending, 'Something's Got to Give' by George Cukor.
She died August 5, 1962 at the age of 36, victim of an overdose of barbiturates. The investigation found a suicide.
Merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 28-01-2010 19:20
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Réponse: Marilyn Monroe/Biographie/correction de gerondif, postée le 28-01-2010 à 19:45:36 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Règlez votre traduction ou votre traducteur pour que Norma Jean Baker soit identifiée comme une femme et que les "his" deviennent "her"
"she is one a plateau a one year later " Que peut bien signifier cette phrase ? elle est un un plateau un une année plus tard ?
dont elle divorça ne se traduira pas par "whose"
"she has never ending" vous êtes sûre que cette conjugaison existe ?
je joins aux futurs correcteurs le texte internet:
Après une enfance chaotique durant laquelle elle vit dans plusieurs familles d'adoption, Norma Jeane Baker, alias Marilyn Monroe, entame très jeune une vie de femme au foyer avant de s'inscrire dans une agence de mannequins, puis d'entamer une carrière au cinéma. Elle joue dans quelques petits films avant de signer un contrat de sept ans avec la 20th Century Fox, ce qui lui permet d'être notamment dirigée par Fritz Lang et Howard Hawks. 'Niagara', en 1953, brise son image de blonde écervelée. La même année, elle se marie avec le joueur de base-ball Joe Di Maggio, dont elle divorce quelques mois plus tard. Dès lors, elle accumule les succès, principalement des comédies signées des grands maîtres du genre comme Howard Hawks, qui la dirige dans 'Les hommes préfèrent les blondes', ou Billy Wilder, pour 'Sept ans de réflexion' et 'Certains l'aiment chaud'. L'actrice suit à cette époque les cours de Lee Strasberg à l'Actors Studio. 'Arrêt d'autobus' et 'La Rivière sans retour' confirment ses talents de comédienne. Son mariage avec le dramaturge Arthur Miller achève de casser son image de femme idiote et superficielle. En 1961, Marilyn campe une héroïne brisée dans 'Les Désaxés'. Dépressive, elle retourne sur un plateau un an plus tard pour entamer le tournage d'un film qu'elle n'achèvera pas, 'Something's Got to Give' de George Cukor. Le matin du 5 août 1962, elle est retrouvée morte à son domicile. L'enquête conclut à un suicide,
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Modifié par gerondif le 29-01-2010 17:15
Réponse: Marilyn Monroe/Biographie/correction de robertbrou, postée le 29-01-2010 à 17:07:30 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici mes deux mots.
Norma Jeane Baker, who is known under the name Marilyn Monroe, was an actress and singer who was born on 1 June 1926 (placement).
After a difficult childhood during which she lived in many adoptive (utiliser foster) family (mettre au pluriel), Marilyn began a life
She played in several small films before sign (idem) a seven-year contract with 20th Century Fox, which enabled it (it=thing, her=person) to be directed by Fritz Lang and Howard Hawks.
'Niagara' in 1953, broke his (réf message de gerondif) image of blonde superficial (placement).
The same year she married
After that, she has accumulated success (mettre au pluriel), mainly comedies signed by the great masters as Howard Hawks, ( 'Gentlemen Prefer Blondes' 1953), or Billy Wilder ( "Seven Year Itch '1955 and' Some Like It Hot '1959).
Marilyn followed at this time (placement) courses the (with, under?) Lee Strasberg at the Actors Studio.
'Bus Stop' in 1956 and 'The River of No Return' in 1954 have confirmed his (réf message de gérondif) talent as an actress.
In 1956 she married the famous playwright Arthur Miller, but 5 years later they divorced.
In 1961 Marilyn incarnated a break (je ne saisis pas) heroine in 'The Misfits'.
Depressive (on dit Suffering from depression), she is (temps) one (orthographe) a plateau a one (choisir entre a et one) year later to begin shooting a film she has never ending (participe passé, utiliser synonyme), 'Something's Got to Give' by George Cukor.
She died August 5, 1962 at the age of 36, victim of an overdose of barbiturates. The investigation found (double cliquer sur conclure, n°1) that it was a suicide.
Hope this helps!
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