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Message de centrino posté le 22-01-2010 à 14:31:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je dois faire une présentation à l'oral en anglais pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes de syntaxe et changer les mots qui n'ont pas le bon sens? vous me serez d'une très grande aide, merci d'avance.
Hi my name is ........., and I will introduce myself my presentation will be in two parts.
Firstly I will tell you some information about me, my hobbies and family. Then I'm going to talk about my studies and my goals.
So I come from ....., now I live in Paris for studies. It's really a hard change for me. My father's name is Greg and he work in a restaurant. My mother is teacher in ???. I'm interested by Cinema and music, Particularly the rock music band, Like the doors or Pink Floyd.
Before my master, I've been graduated in Services and networks communication at the university of Paris. I have had the luck to made a work experience, which I found truly beneficial, in Barcelona during two months in an Association of Audiovisual production's. Then, I have chose The master way because i am interested by the picture communication.
After my studies, I would work for the TV or in an Advertising Enterprise in Paris
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-01-2010 14:39
Message de centrino posté le 22-01-2010 à 14:31:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je dois faire une présentation à l'oral en anglais pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes de syntaxe et changer les mots qui n'ont pas le bon sens? vous me serez d'une très grande aide, merci d'avance.
Hi my name is ........., and I will introduce myself my presentation will be in two parts.
Firstly I will tell you some information about me, my hobbies and family. Then I'm going to talk about my studies and my goals.
So I come from ....., now I live in Paris for studies. It's really a hard change for me. My father's name is Greg and he work in a restaurant. My mother is teacher in ???. I'm interested by Cinema and music, Particularly the rock music band, Like the doors or Pink Floyd.
Before my master, I've been graduated in Services and networks communication at the university of Paris. I have had the luck to made a work experience, which I found truly beneficial, in Barcelona during two months in an Association of Audiovisual production's. Then, I have chose The master way because i am interested by the picture communication.
After my studies, I would work for the TV or in an Advertising Enterprise in Paris
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-01-2010 14:39
Réponse: Aide pour texte/introduce myself de robertbrou, postée le 22-01-2010 à 15:30:33 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici mes suggestions. Faire attention au noms propres, à mettre aux initiales majuscules (sauf petits mots comme a, in, etc.)
Hi, my name is ........., and I will (utiliser conditionnel-aimerais me présenter) introduce myself. My presentation will be in two parts.
First
So I come from ...... Now I am living in Paris for my studies. It's really a hard change for me. My father's name is Greg and he work (accord sujet verbe) in a restaurant. My mother is (manque article indéfini) teacher in ???. I'm interested by (we are interested IN things) Cinema and music, Particularly
Before my master (au pluriel quand on parle du diplôme), I
After my studies, I would work (aimerais + verbe=would like to + verbe) for the TV (soit 'in television' indiquant le domaine, soit 'for a TV company') or in an Advertising Enterprise (pas un nom propre comme indiqué par l'article indéfini; normalement c'est advertising agency) in Paris
Hope this helps!
Réponse: Aide pour texte/introduce myself de centrino, postée le 22-01-2010 à 19:44:35 (S | E)
Je vous remercie pour votre précieuse aide, le principe de ce forum est très intéressant !
Merci encore ! et bonne soirée !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-01-2010 21:19
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