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Message de angel08 posté le 18-01-2010 à 16:41:19 (S | E | F)
J'ai écrit ce texte pour un devoir et je me demandais s'il y avait des fautes. Si quelqu'un pouvait y jeter un coup d'œil, Merci par avance.
Dear Mrs Jones,
Thank you for you enquiry about our holiday village.
The village is situated near the historical town of Chinon in the Loire valley, one of the most beautiful parts of France. There are 75 spacious, self-contained apartments, containing 4 to 8 people. The apartments is built around a central complex comprising a restaurant, a café, a gym, a dancing and a bar.
Possible activities available include fishing, canoeing, cycling and horse-riding. In answer to questions, all our instructors speak English very good. The region around the village is very interested, with many small towns and churches dating from the middle Ages.
As far as your journey here is concerned, you can driving from Cherbourg to Chinon for about 3 hours.
I hope that I have given you the information you need.
Yours faithfully
Message de angel08 posté le 18-01-2010 à 16:41:19 (S | E | F)
J'ai écrit ce texte pour un devoir et je me demandais s'il y avait des fautes. Si quelqu'un pouvait y jeter un coup d'œil, Merci par avance.
Dear Mrs Jones,
Thank you for you enquiry about our holiday village.
The village is situated near the historical town of Chinon in the Loire valley, one of the most beautiful parts of France. There are 75 spacious, self-contained apartments, containing 4 to 8 people. The apartments is built around a central complex comprising a restaurant, a café, a gym, a dancing and a bar.
Possible activities available include fishing, canoeing, cycling and horse-riding. In answer to questions, all our instructors speak English very good. The region around the village is very interested, with many small towns and churches dating from the middle Ages.
As far as your journey here is concerned, you can driving from Cherbourg to Chinon for about 3 hours.
I hope that I have given you the information you need.
Yours faithfully
Réponse: Correction de gerondif, postée le 18-01-2010 à 19:02:04 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Quelques accords à mettre.
Dear Mrs Jones,
Thank you for you enquiry about our holiday village.
The village is situated near the historical town of Chinon in the Loire valley, one of the most beautiful parts of France. There are 75 spacious, self-contained apartments, containing 4 to 8 people. The apartments is(pluriel) built around a central complex comprising a restaurant, a café, a gym, a dancing and a bar.
Possible activities available include fishing, canoeing, cycling and horse-riding. In answer to your questions, all our instructors speak English very good(ils parlent très bien, pas très bon). The region around the village is very interested(intéressante, pas interessée), with many small towns and churches dating from the Middle Ages.
As far as your journey here is concerned, you can driving(base verbale derrière can: you can correct this sentence) from Cherbourg to Chinon forin about 3 hours.
I hope that I have given you the information you need.
Yours faithfully
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