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Correction / I live in New-York
Message de l0urax posté le 17-01-2010 à 20:00:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un texte à faire corriger, ne vous fiez pas au contenu du texte, c'est un rôle que je dois jouer.
Merci d'avance.
Good morning, my name is Samantha Jones. I live in new-york, in manhattan. If I am there, it is not by change.. I come here for testify about charities. I lived an experience very bad on this subject there, when I was 22 years old, I have donate in one associations ( I would not quote the name) of 2000 dollars. 1 week later I see in the newspaper that this associations was only a swindle.. I have a very negative opinion about this issue. My opinion can shock numerous Americans.. I would define these of associations by " BIG SWINDLE ". I get up quite in mornings in 6times, me does not understand why I should work to pay to them later to eat or to drink. It's a shame I work non-stop, he should also make. There is the other thing which revolts me, they are all small homeless persons in the street with them small posters (please look I some money to eat).They have arms, legs! They can very well get up of them small pavements of streets to go to work or at least to try. Last week, I read in a magazine, two articles very interessant. The first one concerned two big stars Americans, angelina and brad pitt who have to give 3 millions in one associations and the second my fact to smile the title was " Ten charities diverted several million dollars ". And then I can't save all the poverty of the world, nobody can, I much better have to make. I have no time to occupy me of these " poor persons ". To shock even more the Americans, I am a poor girl with 3 dogs. And all my money will be them put back.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2010 21:04
Message de l0urax posté le 17-01-2010 à 20:00:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un texte à faire corriger, ne vous fiez pas au contenu du texte, c'est un rôle que je dois jouer.
Merci d'avance.
Good morning, my name is Samantha Jones. I live in new-york, in manhattan. If I am there, it is not by change.. I come here for testify about charities. I lived an experience very bad on this subject there, when I was 22 years old, I have donate in one associations ( I would not quote the name) of 2000 dollars. 1 week later I see in the newspaper that this associations was only a swindle.. I have a very negative opinion about this issue. My opinion can shock numerous Americans.. I would define these of associations by " BIG SWINDLE ". I get up quite in mornings in 6times, me does not understand why I should work to pay to them later to eat or to drink. It's a shame I work non-stop, he should also make. There is the other thing which revolts me, they are all small homeless persons in the street with them small posters (please look I some money to eat).They have arms, legs! They can very well get up of them small pavements of streets to go to work or at least to try. Last week, I read in a magazine, two articles very interessant. The first one concerned two big stars Americans, angelina and brad pitt who have to give 3 millions in one associations and the second my fact to smile the title was " Ten charities diverted several million dollars ". And then I can't save all the poverty of the world, nobody can, I much better have to make. I have no time to occupy me of these " poor persons ". To shock even more the Americans, I am a poor girl with 3 dogs. And all my money will be them put back.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2010 21:04
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